| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GIRL! i've been away WAY too long and its been so good catching up with my fave story! listen, im putting up a website (honestly i cant deal with the whole no-posting crap my computer is giving me) but YOU are the first featured author :)! its been really fab so far! i hope chi is all right, and DAMN that cell phone! |
Reviewed By: Ami Higurashi On: July 03, 2002 12:48 CDT
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Hum, I was awaiting that Fanfiction.net got better so i could drop my review there, but as it seems that that is only going to happen in the next century, I'll drop it here.
As usual, two excellent chapters. The Vegeta/Bulma tension from chap.10 was excellent, and when in this last chapter they were almost kissing I had my face pratically glued to the screen. And poor Chichi.
Hum, if Mr.Vegetas keeps his violent self, I just wonder what will happen if, a day, Bulma is pulled to the front line. And when Vegeta's mother is going to gain some sense and just trow a chair to her husband's head.
Update soon ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 03, 2002 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On no CC is in the hospital! But then again it doesn't surprise me. Those diet pills are nothing but trouble. I hope she gets better soon. Veggie on the other hand is heavy into denial. Damn that phone call! Bulma should just grab him and plant a big wet one on his lips. Let's see him resist that one ^_~! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 05:06 CDT
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This chapter was great! Will Vegeta and Bulma get any closer? |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: July 03, 2002 01:44 CDT
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ooohh, this is one of the best high school fics ive read, i like the idea that Bulma and Vegeta are friends to begin with, oh i sooo hate Yumcha, theres no real reason other then he's whiny and really really annoying. hahahahahah oh update sooon |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 01:17 CDT
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First of all, I can't thank you enough for the ad! Ur the coolest! I really liked this chapter. I was waiting for Chi-Chi to lose it. I hope she's okay. Poor Vegeta, no love at home and he can't accept the love that is presented to him either. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: July 02, 2002 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, that was absolutely wonderful! Jaded Best, I give you the title of Drama Queen! I can't wait to see how Goku reacts. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 02, 2002 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um. I like it. Vegeta's just 2 soft&really OCC. So,like. Straighten him out, cuz if he read this fic he'd kill you 4 his attitude. Ya know what I'm sayin? And everyone else is just........ N/M. peace. |
Reviewed By: louie On: July 02, 2002 18:48 CDT
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I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SUCH A GREAT FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another new, great chapter! *smile* I love this story. And all your others too. Keep up the good work!. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 18:16 CDT
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OMG, Chi-Chi's in the hospital! She shouldn't have taken those pills. God, and just today I saw some guy get hit by a car *shudders* That was awful. But on a lighter note, great chapter, as always. ^_^ Hope Chi-Chi pulls through! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter! ChiChi's getting worse and Vegeta is falling for Bulma so he's staying away from her. Reminds me of scene in my story i have yet to post.... Except not like it. O_o; Nevermind.
So, when's Chi going to the emergency room? And when is Bulma gonna break. I certainly would with all that stress. Was there any Goku in this chapter? (shrugs) I'd say the prom is going to be important. What? Vegeta will say he isn't going and Bulma will be going alone? Or will Zarbon get to her? I can't wait for the promised Z/V fight! I wanna see some butt kicked, although Vegeta getting his own kicked wouldn't surprise me.... Heck, girl! Surprise me! Have B and V go off to different colleges and never see each other again until their ten year reunion and Bulma's married and they have an affair.... O_o; Fudge! Shut up, Kahlan! You have enough story ideas floating around in that head of yours! Jeez!
Anyways, I like this story best, so i don't mind quick updates on it! lol ^_^ |
Reviewed By: autumn On: June 24, 2002 15:18 CDT
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Excellent. Yes, I think that is *exactly* how Vegeta would act if he had feelings for Bulma in this situation. Poor ChiChi, I hope someone puts 2+2 together soon or else she's going to be in a lot of trouble. |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 15:14 CDT
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awsome fic.... the best highschool fic yet |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 10:25 CDT
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Whoa, Vegeta's being really bitchy! But could it be... because he... (hey, that rhymes!) likes Bulma!? ^_^ I have to agree with Susan, he DOES always deny his feelings, at least in every B/V fic I've read. And poor Chi-Chi; looks as though she's feeling the side effects of those pills. *smacks Chi-Chi* I thought you were smarter than that! ^_^ Please update soon! |
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