| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: hey On: July 12, 2002 23:33 CDT
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awww.. this fic is very sweet.please update real soon,we enjoy ur fic very much. |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY enjoyed this fic. This is so... DIFFERENT from all the other DBZ fanfics I've read. You actually added REAL issues that teenagers and their families go through. But, (even though I enjoyed this story so far) I wanna know is... WHERE'S THE SEX??? I NEED LEMON!!! (Okay... so I'm a true LemonHead!) Oh, and for a name to name Jay and Juu... I like Serenity, but whenever I tell my friends this... well... let's just say that I'm the only one who likes that name. Anyway... update soon, and you'll bet that I'll keep reading! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 10:41 CDT
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Aw man, poor Goku and Chichi! And then of course there's Bulma and Vegeta- hah, serves you right Vegeta, getting left behind in the parking lot. Anyways, great chapter! But I have a question- where was Yamcha in all of this? Isn't he chichi's friend too? *shrugs* wonderful work, keep it up! I can't wait until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: July 10, 2002 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad I found this site!! I got to read too chapters & loved both of them. The almost kiss & Goku sneaking in ChiChi's room were so sweet. I can definitely relate to the damn cell phone comment. As for the updating, if you want a choice other than this or Willpower, my next choice would be "When You Least Expect", but I hope you don't leave these too long cuz there are my favs. Can't wait for any updates~~ |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 09, 2002 07:33 CDT
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That Vegeta is being so difficult!! Oh, well, could we really have it any other way? :) Great work on the emergency room scenes and I liked Goku sneaking in to see Chi Chi. P.S. My vote is for When You Least Expect. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 01:15 CDT
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That was wonderful, not that I'd expect ne thing less than great from you! You give everyone such depth, it's amazing. I have a really serious story in the works right now and I only hope I do half as well as you. About the story to update. I'm about to die wondering what's going to happen on When You Least Expect and Relationships. I'd be tickled pink (I hate that color. I thought you just might like to know that.) if you updated either one! Okay enough for now. Oh, I'm almost through with the Krillin chapter of Therapy! I'll email you when I update. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 08, 2002 13:39 CDT
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the latest chap was excellent! i think you should really update "when you least expect". i love a/u's!
one thing's been bothering me about this fic; are vegeta and goku still saiyans? just curious. there really wasen't any mention of it so i assumed they were human, but i just wanted to be sure. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 12:32 CDT
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This chapter was great! I hope Chi Chi gets better and realises the miskate she made in taking drugs and I hope Vegeta gets his life in order so Bulma can be a part of it. :) Add more soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 08, 2002 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol-you're gonna milk the onion thing for all it's worth aren't you? Poor ChiChi, but with everyone's support I believe she'll pull through. As far as Veggie goes, Bulma should just hit him over the head with a 2 X 4. His unwillingness to talk about their situation is starting to get on my nerves. As far as your other fics go, update all of them in that order. Yeah, I know I'm greedy but it's Monday and I'm never reasonable on Mondays. As always, another great chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: louie On: July 08, 2002 09:13 CDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! This fic is GREAT!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 08:11 CDT
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Oh my god... That is so sad! I feel so sorry for Goku and Chi Chi. And Vegeta is being a jerk. :( So sad...
Hurry with the next chapter please. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 07, 2002 21:05 CDT
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Awww... I really liked the scene with the medal. Very nicely done. Let us know what happens to Chi Chi soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: July 05, 2002 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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(tears in eyes) I'm one of three favs? Wow! *_* Jeez! Okay, anyways, I, again, really like this! (and you think you sound like the broken record) I would've liked to have seen Zarbon get his butt kicked, but next time I suppose. I liked that he stuck his foot in his mouth.
I liked the almost kiss scene. It reminded me...wait a minute (checks story) Yeah, I'm that far...of my own in AD.
Yeah, CC passing out was a gimme, but whether she comes out whole or not will be the big question. Okay, so one question, why is Vegeta so reluctant to take it to the next level? His thoughts 'What did I almost do?' seemed deeper than the regular 'she's just a friend' deal. Does he fear becoming like his father? And his father. You're making him 3-D. I like that....
Poor everyone! I feel so boo-hoo for them! Later! I'm working on DoY and a new story per my five-year old brother's request.... (oh, have you read Selenity Jade's stuff yet? I reccomend all of them!)
Chow! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x On: July 04, 2002 14:53 CDT
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that was beautiful, pure pure pure genius!!!! i am soooo proud of you!!!!! keep up the good work, and please continue...whatz gonna happen between vegeta and bulma?!!?! i wanna know!!!! update quickly... PLEASE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 18:45 CDT
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aw man....porr chichi. she needs to lighten up on her stress load, it could seriously kill her! Wonderful chapter, I liked how you made Vegeta calm Bulma down a bit, and how he didn't freak out like Bulma did.(although I don't think Vegeta would really freak out about anything anyways, ^.^) great job, keep it up! |
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