| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 21:14 EDT
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Like i said before. Don't you DARE let Kagome actually get married to that guy! Inuyasha says he can't let her get close again but i know that he will anyways. Break up Kagome and that vincent guy immediately because i don't want to see him anymore!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this sounds bitchy but I wish Inuyasha could have hit Kagome with his car lol it's just that she's so... stupid! Why the heck doesn't she go back with Inuyasha?! She should remember that he had waited so long for her and she just runs away and is about to marry another man!!! Stupid Kagome... lol anyways, I loved the new updates and keep up that good work!!!
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Title: Volition
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, though I was upset when Kagome cut and run (even though she did need time on her own to grow up). I just want to see her deal with her running issues and get back to InuYasha. He makes my heart cry having to protect himself. It's Kikyo all over again. I hope you are going to do a flashback to what he did to the two witches (with a 'B') that set him up and how he took care of them. I hope they were destroyed.... Yes, I'm blood thirsty, the dirty little....@#%&*@@. hahaha Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I do enjoy it and am SOOOOOO happy when you update quickly. Rhonda
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating! Just finished ch 27-29 and WOW wasn't expecting all that time to have passed. I think I understand what you are doing though. Kagome needs to define herself not just as Inuyasha's soulmate but as someone with goals and a sense of self-worth. I think that is a part of her trust issues with Inu and why she so quickly jumps to the conclusion that he doesn't want her. So even tho it is hard to let that time go by I understand. What I would like to see is what her relationship with fer mother has been during that time. I understand mama telling Inu to give her daughter time when she first left but I can't see that going on for 6 years! Does Kags' family know of her impending marriage? Also, I think Inu would be in a lot more pain than he seems to be but we've only gotten a glimpse into what this time has been like for him. I'm sure that true love will win out but I'm worried what it will do to Kagome when she breaks it off with Vincent. As much as I want to hate him, he is really a great guy. He has waited for her and I think truly loves her. He is going to be really heartbroken and that will be hard on our miko. Can't wait to see the sparks fly when Inu & Kag finally meet again...I can't imagine the hanyou is going to let her off easy for leaving him twice! :) Love the story and please don't keep us in suspense too much longer!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukai17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 23:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
keh, great story. been waitin for the update all week so thanks for finally posting. you're killin me with the suspense and also, the names of your chars (the fake ones) are really startin to freak me out cuz i know ppl with all but like one of those names and their mannerisms and personality are eerily similar. thats besides the point though. keep up the good work. PS ive been reading the other chapters and there are some errors you might want to fix cuz it messes with the meaning (just a thought if you enter a contest with it).
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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nice chapter update... so kagome is going back to japan... it is long overdue... hope kagome sees inuyasha now next chapter... update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 15:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay. Kagome is finally going back to Japan. Can't wait! Thanks for 3 chapters in one day! AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 14:58 EDT
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I'm glad things are going good for the rest of the crew except for the few that are in the dumps. Seems like lives are about to collide all over again and I can't wait to see what happens. See no matter how hard you try you cannot run from true love, Akina learned that with Zachary, what are the chances. Now Kagome is about to learn her lesson and she has alot to make up for SO she better be prepared. Can't wait for the next chapter, happy writing.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: August 11, 2007 12:39 EDT
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Noooo!!! Kagome can't be getting married. That's just wrong. Please update soon and stop that wedding. I can't stand the suspense.
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Reviewed By: Chio [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, please don´t make us wait more. Kagome will marry or not. Inuyasha will appear in the wedding to interrupt it. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 04:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice chapter update... but kagome is getting really frustrating and stupid... she is still running away... what and why?... if she said that she's over inuyasha why doesn't she just talk to him... 6 years is just too long for them not seeing each other... and can't believe that her mom kept her location from inuyasha that long... of all the people that should at least understand would be her mom... now she's getting married to this vincent guy... kagome better wake up... inuyasha better show up soon anf stop the wedding or something... sorry just getting impatient here... hope next chapter there's good news about inuyasha and kagome... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: sad
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been loving this story. I have a couple of problems. If Inuyasha still sees Kagomes mom, he would have told her that what Kagome saw was not the truth and to tell her daughter. Or he could have written her a letter and gave it to her mom to give to her. or In their dreams that they share, he could have told her then. Inuyasha could have gotten a detective to track her down. 6 yrs is a long time and he would have found her by then. She knew he waited 500 yrs for her, said they were soul mates. She would have realized something in 6 yrs. I hate the angst. It's killing me that they are not together. I love your story very much. Please next chapter she realizes her mistake and goes back to him. PLEASE!!! update soon please. *waiting patiently* :)
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Reviewed By: Sam37 On: August 11, 2007 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story but six years might be long enough apart and how long can Kagome be an idiot. Since she doesn't love the guy but is just plain stubborn. So great and can't wait for update.
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Reviewed By: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tell Flamers To Go Fu*k Themself. This Story Rocks, But... This IS InuXKags Right???
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Reviewed By: cm On: August 11, 2007 00:56 EDT
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don't you DARE let Kagome actually marry that guy!! Hurry up and let Inuyasha and Kagome get back together. I hate seeing Kagome deluding herself into thinking that she actually loves this vincent. It's all bullshit. Hurry up and stop this thing between Kagome and vincent.
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