| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Title: Exceptional
Reviewed By: silver_angel_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story for the past 6 yrs. lol having to repeat chapters to remind myself and reread until the very end. Your story captivated me and left me wondering the whole way. I cried, I laughed, and I girlishly giggled...alot lol. I also found it HORRIBLY FANTASTIC that you left without a lemon. So hopefully all X-rated readers got a different sort of satisfaction from this. Thank you for sharing your world with us. I'm glad I finally got to see it's finish. Thank you again- oh and you really should consider becoming a screen-writer, you would surely make an awesome movie out of this story. GOOD LUCK!
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Title: BRAVO!!!!
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2010 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's Give The Author A Round Of Applause!!!!!!! Such and exciting tale! Such drama, such action, such tragedy, such turmoil. I loved everything about it. I laughed, I cried, and cried some more because it was so intense! I loved the ending too. Wonderful job! YOU ROCK THE WHOLE HOUSE!!!!!!!
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Title: Oh my God! T-T
Reviewed By: dogdemon-fetish15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2009 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! T-T this story has brought me into tears! This story has made laugh, cry, depressed, and excited... I'm so sad it ended... the end made me totally cry! ugh... can't stop the tears...
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Reviewed By: sunrai On: February 20, 2009 13:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!! And as much as I wanted a lemon it really wasn't needed. This story was awesome!!
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Title: Read whole thing
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the whole story (over a week) and really loved it. I wasa still confused how a heart can "drop" and all that - but it is an alternate universe. Since Kagome was having those images - didn't that mean she was Jordan's younger sister? That never got resolved. It's fine you didn't do a full "lemon" - it was sweet the way it was. I really wanted to go through and correct stuff - but I enjoyed it just the same. VERY original. Thank you for sharing your vision! Greaet story!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I absolutely loved this story and the ending was perfect! I look forward to reading more of your stories. Please keep writing your really good! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 22:35 CDT
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eh.... did Kagome's dreams about the underwater garden mean anything? .____. And did Inu get cured? or is he going to die .___. I feel as though you left a bunch of questions unanswered... See I had this whole idea that Kagome was originally from that world.... and that she was Jordan's younger sister whom was spirited away, and the underwater garden was a memory which would lead her to find the flower with which she could cure Inuyasha .______.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one if the best InuKag Fanfics that I hae eer read. It was beautifully written and I couldn't stop reading it. I stayed up to 3am reading becasuse I had to keep on reading. You keep saying in your author notes that you are a a littlle disappointed in your story and it wasn't that goo. But I eg to differ becasue this story kicked major ass. I'm story I hadn't fouund this story earlier. I's better than NIGHTWALKER no offence. Eventhogh NIGHTWALKER ALSO KICKS ASS, I THINK THIS STORY RULES.
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Reviewed By: rek {NSI} prchica4256@aol.com On: July 21, 2008 01:02 CDT
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Cute and simple ending. Left nothing wanted or needed. You did a great job creating this different story. Hope you can do more like this in the future. =D
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:36 CDT
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I can't believe the journey is over. It has been a favorite of mine for a long time. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 15:20 CDT
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Amazing Ending!! Keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 13:28 CDT
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a ... blast off the Earth story...but did the flower heal InuYasha? i'm not sure
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... nice happy ending... really liked it... seems that in the end the flower was inuyasha's cure?... cause in the epilogue he seems to be healthy?... cute that they have a son now too... good job... great work...
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Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 05:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend that was a wonderful chapter, heart renching i would say i cant wait for the epilogue. One would wonder what your going to do now cant wait for more stories
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 19:09 CDT
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I most definitly enjoyed this story. Was an one of a kind type. And cannot wait to see what you do next. =D
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