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Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, zarbon you idiot!!!!!!!*fumes* geez, you'd think green people would know how to take a hint. sheesh. ^.^ well anywho, wonderful chapter. bulma and veggie are together at last! but that's not to say that there won't be upcoming drama, no siree! ^.^ keep up the awesome work, it's great! *dances around happily* the twin's mom seems awesome, and Jay seems to like Black Hawk Down. *imagines him watchign Chocolat, and bursts into laughter* I would pay good money to see the expression on his face when he was watching that! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 31, 2002 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very well written chapter. The shattered moment was so sweet as was Krillin & Juu's scene. I loved Mrs. Briefs' puzzled reaction to a fighting Bulma & Vegeta actually going on a date. LOL. |
Reviewed By: AnimeGrl On: July 29, 2002 20:01 CDT
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eeeeek you have to continue it!!! this is awesome!! CONTINUE IT I SAY!!! CONTINUE!!!1 you rock at this stuff :3 hurry up and update it! besides, didn't you say the more reviews the better? WELL YOU ALREADY HAVE 113 REVIEWS SO GET A MOVE ON!! ^^' sorri, .....just please continue it lol it's so much fun to read! |
Reviewed By: Ninjana On: July 27, 2002 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a great story. I've read many other High School DBZ fics, but none as good as this one ^_^ Also for the name of Juu's mom how about Kiko, Emi, or Maemi those are some really cute Japanese names. :) |
Reviewed By: sumtin... On: July 26, 2002 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey!!!..i'm loving u're fic so far. the whole angst thing...totally original!!! keep up the good werk!!! but.. i jus couldn't help but wonder..will there be a lemon in this fic???...cuz ya knoe... prom nite tradition and all..rite..????...oh yeah.. b4 i ferget...UPDATE!!!!..cuz we all da drill: Review= happy you= faster updates= happy me. it's all part of the program... |
Reviewed By: Kandrisa On: July 23, 2002 14:33 CDT
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Poor ChiChi. It's a shame parents don't tell, cause when they finally do-their kids don't even care all that much. Such a shame. At least that's what I get out of it. Any who, good job!! Wonderful. But a 'B'? That shouldn't do anything. To much stress, I hope ChiChi gets her act together. Next chapter... |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 23, 2002 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So many problems, in one group. Any who, I don't know. I was nice, great, spectacular(more synomns) blab blab. I am gonna go read the next chapter and then review. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 21, 2002 14:18 CDT
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Great job portraying Chi Chi's feelings about returning to school. They fit her character well. And way to go Veggie! I loved that he decked Spopovitch to protect Bulma's honor. Glad to see he's coming around. :) |
Reviewed By: Yatsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 12:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey great work so far. I'm glad Vegeta's warming up a little but not too much. This story is very intersting in the fact that it's fairly realistic. As for names of Juu's mom goes the idea of another japanese number is a good idea so I'll tell you some that I find interesting and maybe they can help ya. ^_^ Like I said I dun know if they help you at all but from the few that I know, these sound like they could make good names if you ignor their meanings.
hachi-juu = 80
kyuu-juu = 90
hyaku = 100
Hope you update soon!
-Yatsuna |
Reviewed By: firaga On: July 21, 2002 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKEY! really, really fab chapter jb! woohoo vegeta! that bebe kicks über ass! a name, neh? how about sayuri? anyway, just wanted to say hi and AS USUAL that was amazing! btw, i have all these damn chappies of sex in the city that i havent put up yet but ill send them to you soon! |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, as usual.
Umm... A name... Ichiro? Ichira? The only number I'm sure of is the word for one (I should study the normal stuff instead of concentrating just on learning the swear words).
I like. Vegeta kicks boo-tay, and I liked your description of Chichi's feelings towards returning to school. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey chica! I know you're excited to hear from me again. Be afraid, very afraid. Thankfully I'm not quite as hyper as I was during that one review. I'll make this one short and sweet.
I loved this latest chapter! I can understand Chi-Chi being upset about everyone making a fuss over her. It would drive me nuts too! Of course, I'm already nuts, so it wouldn't matter!!!! Vegeta was so sweet too! The way he punched that guy (I'm glad you can spell his name b/c I can't!) for talking bad about Chi-Chi and Bulma. He deserved worse! And then Bulma and Vegeta making up was so perfect. I absolutely loved it!!!
Update soon!!! I can't wait for more, but it sounds like you're getting pretty close to ending this one. I guess that means either more updates on your other stories (Willpower and When You Least Expect), or a new one!!! Can't wait!!! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: louie On: July 20, 2002 10:06 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! ASAP!!!!!!!!!!! Great works should never be left unfinished!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 20, 2002 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter rocked! You got the recovery process down pat, but there's no doubt that ChiChi will pull through, with all her friends looking after her. I just wish Goku would hold back a little bit. Chi needs to get her self esteem back and Goku's over protectiveness might keep that from happening. I'm glad that Veggie decked that jerk. He had no right to say the things he did. Looks like B/V are slowly gonna make a go of it ^_^. As far as a name for J/J's mom, how about Rei (zero in japanese). Its simple and has a nice ring to it. Like always you know I can't wait for the next chap. Good going JB! |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE ! plz
I love DBZ high school fics and yours is one of the best !
Bulma blowing off Zarbon was great to !
UPDATE SOON
thanx : ) |
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