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Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, poor Chi! *sniff* Well, Chapter Nine was good ^_^; Onward! |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, chapter Eight. O_o; Wow, really making your review count jump. Anyway, it's refreshing to have it so that Vejiita isn't the bad guy that everyone's parents hate, you know...
*sighs* So sad..onward!
And what's UP with Chichi, *sighs* Bad girl.... |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O
Now THAT is new. Bulma's parents having problems like THAT. Interesting... very! On to chapter...um, seven I think ^_^;; Or maybe eight! *giggles* |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, that was short and kind of... lacking for the comment area, drawing blank. ^_^; But ONWARD. |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, THAT was new. GOOD job on Chapter Five! ^_~ THe breakup happened, AND to top it off, on her BIRTHDAY!
Least Vejiita gave her a present. ^_~ Onward! |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOH! The whole Buruma's too busy for Yamucha thing is pretty new ^_^; At least from what I've read! GREAT job!
And V and B lab partners? *giggles* That's got to be interesting. Chapter Four was definitely good ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Poor Vejiita! *sniff* *sighs* Well, THAT is a good spin on it, I think. ^_^; Good job! And Chapter Three was definitely longer than the other two. ^_^
You can DEFINITELY see where Bulma and Vegeta are headed right now... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, that chapter was short (Chapter Two). ^_^; And really not much happening in it, so...well, I don't really have a comment O_o; But, I'm obsessive about reviewing. *sweatdrops*
It was fairly cute about the apple thing, though! |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hee* Hey, I'm not much for HS fics, being as well, I'm 22 and OUT of highschool and frankly, HATED it, so why READ about it. I think grand total, I've read three of them. And mostly because they were...recommended as being semi-decent.
Well, this was definitely more than semi-decent, so far anyway, as I'm on chapter one. It's pretty darn good. Nice job so far, and I'm on to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now that was interesting. Nice job! ^_^ And this is the LAST chapter. *pants* Woah! |
Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Updates!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the goo d work!!!!! Ummm...You should get Brolli into the mix, maybe as the one who reaches Vegeta's dad, that'd be cool! Or maybe you could get Bardock's crew from Bardock : Father of Goku to come and get some sense into Vegeta Sr.'s head. But, anyways, GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This has got to be the best high school fic I've read. I agree that most of them are way too silly. Update soon, please! :) |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey chica! I loved this chapter. Things seem to be going much better for everyone. I hope you have fun while you're out of town, and I can't wait for you to get back and update! Maybe I'll actually have an update by then. We can always hope.
Oh, I did want to say one thing. Thank you so much for the spelling mistakes. It let's me know you're human too! I always feel so bad because no matter how many times I edit a story, there are always more mistakes, but I feel much better knowing one of the best authors I know, who I really respect as an artist, fudges up too.
I guess that's all for now. I can't wait to read more about everyone! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Sara On: July 31, 2002 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, as always! Hehe, I think I am running out of compliments to tell you! Keep up the awesome writing :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 31, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah you updated! Glad you liked my suggestion. I'm kinda partial to that name myself. Anyway, good chap, dramaless or not. Hope that Bulma's folks get back together again. Do me a favor and kick Zarbon in the nuts. I mean B/V were about to kiss and that freak interrupted them -_-. K/18 are so cute together and CC needs to pig out on cheesecake so she can put on some pounds. After all, a senior prom is a special event that she shouldn't miss for lack of a dress. Btw, I saw you check out the fic "One". Funny cause I was gonna suggest it in my last review but forgot. Here's another one for ya "The Price You Pay". It's awesome and I think you'll enjoy it ^_^. Again, loved the chap and I can't wait for the next update. TTYL-Sue |
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