| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 10:23 EDT
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Oh, my. You really don't have to worry that you can't right a good lemon; that was one hell of a turn out! I loved the way Hiei was able to confront Yusuke about the bruising in a roundabout way. Nicely done. ^_^
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 09:54 EDT
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Well, loved the chapter. I about pulled my hair out at the cliff hanger! You are WAY too good at those cliff hangers. And it looks like my husband was right, we are having a girl. Now if she would just quit kicking me, I already apologized to her about thinking she was a boy!
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 07:41 EDT
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wowwww, i enjoyed this chapter - well i am a hentai, how couldn't i. i liked how you still kept a plot moving on to even with lemons sprinkling about. and i laughed with what the guys did to yusuke, lol. as for the cliffy ending nice...
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 07:07 EDT
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Yay! Splendid chapter, just splendid! I adored the prank pulled on Yusuke, had me in a little giggle fit, and it's just overall an amazing chapter! I am eagerly awaiting the next one, I can never tell just what you have in store.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 12:52 EDT
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I just love the way you ended off chap 5. What a cliffy! So EVIL. Will Hiei say yes and what will the others think if he does, though knowing Hiei he doesn't care what people think and what about her sons. AAAArghhhhh I can't wait till your next chapter and what your evil mind will come up with.
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Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: April 27, 2007 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is SO incredbile! Every chapter you come out with is amazing. I love the dreams Kagome has about her mates (very steamy ^^) and i love & hate the suspense your'e creating with the build up to the mystery of their deaths. I don't think i could have ever thought of such an ingenious plot as you have with this fic - so please continue on with your wicked talent, and i will wait on the edge of my seat for your next update! ^^
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear you are a natural author. you are just soo great at kepping your readers wanting more which i what i want very much and very soon please!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 13:53 EDT
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:D The lake scene was very funny- not what i expected, you're right, but great to read!! OOooh, and that was totally unexpected!! I can only imagine how Hiei will react!! No wonder you can't wait to get started on the next chapter! I can't wait to read it!!! Loved the bit about Shippo offering to be Kag's mate, very sweet and so what i would expect of him!! ^.^ Waiting with mucho anticipation for the next chappy!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 10:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap. I was speachless for about half a minute then I started to crack up. That has got to be the best cliffy I've ever seen.
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Title: Alissa
Reviewed By: sexyvampire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!!!! All I could do was just look at the ending! I sat there for like 2 mins. but I have to say that was a good cliffy! Please update fast!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 20:46 EDT
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It fallowed up the last chapter great! I can't wait for the next one to come out! I was a little 'put out' when Hiei didn't ask her to be a mate too. But that I guess what Kagome did made up for it. I can't wait to find out what Hiei has to say about that! Maybe he just pushes her up against the wall and takes her...*cough* I mean... He says yes. Yeah! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! you HAVE to update soon!!!! i love this fic as much as i loved the other ones! ahhh! she wants Hiei to be her lover! i love the little action between them at the lake ^_^ pleeeeease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Who Am I? On: April 26, 2007 17:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Hiei is going to be her lover? Well that is an interesting twist. So thats how they become close to eachother. The way that Yomen asked her to be his mate, as another person wrote he is only looking at her as if she is a "baby making machine". Kagome sees right threw that and also with Kurama and Yusuke well they are just a joke Kagome wouldn't like them to be like that. I love how you have Hiei in this story, he seems like the rought but protective type and I just love that. It will be interesting to see how Kagome and Hiei's relationship grows into something more. Keep up the good work. I fully enjoy reading this.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HE SAYS....I was thinking this would happen at some point...You my favorite author are a pure genius, I would have never thought to write such ideas..but then again we have diffrent brains and imaginations....Please update soon...I just can't wait to see what brilliant ideas you have coming in the next chapter, I wonder if Hiei will say yes or maybe he will just show Kagome how he feels... I have a question... This has been bugging me for awhile.. I have a couple ideas on how Kagome's mate's soul's disapeared... I think That Kikyo might have stolen them, or maybe they were inprisoned in a artifact or the Shikon No Tama, Maybe a pease of clouthing or something, its just been bugging me to try and figure out what happened... Also this is the longest Review I have ever writen....Please update soon... Sincerely, loveinuyasha911(Aka MuppyPuppy)
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Reviewed By: Nobodies Perfect - Not Even You On: April 26, 2007 17:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got that 100% right Hojo will be well Hojo. Well I don't even think I have read a story as good as this one. You keep everyone on their toes waiting to see what fast nall you throw at them next. I really dont like Lord Yomen he just looks at Kagome like she is a "baby making machine", not as if she is a real person. So Hiei is going to be her lover? Hmm I wonder what his reaction is going to be to that. He's probably going to look at her as if she is crazy and raise one eyebrow. Anyways Kurama and Yoko seem to be real asses Yoko only wants her because he thinks she will be good in bed and Kurama is all set to either kill her of put her in prison and throw away the key. Kuwabara is the only one really thinking clearly and that is different because people seem to make him as if he's an idiot but I don't think he is he just sees things in life threw different eyes, the eyes of someone with a pure heart. Well my speculation of the murders of Kagome's mate is that Kikyo killed Inuyasha for not going to hell with her. Then when Kagura found out that Kagome mated with Sesshomaru she got mad and made a deal with Kikyo to help her kill him to get back at Kagome. But when Kouga mated with Kagome this got Ayame mad thus adding her to the trio making them all with reasons to kill all three of Kagome's mates...Well am I close?!?!
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