| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Me Myself & I On: April 26, 2007 16:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think this is the best fic I have read in awhile!! Also, if you find someone attracted and you and them are alone in a lake naked what do you think is going to happen?! I was really shocked to see Kagome having so many suitors! Let me see there is Kurama, Yusuke, Yomen, and Shippo. Having Shippo seems wrong but I know he is there more for support and to help her keep peace of mind. Also, to find out in the end that she wants Hiei to be her lover is so weird I thaught the relationship would come later on after they have some time alone together but this is an interesting twist indeed. Keep up your good work I truly am a faithful reader to you.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 16:53 EDT
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LOL!!! That was an awsome chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. I need to know how Hiei reacts to her asking him to be her lover, although I understand why she did it. If she takes him as a lover then she will be able to focas on training again, not only that but she can get away from both Yusuke and Kurama as well, they would have no reason to keep going after her... perhaps there will be a lemon in the next chapter? *hopeful eyes* Will you maybe soon explain how it is that Inuyasha, Sesshomaru and Kouga died? I've been thinking and I think that maybe it could've been Kikyo that killed Inuyasha, and possibly Sesshomaru as well for revenge when Kagome wouldn't give up her soul. I'm not sure about Kouga though because his body was left so it's hard to tell who it was that killed him, though I know that Kagome would never kill anyone if she didn't have to. I hope to see the next chapter soon as I will be thinking about the possibilities until it does come out. Thank you for writting this story and also I want to thank you for allowing the readers to understand how much Shippo loves Kagome, he really would do anything for her. With love, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: Marie-Laure On: April 26, 2007 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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plz continue
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Reviewed By: Youkos_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter! I'm interested about where Kagome is going to take the lover situation with Hiei and also who killed her mates if she's innocent. Really can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 13:04 EDT
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I must say that the end of this chapter threw me for a bit of a loop. I was defenatly not expecting Kagome to ask him to be her lover. I am fortunately over my morning sickness and on May 2 I get to find out if I'm having a boy or a girl. However with how active this baby is I think it might be a boy!
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Reviewed By: ness On: April 26, 2007 09:18 EDT
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Hey glad to see youre still writing... For a moment i thought you fell into the mediaminer hole... in which people start a good story and dont finish...LOL... Im glad kags decided to take a lover even more happy that its hiei... i swear if he was a real person... but oh well thats another fantasy for another day... see you at the next update... later
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 06:59 EDT
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Hmm...do I sense a nice hot lemon coming up in the next chapter??? I think so! XD This is SO murder-mystery and I love a good puzzle...I'm practically suspecting everyone, should a bug be mentioned buzzing around, I'll probably think that it's the killer! -lol- I absolutely adore every aspect of this story and I don't think that I can tell you that enough! You're one on those writers that can always keep me on my toes when usually I can see what's coming a mile away! Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: April 26, 2007 02:03 EDT
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Very interesting. Why did she ask if he swims every night and then asked him to be her lover? What is she up to? Does Kagome and her sons know what happened to her mates? This would be interesting Kagome/Hiei/Kurama. Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol lol OH YES IT WAS NICE LOL oH i LOVE THIS STORY SERIOUSLY THOUGH kAGS IS A LITTLE BRAZEN HUH *s* i KNOW i WOULD CHOOSE HEI TOO i THINK... *s* i WAS SHOCKED WITH SHIPPO THOUGH BUT i UNDERSTAND WHY HE DID IT. i AM GLAD YOU HAD yOKO sTOP WHEN HE DID WELL DONE. i LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER. oH i THINK hEI WILL BE SHOCKED BUT i DON'T KNOW IF HE WILL GO FOR IT AT FIRST. BTU YOU NEVER KNOW HE DOSE LOVE DANGER DOSEN'T HE...*s*
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Title: Ch. 5
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF?????!!!!!!! Omg! Kagome-chan asked Hiei-kun to be her LOVER?! Holy crap! And u had Shippou-chan ask her 2 court him? Omg! U know how to throw some good curve balls there! I'm now lost, kinda, not really, but in a small way... hehe... Anyhoo, this is a great story, once again! i hope u update, lyk, soon b/c now i'm waiting in suspense! dang you, you dumb cliffhanger! >,< but it is a wonderful story! it's sooo awesome! -Mee-chan
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what a cliffie!!! i cant wait to see hiei's reaction! i love the way yusuke just threw in his courtship offer...kinda like an afterthought...and shippo's SO sweet. awesome update, again!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 00:31 EDT
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woah that was a surprise... asking hiei to be her lover. hmm i think things are gunna get even more complicated
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give credit where credit is do my dear. One thing that is just nagging the shit out of me though...Kikyou seems to have slipped underneath everyone's thinking processes. I mean, she was a priestess with strong powers of purification who had always wanted to take Inuyasha to hell anyway and seemed to have a penchant for giving Kagome heartache. It would make sense for her to kill off Inuyasha and then her other mates just to make her suffer. Aside from that, Kurama is really being kind of a dense ass. He's usually so perceptive and whatnot that seeing him so close-minded is kind of startling. I would think he'd be the first to see the situation from every available angle. I don't think I've ever seen him so obtuse.
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You lie! Your work ethic is just fine; so much research evident in this chapter! Oh, to be in that lake... Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH God now she had dropped the Bomb !!! What the hell is Kagome thinking asking Hiei to be her Lover ? UUUHH I can´t wait for the update.Please update ASAP !!! ^^
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