| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! and Lisa Frank, can't wait for the next chapter. bye |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love how b and veg are such good friends! it's really realistic :) and chi has a drug problem?? oh dear! this is such a good story jb!!! :) keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 00:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST!!!!!! it's your best fic yet!!!! wow! i hope im not one of those "silly high school fic writers" :( haha! i love it! this actually reminds me of MY high school, oh and CONGRATS on grad! :) i love it!!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2002 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still would like to know what was so important. I loved it of course, that's a given. And I like for you to put me one your mailing list. my email address is reginarenee2002@prodigy.net. Toodles |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: May 23, 2002 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This had officially become my fav fic by you! I love the angst. It is real.... Reminds me of why I hated highschool. I was like Vegeta minus all the friends.... Pathetic really. lol So glad I became like Vegeta is in this in college. Small circle of close friends I trust. Anyways, 'nough about me!
This fic is great! I have a feeling Spo--whatever is going to plotting something, and Zarbon means nothing but trouble. So, Y and B break up (YEAH, sorry, dislike for Yamcha....) a nice break-up I might add. Zarbon's going to go for her...perhaps try to rape her?
I like the new trend thing...sweet.... So, let's fast-forward to Monday! BTW, ChiChi pushing pills is different.... Oiy, I'm glad you have VGSA, I needed the humor! This is just depressing.... lol |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 22, 2002 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really sweet! yamcha actually wasen't portrayed as a cheating bastard! a nice change from the norm. i want to know what's up next, so update soon! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x On: May 22, 2002 10:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
i wanna be on ur mailing list...mayb u have my email mayb u don't
itz: xangeliz91487x@yahoo.com
thnx, keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 22, 2002 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, loved it. Between you and moi I think the present is from Veggie. I liked it that for once Yammy wasn't cheating on her and the breakup wasn't nasty. So now that the coast is clear, when are you going to bring B/V together ^_~? |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: May 21, 2002 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOO! I love this fic! Awe Veggie's so cute when he's nice! ^_^ I've never found a really good high school fic! Now that Yamchu's gone Bulma and Vegeta can get together!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
silverdragon_eye@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: louie On: May 21, 2002 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am glad that Vegeta dosent drink. That dosent fit his chracter very well. UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl On: May 21, 2002 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
HEY! gret chappie! i loved it. poor bulma. like yamcha dumps her on her b-day!!cruel! but now she can start getting closer to vegeta!!yay!! but nehoo. gtg. update soon plz!!and i'll review some more. k? bye!!!! |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl On: May 26, 2002 12:48 CDT
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Chi is having some major problems!She needs to lay off the pills! But nehoo..this is becoming one of the good high school fics!So keep writing more and ill keep on reviewing!!!!! |
Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2002 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Fic!!!! I always thought of Veggie's father as a nice and caring person, though. Oh well! Great fic!
I REALLY ENJOYED IT!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: reniee On: May 16, 2002 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story, please write some more |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2002 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it...duh. Espcially the when Krillin was taking about Blondes. The was too funny. I hope nothing um "bad" happens when Vegeta and Bulma are all alone, in the science Lab. The future isn't looking good, well at least I hope it isn't. *smiles cheese-ly* Anyways can't wait for the next chapter. You should really start a mailing list... |
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