| "Volition" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: Midnightsilver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 16:55 EDT
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I was sp c;ose to crying at the midunderstanding and how close Kagome came to marrying a man she didn't love. Do update
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Reviewed By: OhxMissxStephi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seriously mate, this is my fave story everrrr i dont wanna wait another two years for an update :[
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Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. That is just great! Update soon. I can't wait to read more!
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: RadioActiveOrange On: December 30, 2007 03:01 EST
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Why are they stuttering so much. Its like every two sentences its "B-but" "W-we" "H-how" "M-mama" :( it would be good if there weren't so many stuttering people.
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 02:25 EST
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Thanks for the new chapter and so soon! I was wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 00:44 EST
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I read few and I like, The only thing bugging me is when you make them studder every 3 sentance man! lol I dont people studder that much
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... quite funny on the girls side... glad that inuyasha & kagome are preparing for their wedding... hope everything goes well... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 15:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the new chapter. I love your story. This chapter was very nice with them watching Sesshy's daughter. Very sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the terrific work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 09:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... really cute that inuyasha & kagome are taking care of miya... but when will inuyasha & kagome become mates... will they get married also... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you! HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17 (not signed in) On: November 15, 2007 10:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: MissKiss On: November 10, 2007 11:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please Please Update!!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 00:38 EDT
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Well how the tables have turned, let me guess, Alexandra dyed her hair blonde because of Victoria. I guess she really didn't expect herself to fall for Kioyishi and now she's trying to impress him not realizing she has him already. So Kagome is the one now who has to win Inuyasha's trust, I just wonder how she'll accomplish that feat after the hurting she put on him. Well awesome writing again and hope to read ya soon.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 17:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice chapter! I went back trying to figure out how much time before the Dec 24th wedding there is but I couldn't find a reference to figure out the current date in the story. Not really important anyway...just curious. I'm so glad the couple is back together. I sure hope that Kagome is done jumping to conclusions and running away. I'm worried that it will be harder for Inu to trust her again with his whole heart since he vowed to never let her hurt him again. I know he wants to trust her again but it's gonna be hard. Also, I'm worried what will happen if/when Kagome starts remembering more of the past. Will she doubt his love when she remember all the times he hurt her over Kikyo? And what will happen if she remembers the reason she made the wish on the jewel in the first place? Gotta hope she will give Inu the chance to explain this time! You had me yelling at Kagome and pulling my hair out all the time Kagome was in New York...I hope she doesn't repeat her mistakes. I don't have that much hair left...LOL! (Didn't have that much to start with :)) Don't worry about the amount of time between updates. I know you plan to finish this story and all good things take time! Thankyou for your time and energy and for sharing your story! Just know we'll all be doing little happy dances when we see an update!
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Reviewed By: JennyBoo On: October 31, 2007 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always make it a point to try and remember to review every fanfic I read. Most of them I don't get past the first chapter, with those I don't bother. I'm really enjoying your FanFic, it's one of the more original ones I have read or tried to read. I'm on the chapter where Kagome is taking a tour of InuYasha's office... it's 2:52am... I have a feeling I'm not going to be getting to bed any time soon.
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Title: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever
Reviewed By: gjdfjdj On: October 31, 2007 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! PLEASE
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