| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angie15523 On: February 08, 2004 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is obviously an old fic since the last update was 2 years ago, but I love it!! Only its such a shame it isn't finished. My advice: update and spell check. but GREAT JOB PLEEEEEEAAAAAASE write an ending!! PS I love the idea of the story! Good Luck! angie
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Reviewed By: Iyasu On: June 08, 2003 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, this is a wonderful fic! Please don't abandon it and add more! |
Reviewed By: Alex On: April 09, 2003 13:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think ur story is great, but i'd hate to think ur abandoning it I want 2 know coz the last time posted was in september. |
Reviewed By: Yak-cool On: February 17, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update soon its a great fic |
Reviewed By: Yak-cool On: February 04, 2003 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic i would really like it if u put me on ur mailing list |
Reviewed By: Yak-cool On: February 04, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic i would really like it if u put me on ur mailing list |
Reviewed By: Brit On: July 03, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yoooohoooo! You still alive? I sure hope so. You haven't updated in awhile...on any of your fics. Please don't stop writing!! You're too good to stop! I especially enjoyed this one (when I read it months ago). I'd love to see it finished. NO ABANDONING FICS! PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Xorwais On: January 18, 2003 05:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wauw! This is The greatest HS fic I ever read! And it going in my top 50 list of best fics ever! Lemme check.. you on 22 right now.. ooh that's really good actually since I don't like HS fics at all.. heh
Please put me on your
mailing list :) --> xorwais@hotmail.com
Thanks for writing! |
Reviewed By: Gita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I never read highschool fanfics, but your other stuff was so good I figured I'd try it...Different, but not bad. I see you haven't updated since september...are you planning to finish this? |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester On: November 30, 2002 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shrugs* I like the number 7. Write more. |
Reviewed By: hi On: November 21, 2002 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
YO dat was real good! I like that one. That goku chichi thing is awesome! Hope he's not too mad at her. Well PEACE good story. |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..this story..this story is fabulous! Most high school fics you read are really predictable and corny but this one..this one is going somewhere. Has a good plot, al lthe characters are so well portrayed. I love it. You have really, really really blown me away with this. You have such an awesome way with words. I could totally picture everything that was happening. I can't wait for the next chapter! I have fallen in love with your fic. ^-^ -bows- Until the next time. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: October 22, 2002 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UG: O.O Wow! Drug abuse, father's coming out of nowhere, and only one good thing.
Kahlan: I hope he's for real. Though I think he is. I wonder what the turning point was? His son standing up to him? Nice.... This may help Vegeta alot. You aren't going to disprove what Bulma thought and I agreed with are you? That would just be like you.... Chi's still taking the pills? What's Goku going to do? Tell on her I bet.
UG: Do you always make guesses.
Kahlan: Yes. Update this! Still my fav story.... No, Willpower is my fav lemon.... ^_~
UG: What's a lemon!? |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: October 22, 2002 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"It was time she gave up on fairy tales that always ended happily ever after because that simply wasn't how things were." Can you believe I've figured that out.... I'm not even counting on the whole thing Vegeta and Bulma have here.... I could settle, but I won't.... I have somebody who could be my--how did my friend put it--f--- buddy. Luckily I don't want that!
Lair....liar. What is it with you and l words. Dylesic(sp?), eh? Me too! loin....lion. I hope your brother aapreciates that! lol
This is good! The kiss scene was very nice and the rain reminded me of Just Like the Rain, a really good country song....
Continuing now....
UG: Hm, interesting. I like these two together.
Kahlan: *snicker* |
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good god that was GREAT!! I really love it!! Well.. I'm speechless *smile*!
It was just wonderfull to read, emotional and so near at the real life.
Hm, I think I can't find the right words at the moment. So.. it's a really really reeeaaaally great FF ^.^ ! |
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