| "My Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whimpers* Oh, poor Chichi!! And just when the kiss was going to happen ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, Vejiita's falling for Buruma, and Chichi is going to end up in the hospital....*sighs* Poor her. |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh, poor Chi! *sniff* Well, Chapter Nine was good ^_^; Onward! |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, chapter Eight. O_o; Wow, really making your review count jump. Anyway, it's refreshing to have it so that Vejiita isn't the bad guy that everyone's parents hate, you know...
*sighs* So sad..onward!
And what's UP with Chichi, *sighs* Bad girl.... |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O
Now THAT is new. Bulma's parents having problems like THAT. Interesting... very! On to chapter...um, seven I think ^_^;; Or maybe eight! *giggles* |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, that was short and kind of... lacking for the comment area, drawing blank. ^_^; But ONWARD. |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, THAT was new. GOOD job on Chapter Five! ^_~ THe breakup happened, AND to top it off, on her BIRTHDAY!
Least Vejiita gave her a present. ^_~ Onward! |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOH! The whole Buruma's too busy for Yamucha thing is pretty new ^_^; At least from what I've read! GREAT job!
And V and B lab partners? *giggles* That's got to be interesting. Chapter Four was definitely good ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* Poor Vejiita! *sniff* *sighs* Well, THAT is a good spin on it, I think. ^_^; Good job! And Chapter Three was definitely longer than the other two. ^_^
You can DEFINITELY see where Bulma and Vegeta are headed right now... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, that chapter was short (Chapter Two). ^_^; And really not much happening in it, so...well, I don't really have a comment O_o; But, I'm obsessive about reviewing. *sweatdrops*
It was fairly cute about the apple thing, though! |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hee* Hey, I'm not much for HS fics, being as well, I'm 22 and OUT of highschool and frankly, HATED it, so why READ about it. I think grand total, I've read three of them. And mostly because they were...recommended as being semi-decent.
Well, this was definitely more than semi-decent, so far anyway, as I'm on chapter one. It's pretty darn good. Nice job so far, and I'm on to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, now that was interesting. Nice job! ^_^ And this is the LAST chapter. *pants* Woah! |
Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Updates!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the goo d work!!!!! Ummm...You should get Brolli into the mix, maybe as the one who reaches Vegeta's dad, that'd be cool! Or maybe you could get Bardock's crew from Bardock : Father of Goku to come and get some sense into Vegeta Sr.'s head. But, anyways, GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This has got to be the best high school fic I've read. I agree that most of them are way too silly. Update soon, please! :) |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey chica! I loved this chapter. Things seem to be going much better for everyone. I hope you have fun while you're out of town, and I can't wait for you to get back and update! Maybe I'll actually have an update by then. We can always hope.
Oh, I did want to say one thing. Thank you so much for the spelling mistakes. It let's me know you're human too! I always feel so bad because no matter how many times I edit a story, there are always more mistakes, but I feel much better knowing one of the best authors I know, who I really respect as an artist, fudges up too.
I guess that's all for now. I can't wait to read more about everyone! Peace and Out. |
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