| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice part 2. But when oh when are they going to get together. I feel bad for Vincent, I hope he's okay when they break up. So is Alexander maybe jealous of Victoria? Hummm.... Maybe they will get together soon!
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Reviewed By: MizuhoK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK!!! I started this story last night, and now I'm just plain addicted to it!!! Seriously, I'm at Chapter 12, and love it! Keep it up, and I can't wait to finish it! Don't ever give up writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, Break his heart, whoever this "Vincent" guy is... Don't be so stubborn Kagomeeee go to InuYasha!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Timmy23 On: August 14, 2007 00:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and lets get Vincent out already she doen't even love him justusing him to get over yash. Update soon
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Reviewed By: TooLazyTooSignInButReallyForgotPassword...^^' On: August 14, 2007 00:02 EDT
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Sorry for the double post...damn computer...great story. Weee....-randomness terminated-
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Reviewed By: TooLazyTooSignInButReallyForgotPassword...^^' On: August 14, 2007 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I have to say this insn't your typical 'Kagome forgets InuYasha and then they meet and fall in love again...' story line. I just love all the emotion and sense of never knowing what will happen next. The whole fiance threw me for a loop, nearly broke my heart...*sniffles* Lawl. Great story though. They have a big family...kinda hard to remember who is whos child at times. Heh. The baby's first word thing was cute, can't think that Sesshoumaru would be too happy 'bout that. ^^. Cliffy...so suspenceful. Once more, the story is written beautifully and all.
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Reviewed By: TooLazyTooSignInButReallyForgotPassword...^^' On: August 14, 2007 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I have to say this insn't your typical 'Kagome forgets InuYasha and then they meet and fall in love again...' story line. I just love all the emotion and sense of never knowing what will happen next. The whole fiance threw me for a loop, nearly broke my heart...*sniffles* Lawl. Great story though. They have a big family...kinda hard to remember who is whos child at times. Heh. The baby's first word thing was cute, can't think that Sesshoumaru would be too happy 'bout that. ^^. Cliffy...so suspenceful. Once more, the story is written beautifully and all.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... it's getting good... feel bad for inuyasha though... as for kagome i'm glad akina saw her and scolded her at the airport... i must agree that kagome is acting stupidly childish and is just becoming annoying... hope kagome just wakes up... won't blame inuyasha if his treatment towards kagome is quite cold and distant like sesshomaru... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo I'm gonna slap you with a wet noodle now!!! Bad cliffie! BAD! :) You're awesome.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost cried. all the emotions in the last few chapters in addition to the fact that i just noticed there were three new chapters since the last time i read this story! the characterization in the story is amazing. it's fascinating to see the characters mature and encounter such obstacles. keep up the good work1
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update! It's almost painful *wimper* to read Inu being hurt so by Kag and I'm afraid he will never be able to give himself completely to her again! :( Please don't keep us waiting long!
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukai17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:51 EDT
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i agree with TERRIFIC. great story, but kagome is acting a little childish. to tell you the truth shes pissing me off a little cuz she knows that shes killing inuyasha by going with this vincent guy. her voice needs to knock her back into shape. again great story and im on edge waiting for the next chap. -_-o0O(you are killing me...) ... so write write write! XP
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Reviewed By: Chio [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my!!!!!!! You´re great, I didn´t imagine the man driving the car would be Inuyasha!!! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasgirlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:01 EDT
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Still can't believe that our beloved Kagome hasn't sitted InuBaka yet! She has GOT to do that sometime XD I loved the story, it was amazing. Please update soon, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! I must know what happens to Inu-chan!
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Title: TERRIFIC
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What a wonderful chapter. But I HATE Cliffys! Need part 2 please. I must know what happens next!!! Poor Inuyasha. Kagome is acting very childish. I hope she wises up soon. Our favorite couple need to be with each other. Love this story. Keep it coming. Please update soon. Not sure how long I can wait for part 2!!! LOL WONDERFUL!
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