| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been reading this fic for a while, like a month to be exact but I had to put it on hold a few times because my stories and my personal life were getting between, now that I've finally got the time to finish what you have wrote till now it's time for some truth... your fic is very good, pretty good actually... I've never read Sueric's fics but I'm sure you didn't copy her or your fic wouldn't be posted till now... anyway, about your grammar... there's a few mistakes tha bug me, true I make mistakes too and I shouldn't be judging you but I just hate it when you write 'to' instead of 'too', I have noticed this in almost every chapter. Now, well... I'm really into this story and I'm looking forward to the end, this story has filled me with the desire of crying because I felt so bad for Inuyasha... at some points I find myself yelling at Kagome for not trusting him but I guess that those kind of things are what make a fic a good fic. So, just to end this review I would like to tell you that you should check twice before uploading a chapter and of course you should update sooner because the freaking tension is killing me lol... update soon please! =)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 14:05 EDT
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Aargh, I can't begin to tell you just how mad I am at Kagome. I really do feel she owes Inuyasha alot more, I mean I know she has to do the "Finding yourself and independance" thing but geez. Inuyasha waited for her and then had to fight to get her to be with him all over again and she's still so insecure with her relationship with him that she runs at the first sign of trouble. Now she's at a club about to start something with who knows who. This is soo not looking good right now but I love your writing and the angst so update soon.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, great story! Stayed up all night reading it! Still can't believe Kags jumped to completely the wrong conclusion and ripped Inuyahas heart out TWICE! How much more can our poor hanyou take?! Please don't have Kags sleep with anyone else...I don't think Inu could survive that. Can't wait till the next installment!
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Reviewed By: randa15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 09:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good, im enjoying this chapter so far!
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Reviewed By: bluefire101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this story is a pretty good one so far :), I wonder what will happen in the next chapter :O
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Title: YEY!! New chap!!!!
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Kagome has been gone from home for sometime now!! I'm surprised either hasn't lost their minds already!!! Aww Souta has a girlfriend that is so cute => But I hope Kagome reads some more of her diary. LOVE the story this is one of my TOP favs so update soon ALMIGHTY BeAuTy 2004 :p
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Title: Threat and not
Reviewed By: Jappy On: August 03, 2007 11:00 EDT
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I WILL FUVKING HATE YOU IF THERE IS NOT A KAGOME INUYASHA CHAPTER WHETHER IT BE IN DREAMS OR WHATEVER I SWEAR I WILL HATE YOU IF YOU MAKE INU OR KAGO LIKE OR DATE OR LOVE ANYONE ELSE EXCEPT INU OR KAGO GOT IT BUSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story keep it up and you'll win a grammy or something lol
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Reviewed By: Yashie.And.Kags.Forever On: August 03, 2007 02:42 EDT
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... Update Soon, Good Chapter
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... really liked it... kagome is just being stupid... she's a coward... why is she still running away when it's been 3 years and said that she's over inuyasha... she's just afraid that when they meet again that she might not be over him... hope inuyasha finds out that kagome is in new york... there meeting is long over due... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sam28 On: August 03, 2007 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and the writing is great because it gives good detail which is important. Kagome is a pain here and should be with Inyuasha. Been three years they should see each other soon. Maybe have Kagome date or something but don/t let her sleep with amyone besides Inyuasha because that would crush hin and well how much more can he take right. Love it update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sam28 On: August 03, 2007 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and the writing is great because it gives good detail which is important. Kagome is a pain here and should be with Inyuasha. Been three years they should see each other soon. Maybe have Kagome date or something but don/t let her sleep with amyone besides Inyuasha because that would crush hin and well how much more can he take right. Love it update soon.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 22:12 EDT
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ahhhhh!!!!who is this newbee ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not another hanger!!!!!! must read next chapter!!!!!!1
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Title: Ur kidden right?
Reviewed By: 1st and only InuFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 21:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg! how could kagome do that to inu! *cries* she didnt even give him a chance to explain! Besides that its really good. update soon! :)
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Title: Are you serious?
Reviewed By: TrueInuYashaFan22 On: August 02, 2007 21:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am confused, why is Kagome playing the victim saying he hurt her? She clearly hurt him and herself. I am getting tired of her "woe is me attitude," when the hell is she gonna grow up and get a clue about the pain her rashness causes others? And if Kagome is going to get a new love interest, can InuYasha man up and stop pinning after her like a little bitch. He waited 500 years for her to throw it all in his face again, and it seems to me that she doesn't deserve him at all. She isn't all of that and its about time he realized that he is more than just the man who loves her, and more than the used toilet paper she treats him as. I know about all the "mate" crap and one love junk for him, but can he find someone else to share himself with? Its no fair that he's all alone, again while she lives her "dreams" in the city. I don't believe for one second that she thinks he really cheated, she is just using it as an excuse to explain her desire and decision to leave. When is someone going to call her on her bull and stop pampering her? She's a grown woman now and if you love someone you don't hurt them as she has done, again.
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. But when will they get back together? Why didn't he give a letter to her mother explaining the misunderstanding for her mother to mail to her? 3 yrs? I hope they get together soon. Keep up the terrific work.
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