| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aurelia lothlorien On: June 09, 2002 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo, great new chapter! I also love how you gave vegeta a black sunfire. great car.^.^ man, chichi-don't take the drugs! don't do it! nononono! oh well,such are the tribulations of life. wonderful work, keep it up. *watches sparks between veggie and bulma* yeah! keep it up you two! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooooh, the awkward silence. ^_^ What could THIS mean, I wonder? Update soon! |
Reviewed By: silverdrgon On: June 06, 2002 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@. ^_^ That was soooo sweet! And look at Vegeta being all akward. Ah, teenage love. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
May your muse visit you many times. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x On: June 06, 2002 09:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job!!!! you're really progressing nicely...plz plz plz update faster...keep up the good work, but don't forget about ur other fics too!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 06, 2002 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was awesome. I get the feeling that ChiChi is taking on more responsibilities that she can handle, and that pill habit is only gonna make things worse. I think those were tiny sparks between B/V. They've known each other for a long time, they're best friends and they trust each other. Those two were made for each other. Great job JB. |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 05, 2002 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
1 word.... WOW!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! Please?!?!?!?!?!!? |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 04, 2002 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that's angst! holy crap! everyone's seroiusly screwed. except maybe goku. he always seems peachy. kinda scary. i hope argana will be okay. vegeta needs to kick vegeta sr.'s ass!! bulma's mom seems so scary in comparison to how she is in the show. eep... poor bulma.
good writin's! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 16:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Yeah, writer's block totally sucks, don't it? I usually don't care much for the abuse and stuff in fics, but you haven't gone overboard, so it's really good. I've noticed that if people include abuse in their stories then they seem to carry it on a bit too far. But anyway, please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 30, 2002 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Feces, things are getting real intense here. I feel for the parents of B/V. An alcoholic and a workaholic. Major recipes for disaster in a marriage. I don't think that Bulma's mom should've slapped her. If anything she should've explained the situation. Bulma isn't a child and she has a right to know what's going on. Then you have ChiChi, an anorexic pill popper. This is really sad and I have a feeling things are only gonna get worse. Awesome chap JB. |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thought that new chappie was great! It was depressing, with all the yelling.This emotional stuff really gets me. But,the emotional stuff is great, especially if you can feel like your in the characters' shoes! Very well done! Please do add another chapter. I wanna know what happens next!Cheers,
~``~Cherry~``~ |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: May 30, 2002 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a little depressing. Someone's either got relationship problems or something except krillen and juu. Good as always! |
Reviewed By: louie On: May 30, 2002 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 29, 2002 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what is carbonlayfoxide? sorry, i was in chemistry and i've never heard of it. i like explosive stuff, hee hee.
vey nice update. a little short, but hey, exams are coming up (EEEEEEP!!!!!!) and i'm sure ther's a lot you gotta get done. me too, in fact (ON NO! THE END OF THE WORLD IS NIGH!!!!! did i even spell that right? oh who cares.)
good work indeed, yup. |
Reviewed By: louie On: May 26, 2002 07:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AUSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 26, 2002 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chappie, though I'm somewhat worried about ChiChi. It looks like she's turning into a pill junkie. Write more soon ok? |
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