| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: yue no rei On: April 13, 2007 08:49 EDT
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omg.. this is an amazing story so far with an awesome touch of mystery ne?
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 06:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was another great chapter. I like how you've got the team wavering between liking and suspicous of her. Youko in this sounds like a ruthless bastrad in this with him being control of the seduction. and poor hiei totally suspicous and totally attracted lol. As always the detail you have in each chapter is perfect and just adds more to the story. i loved how u described kagome's fighting style pretty cool. and what a cliffy, that was sooooo evilllll.
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Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 22:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Ahh a mystery!...If I spelled that wrong..then opps. but hey! Im glad to see that you posted a new fic up!!! I wonder where is one will be going...sigh..lol alright I can wait..not really XD well update when ever~
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: April 09, 2007 21:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was really good and a bitch cant help but thing WHEN R U GOING 2 GIVE THE FLASHBACK!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 21:22 EDT
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This is very creative. It is refreshing to see something new online, and I hope you continue it to completion. I'm going to go out on a limb here. I think she WILL be found to be the instrument of their deaths, but I also think it was planned and done with their consents. Could their souls have been used to create the barriers? ningenkai to reikai; reikai to makai and makai to ningenkai. That's three barriers and Youko said something about it being done around that time. The other logical possibility is the souls are in the sons, but somehow I don't think that's the case.
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Reviewed By: smilingkitsune On: April 09, 2007 11:21 EDT
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Congratulations on another fantastic chapter. It's so intriguing, I can't wait for the next installment. I also love the dialogue between Kurama and Youko. They're such a fun pair to work with.
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Title: missjay
Reviewed By: jem89 On: April 09, 2007 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's really interesting. I don't think I've read a mystery like this one before. Please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 05:01 EDT
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I loved this chapter! I liked the fact that Kagome was still able to calm everyone down even when she was out cold. I also like the fact that Hiei is ALREADY starting to feel the pull of Kagome's charm!!! Yeah! And that Kurama was denied the chance to shop alone with her. I also like the fact that Kuwabara was convinced that she didn't kill her mates! It;s good to know that ONE of them doesn't think she killed them. I also like the fact that you are bringing Mukuro and the other lords into play. It;s nice to know the history in stories! I also like all the Japanese that you use. It makes the story feel more real then if you would have used English words for it. I'm also sure that most people that don't know Japanese are thankful for the translations at the end of you story. I hope you are able to update soon! I'm looking forword to your next chapter! And hey, if you ever need a babysitter for your kids while in Minnesota (or a place to crash) just let me know!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 03:35 EDT
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luff it. you have a very intersting story here and good writting ablilities^_^ i wonder what happened to her mates and whats gonna happen to her...is the pairing Kurama/Kagome? or maybe a three way with a Kurama/Kagome/Hiei or Yusuke? hmm....lots of possibilities here lol well i look forward to you updateing soon. Ja ne ^_~
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, hell no!!! KAGOME CANNOT KILL HER MATES!!!! But update soon because this is getting GOOD!! I'm soooo happy that is is a Hiei/Kagome pairing. Update a.s.a.p!!!!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic, wonderful, truely original....you have a way for words and a way to make people keep asking for more....cant wait till you update ..... also i have this small request, for Hentai Bets could you do one more chapter about how Yusuke has to watch the little fire miko babies, because i know you would make it really funny...... Please update soon
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Title: In love
Reviewed By: InDecent [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've fallen in love with your story. I hope that you will continue this story and will finish it. You're a very good author. But great authors always finish their story, I have a feeling you will be a great author.
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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 17:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I lurv ur stories! It's so awesome! :D I hope 2 read more of your story soon! It's so wonderful, and ur idea's are some of the best EVA!!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 17:00 EDT
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Yay! Another great chappy! Totally love all Kagome's sons!! ^.^ and Hiei was brill in this chappy too- i really liked- And you're just dying to find out, aren't you?" "That's exactly what may happen, too," Hiei reminded them. Hehe! Perfect! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:38 EDT
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hehe thats one heck of an ending! she just wakes up and someone wants her for a mate already!
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