| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 19, 2002 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
My Friend, or Your Friend?
Can we say long time?
Yeah, Jadedbest or something like it.
Her last chapter title is how I feel.
Really? What was it?
Finally.
My skits over. And I can't believe ChiChi did that. Well, yes I can, she is an addict. To bad for her, I hope you make her better. And ALL/MoSt of the parental matters right. Anyways, it was great. I loved it. And I hope the next chapter comes out sum(?) time this season. Bye |
Reviewed By: autumn On: September 19, 2002 09:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa... two things I did not expect: Juu's father showing up and ChiChi back on the drugs! Aaahhh! This was a nice surprising chapter. And the scene with Vegeta's parents was... wow. Emotional. Love this fic as always :) |
Reviewed By: cherryblossom0286 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah you finally updated good job |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 17, 2002 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was one emotional chapter. I can't believe that CC still has those pills. She obviously didn't learn her lesson when she ended up being hospitalized. Or maybe she did and she just hasn't gotten rid of them. Maybe she's testing her resolve. What the hell do I know. I'm sure it'll all become clear in future chapters. Does this mean that Goku won't be taking her to the prom? He seemed really pissed off at her. Anyway, at least things are starting to look up in Vegeta's house. That was quite a tender moment between mom and dad. Argana's right though, with all that's happened it's gonna be hard to convince Veggie that his dad is trying to change his ways. As far as Juu goes, I feel for her and Jay. Nijuu seems sincere enough, but how do you make up for 14 years of absence from your kids' lives. This was really well written and you were able to get across the emotional turmoil that each of the characters were going through. Great job JB!! TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: September 13, 2002 23:35 CDT
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AMAZING!!!! that was really good darling! can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 27, 2002 01:19 CDT
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I just remembered that Ember put out an awesome one-shot called May The Spirits Keep You Safe. If you do nothing else you have to check it out. It wlll leave you breathless. It's a B/V of course ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 27, 2002 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you're back !!! Great chap girl. That kiss between B/V was so sweet that I thought he was a goner for sure. What he is is an incredibly stubborn man. Hopefully Bulma will break down his defenses real soon. Looks like the date between the Dr. and Mrs. Briefs was a bust. Too bad. I love the way Veggie punched his dad out. Why do I get the feeling that things between his parents will get worse before they get better. On a brighter note, congrats on your new boyfriend and I hope you have a great year at school. As far as updates go, I see you checked out the DITH update. Cool wasn't it? I knew it would make your day. Phantomscribe finished "One". Kahlan updated Shiryo and insulted me (j/k) in Little Pleasure Prince. She also has 2 new fics that look real good. Any Woman, Anytime, Anyplace has been updated also. Xangeliz also has a new fic called The Vampyre Chronicles that looks promising. Anyway, if I can think of anything else I'll let you know. Sure did miss ya. Glad you're back ^_^. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2002 23:15 CDT
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Once again, I feel compelled to ask, do I really have to tell you what a wonderful job you did on this story? Well, just in case you couldn't guess by now, I love this story and your latest chapter was awesome. I can't wait to see what will develope in Bulma and Vegeta's relationship and what will Vegeta Sr do to Vegeta Jr?
You asked if anything has been updated. Well, I haven't updated my stories yet unless you missed my last chapter of The Sister Saga, but I do have a new story up and I would really appreciate it if you would give me some feed back on the first chapter. I really enjoy reading your reviews because I respect you as an author and your opinion means a lot to me. Just let me know if you like or dislike. Thanks in advance for reading The Truth.
As I said earlier, love the update. I wish you luck with your computer, boyfriend, and college, congradulations. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: August 26, 2002 19:30 CDT
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Luckily i actually noticed the story before i got the update, welcome back and congrats on the boyfriend bit, now all you have to do is get out another chapter before school starts so i have something good to read while i'm waiting between college classes. :) |
Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmm... I LOVE the fic, but some one said that it was finished, and I hope not!!!!!!!!! Anyways, Good Job! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 26, 2002 22:18 CDT
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Yay! We've missed your updates! "Finally" was the perfect naming to this chapter on so many levels. And what a great chapter! The kiss was well done, worth the wait :) I also like how Vegeta seems to be struggling with the whole "girlfriend" thing, it seems very in-character for him. And how nice that you haven't left the parents out of the story. I'm genuinely interested in their plot lines as well. Especially Vegeta's Dad's last comment. Hmm... I'm intrigued. |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW! Now THAT was cute! B/V moment!! *bounces* |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* That's just so....*SNIFF* |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whimpers* Oh, poor Chichi!! And just when the kiss was going to happen ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, Vejiita's falling for Buruma, and Chichi is going to end up in the hospital....*sighs* Poor her. |
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