| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 02, 2008 15:43 CDT
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kawaii!!! The cure to the poison just blossomed right?? cant wait for an epilogue!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's not closure! Will InuYasha live? Is that the desert flower? What about the hunt for the flower? I don't what this to end!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice finish. I truly hope that that flower is what I think it is. After all they've gone through (especially Inuyasha), those two certainly deserve to be happy. I can't wait to read the epilogue.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 17:39 CDT
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Great chapter! I can't wait for the epilogue!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 17:34 CDT
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i liked the way you likened the 'love scene' to the storm raging above them. i'm not one to read the nitty gritty 'blow by blow' lemon, give me the titillation of the buildup then fade to the waves crashing on the shore... like the 1930's-50's movies. i think you handled that perfectly, enough of a tease to know what they were doing and the storm analogy to express the passion of the lovers. now that was HOT! way back in vaudeville they had this thing called 'strip tease' a dancer would move seductively to some suggestive music and act like she was undressing, ending with maybe a glimpse of a shoulder or the swell of the calf... not like today where they spread their legs and genitals, it was a tease, the titillation of mystery in what was left covered. . . amazing story, one wonders if she could possibly visit her mother, introduce yasha and the girls and then go back to his world. her mama would love to know she was still alive and well. ~ thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination, ginny
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 15:19 CDT
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this is so cool! I'm so reading this again once it' finished! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome is staying with inuyasha... and in the end seems that the tiny flower might be the cure to inuyasha's poison - hope so... looking forward to the epilogue... hope it's a happy ending... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha got kagome back and also his other daughter... is naraku really gone? - hope so... inuyasha actually confessed that he loved kagome... now if only he can tell it to kagome... will kagome return to her world or stay with inuyasha... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 13:35 CDT
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Oh my, I don't know how I missed this one, seeing that I read both Bad Influences and Nightwalker. I read it over three days, and I really can say that I enjoyed it! But oh! Unless you have some surprise planned for us, Inuyasha is STILL going to die from the Miasma.. no, wait, with Naraku gone, it got cleaned out too, huh? *snickers* Something tells me my memory isn't at its best at 3AM. But ah! I was so sad to see Levion and Jordan go! And little Silva is so very lovable. Good work on this one too, I'll be looking forward to your epilogue - after all, Kagome still has to make her decision.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl (not logged in) On: June 10, 2008 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chappie! I really can't wait to read more of it!
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Reviewed By: hans359 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 23:30 CDT
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This is an amazing story. I think that you can write better than some people when you have writers block and they have all their inspiration at their fingertips. I also love your story bad influence and am surprised you could write two amazing fics at once. please update
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Reviewed By: 123 de oliveira 4 On: June 04, 2008 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfull!!! Please don't take so long in the next update!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I am so glad that they were finally able to kill Naraku's evil butt! There are few characters who deserved to die as much as he did. And you gave us a bonus, making Kanna Inuyasha's other long-lost daughter. Nice twist with that. Speaking of Inuyasha, I sincerely hope that they can find some way to keep him from dying. It would be a crying shame if kagome chose to stay with him, only to find out that he would be dying soon. you definitely have some lose ends to tie up. I look forward to seeing how you do.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 16:56 CDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that School is over (for the moment any way... for you).. I Just realised that I posted last on March the 24 and no one has posted since after me (other than me)....
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