| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: trunks'girl On: May 16, 2002 10:16 CDT
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awesome fic, but i'm a big fan of ur work, so can u just clarify this one this thing, r ur other fics all finished or something? cuz i'm dyin for them to finish, plz!!!! thnk u, keep up the good work, and steady updates! |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: May 15, 2002 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOO! I really like this one! I've never found a dbz highschool fic that I really liked so thankyou for writing this! I'm worried about chichi, she's on a diet and is taking those pills? uh oh.... |
Reviewed By: Jade Dragosani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 21:18 CDT
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Hmmm.... That was a good update I liked that. OOO.. graduating. The senior class this year at our school may not get to I've heard becouse as a prank some of htem spray painted one of the elmentry school yards, got the front of the high school, TPed the hightschool lawn and attacked it with manure... I don't know why they would but that's what I heard happened... odd kind of people. But anyways, off subject, update soon! |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl On: May 15, 2002 19:32 CDT
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once again.great chapter. i love this fanfic very much. update soon k? i need to read more!! oh..and do ne of you guys know which episode goku and vegeta fuse to become vegetto to defeat majin buu? i was looking for it. but i dont want to download the wrong one. so if u guys know which episode that is. write it down 4 me k?thx! bye 4 now!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 15, 2002 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good update. I wonder what's the deal between Mr. and Mrs. Briefs. Being the suspicious kind I'd say Mr. B is having an affair, but then again that's just me ^_^. Anyway, update soon. |
Reviewed By: louie On: May 15, 2002 16:46 CDT
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U MUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait to read about what happens at bulmas party!!!!!!! It sound interesting!!! Make bulma dump yamcha, He is an a$$!!!! Keep UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Long time no review. Well, as you figured probably, I love it. No other words can justify it. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 15, 2002 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, this sounds to me like the precursor for a big fight between yamcha and bulma! uh oh! hope it doesn't ruin her party. i really like the fact that you portray both bulma and vegeta as really smart people. they act like such morons at times; it's reassuring that they really DO have brains!
i really hope you'll update soon! (more angst, less air headness please! oh well, i suppose this is the calm before the storm, right?)
congratulations on graduating! |
Reviewed By: VBHA On: May 11, 2002 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was really good! Do you think you could e-mail me with updates????? My e-mail is Lilizard0248@cs.com |
Reviewed By: Jade Dragosani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm..... my reasons. I don't know, that's just what I see from looking, plus yesterday. HS fics are getting common but your take is good. The Vejiita being abused by his father I've seen alot too in the HS fics I've read. Its good, I like it you should update pretty soon. Umm style hey who am I to judge that. Its good, I don't really mind it much. You want 17's japanese name is that what you mean. Its Juunanagou or Juusichigou, but Juunanagou is the one everyone uses. Either is correct but Juunanagou is the one most people use. (The othe sounds to girly if you ask me.) I think you calling him Jay works fine. Jay and Juu that work well for nicknames if you ask me. I used to use the japanese names but I stopped becouse some people didn't know who they were. But yeah his Jap name is Juunanagou. So there now you know. And update sometime soon. If you want go read my fics. I have a few up over here but a lot of it is on FFN, which I noitice you have an account on as well (Friend has you in her faves!). I seem to get more responce there to my stuff. But dont' tell the whole world about that. I'm trying to get people to respond over here so that way when I put up the good stuff its easier to do. Umhmm.. Yep. Anyways yeah that's all I have to say.
Blessed be,
Amy |
Reviewed By: louie On: May 10, 2002 14:34 CDT
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Ausome!!! I dont realy like how u made Vegetas dad a wife and son beater but whatever....... |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 10, 2002 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!!!!! that was awesome! i love angst!this is going to be sooooo good, it is already! i want to learn more about vegeta's father. sounds really interesting. i wonder what it is that vegeta doesn't know about his father. please update soon!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 10, 2002 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chap. I wonder what's really going on between Mr. and Mrs. Sei that Vegeta wouldn't understand. Frankly I think abuse really sucks and Veg and his mom shouldn't be putting up with that sh*t. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 08, 2002 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooo adorable! they're in high school! it's great. keep writing more, i want to see how everyone will end up! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2002 16:50 CDT
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I reviewed, so does that mean you'll update? I like this a whole lota |
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