| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 08:50 EDT
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Wow! I had a freaky vibe that you had updated when i logged in! ^.^ Must be because this chappy was soo good, it spoke to me lol! Ahh, so many wonderful moments, and i can't remember them all...loved Kagome' comment to Hiei in the lemon tho, glad you kept that in! And Kurama tying Kagome up...the opening line to that was fantastic! Eishumaru's comment to Shizuru was hilarious too!! Ooh, so Sesshomaru? Or perhaps his son, who Kagura mistakes for his father (can't remember if she knows what he looks like!) Aww, can;t wait for Hiei to get kissed! ^.^ Update when you can!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 08:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so i was right that yemon was the bad guy and he is helping ayame but anyway plz continue
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 05:05 EDT
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woah is sesshomaru alive?! ahh what is going on? update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: alchemy On: July 05, 2007 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil!!! I love it ;) Anyway, great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next XD
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: July 05, 2007 01:32 EDT
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Has it really been 3 weeks, it seems longer. yay, Sesshomaru. Will he clear things up for everyone once and for all, especially about Kagura's son? If is turns out to be his, I will never forgive him or you. (hehe) I hope all of Spirit and Demon world is listening to this, especially if it's bad news for Kagura and her child. (sorry kid, but you should realize what kind of mother you have.) Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 01:16 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is the first time I have ever written a review for you, I never could think of what to say; well now I have! I read your last story 'Hentai Bets', which was awsome and funny. Now here I am reading this one. I'm amazed with the way you bring everyone to life, and the details you put in. A lot of hard work an effort, not to mention research, is put into each chapter. If I could buy any of your stories at Barnes and Noble I would. So keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter.....this current cliff hanger has probably mad a lot of people yell out load, né!!
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Reviewed By: Raeko On: June 29, 2007 23:11 EDT
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Sigh again. If you've looked at your reviews for Hentai Bets lately, you already know my predicament. Honestly, I think having HB to read was helping me to be patient, but no such luck anymore, eh? I swear I check this story three times a day. I think the worst part of it is, I can't bring myself to go back and reread--or I SO would. Doing that, however, just makes it worse. So here I am--burning a candle for whatever deity comprises your muse, and hoping for the best. Hm...maybe I should make you cookies...? They tell me they're pretty good. And so, "To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow, creeps in this petty pace from day to day..." Much love in the meantime! =)
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Title: Black Widow Miko
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!You just GOTTA UPDATE - I'm sooooo glad the Yu Yu Gang FINALLY got a CLUE!!! Update Soon^_^
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 00:03 EDT
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Once again you have graced your readers with your wonderful style of writing. You sure don't make things easy for Kagome do you? lol she just always seems to have gliches in her relationships. In your last story she thought Hiei was gay and now the poor girl thinks that he's already in love with someone else and has her own reservations about getting into a relationship. Not that I can blame her considering her past history. Ah and poor Hiei that guy just doesn't know what to do. It's wonderful. I totally love it. I also love Eishumaru's attraction towards Shizuru. Sometimes she goes forgotten in stories, it's good to know her presence won't be dismissed. I love you lol keep up the good work and I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 16:52 EDT
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Ah! I started reading the new chappy ages ago, but never got to finish it until tonight But boy, was it worth the wait!! So, Kikyo is finally on the scene! Interesting... Totally loving Hiei's falling in love with Kagome's touch moments. The lil youkai is is sooo cute when he keeps saying 'still not enough'!! I got a shock when i looked and saw this was only chp 9..you've crammed so much detail into this fic it feels a hell of a longer one!!! ^.^ I have to compliment you hugely for you excellent characterisations of all the characters...as before, in Hentai Bets, you have a huge cast, but unlike other authors, this doesn't hamper your story or make you skimp on the detail...each character is wonderfully brought alive by your writing! It's so refreshing to read a fic that so much work has been put into- either you know your stuff or you have researched, but either way i am grateful for the sheer effort you put into this chappy! Can't wait for the next update!
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Title: almost...
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 15:31 EDT
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im almost done with chapter one... it isnt even that good... but major writer's block was present... plus i had finals -_- I HATE EARTH SCIENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Get this: I read chapter nine before i read chapter eight so i was really confused untill i realized that i skipped chappie eight... My life is so tragic!! I loved chapter nine. In fact...i inspired me to go and write some more. All your questions are addressed in my thank you's at the end of chapter one. Wish me good luck! earth science is the worst subject in human schools. I learned 20,000 ways to die. A flood could come and i could die. a hurricane could wipe me out. earthquakes would completely destroy the town. Not to mention tsunamies and water spouts Volcanoes could erupt and kill mass numbers of people. really depressing... AND ITS OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 07:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what cracked me up? Yusuke! I love the trick played on him. Good for him. I love your lemons! Very well written as far as I'm concerned and you subjects are amazing together. I can't wait to continue on. Peace!
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Title: Boy What a Proposition! ch. 5
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you're not kidding, but, if I were Hiei, both my demonic energy would go chaotic! Wow that suprised me! Good going! I hit the floor on that one. Great! Going Great! I shall continue! Peace!
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Title: You're Tops ch. 4
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are moving beautifully in your chapters. The flash back are ON "T"! You keep it all real. You have done wonderful. I can't wait to see how this mystery will be solved! Peace!
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