| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 09:14 CDT
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Wow. I luv this story!!! Great new chapter... I can't beleive this is my first review for this fic. I guess I just reviewed for it at Fanfiction.net. Hmmm... Oh well! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 23, 2002 08:43 CDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 06:33 CDT
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The tension sure is thick! O.O I wanna know what happens next! Please update!!!!! SOON! *ON KNEES* |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 23, 2002 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you should rename this "As The Stomach Turns". I've never seen so many messed up people in one fic. CC is the one I'm really worried about. She should go see a doc asap. So Bulma's parents are gonna do the divorce thing. Shame, but I kind've saw that coming. If Veggie's avoiding Bulma, could that mean that he's started developing feelings for her? I mean he is the "King of Denial" in practically ever B/V fic that I've ever read. Then again he's got problems to deal with at home *sighs*. Anyway, you know I love this fic and as always can't wait to see what you have in store for these dysfunctional people. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Saiyangirlie On: August 02, 2002 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok...this chapter was really good...and the kiss...well almost kiss between bulms and vegg was good...will someone please shoot zabon in the head...or blow his sorry ass up. ;) Anyway...love this fic...its one of the best, and keeps me interested always. Please update soon...cause you have me on the edge of my seat wondering whats next...and if this time bulms and vegg really will kiss...were all hoping for that one. :) Keep up the good work. Love and Peacea! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunnow if i really needed to rate this but you know, i like the story, otherwise i wouldn't have reviewed it on FF.N, so, here goes...beautiful, well written, bravo, bravo. |
Reviewed By: Ki Ki On: June 16, 2002 12:46 CDT
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i like it alot but im a fon fic fanitic !!update pleze !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 12, 2002 21:02 CDT
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UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love this fic and I want it to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!! ASAP UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 12, 2002 21:01 CDT
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UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love this fic and I want it to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!! ASAP UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 15:28 CDT
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Like always, another fantastic chapter! And a long one, too! ^_^ I don't mind the fact that there wasn't any B/V in it. It's was still great. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: June 12, 2002 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, another great chapter! lol, well good luck with the guy. I personally feel like crud and Attachments Detached is reflecting it.... How do I cope with Writer's Block? I really don't have it, but I pick a CD that fits my mood (linkin park right now) and write the fic that goes with that CD (Prryhic) then i sit down with a drink, munchies, and pile inspirational stories, pics, etc...alternating between writing and looking at them. Really the only problems I have with are characters like Tien. Sometimes, I skip ahead to a section i know I can write an go back to a section I couldn't when I can.... Sometimes you should take a few days off. A two hour walk works wonders, but I'm just a masochist! lol
Ah, the angst is so nice. ChiChi's starting to pay and is going to end up in the hospital if someone or she doesn't realize she's in trouble. And no V/B? That's ok. I mean, he is avoiding her...for obvious reasons. I like that his mom came. Oh, Zarbon-kick butt scene? Cool! Bulma needs to talk Veg so I'd say she'll corner him cause she'll get tired of him evading her.
Well, I update today! See ya! |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 12, 2002 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@ *gasps* Oh no! Someone's got to do something about Chichi!! @_@
Wonderful chap as always!
May your muse visit you many times!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 12, 2002 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowwowwow!! Great chap and a long one too. I'm really scared for CC. That fainting spell is the first sign that your body is shutting down. Are things gonna get worse for her before they get better? Looks like Bulma really loves her dad and misses him too. He's not willing to go back home, so what's up with that? I wish Bulma would tell Veggie what's going on at home. He can't do anything about it, but it might help her just to get it off her chest. Btw, there are two fics that you might want to check out (if you haven't done so already). History and Herstory by Majin Ouji (really good) and Bonded By Pain And By Blood by Angel Wings(damn good too). Anyway, great job on this chap and I can't wait for the next ^_^! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 12, 2002 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh oh, sounds like chi chi's getting worse. i hope she doesn't get too sick. it sounds like she's anorexic too! eeep!
i thought it was sweet that vegeta's mom actually went to one of his tournaments.
vey good chap, hope you get v/b in there soon! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 10, 2002 20:55 CDT
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ooh, it almost got steamy there! (hee hee!) spiffy chap.
mmm, calculus. i'd love to maim that course, but hey, at least it's almost over! (i had to restrain myself from using all caps there)
you should update but only slightly speedily. |
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