| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: SmilingKitsune On: April 19, 2007 14:38 EDT
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Once again a fabulous chapter full of wonderful things happening and my favorite.. err combo Kurama and Youko. I like the new addition of Kag's old teacher. He seems like an eccentric one worth keeping around. Yay for eccentrities :D
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Reviewed By: Me Myself & I On: April 19, 2007 14:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your story!! Now I wonder what Hiei is going to be doing to Kagome now that she is in hie cooling down spot! Hope they find out soon that she didn't kill her mates. I wonder who killed them though. I just bet that Ayame killed Kouga because he did'nt go with her, she always was a little freaky. Personally I think it would be better if it was just a Hiei/Kagome fic because they are TOTTAL opposites and well opposites attract. Kurama seems like too much of a good choice for her she needs a bad boy in her life not a good boy! Please update soon you just don't know A LOT of people really like your story so they want to know what happens next as soon as possible!! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 12:33 EDT
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No, you aren't too rushed. I just didn't want you to take my joke seriously. I love your story and check for updates frequently (like everyday). So you wont' hear me complain if you update often. I have seen some writers try and hurry a story to please the fans I don't want you to do that is all. Keep up the good work and can't wait until the next chapter!
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Title: Black Widow Miko
Reviewed By: BabyPhat_Chic69ner On: April 19, 2007 11:00 EDT
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This is awesome!!! OMG, is that Hiei that was looking/spying on Kagome when she's taking a bath? Oh my God. Please update a.s.a.p. Can't believe the Spirit Detectives suspect Kagome to be the suspect! Lol. Makes sense? Hehe.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i think this is extremely good and thanks for the reply. i love the way you write and please up date as soon as you can. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 00:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon...fantastic chapter, a way for words.. please update soon...
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Reviewed By: Thief Lava (not logged in) On: April 18, 2007 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your so EVIL!!!!!!! How could you just leave it like that??????? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:13 EDT
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Oooo, juicy tidbits! That was a good slice for the three; those dreams were a great touch. Now I'm ready to see what happens in the lake!
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Title: Ch. 4
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! Yay for the tidbits of lemon! ^__^ Very nice, and w/ Hiei all hot and heavy for her! *squeal* Hehe super awesome! And thanx for answering me! That makes me feel so special, especially w/ the long answer! Youko is such a horn dog! ^_^ Makin such drastic moves on oru little miko! ... Oh! I think I know how Inu/Sess/Kouga died! Did Kikyou come and kill them? You know, b/c she hates Kagome and all? Or am i totally wrong, and am making a fool of myself for even thinking that? Can't wait for the next chapter to come out! Your such a wondeful authoress! ^__^ -Mee-chan
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 21:15 EDT
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Ahhh...*sigh of contentment* I feel so much more sane now! Thanks for that, I need my sanity! Thinking about your story had given me writers' block for my story! -lol- Anywho, wonderful chapter darling, as always! I am completely enthralled in this story, every word of it!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice he he there in the lake together hmmmmmm, I think the water might just heat up *S*.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 21:06 EDT
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Lol, it's fine that I miss sleep in order to read, your story is completely orginal and it drives me insane with antisipation every time I read even a chapter of it. I want so badly to know what really happend to Inuyasha-sama, Sesshomaru-sama and Kouga-kun... but I know that you have to draw it out and not tell anyone (damnit!!) I will confess that I'm secretly hopeing that Kagome will just tell Kurama to go fuck himself or something because honestly he's getting on my nerves (WOW I ACTUALLY SAID THAT) I despritly want Hiei to show some kind of intrest in her, which is what made me squeel at the end of this chapter when he was behind her. *sighs sadly* Kagome-sama needs some happniess after after everything that she's been through... though again I wish I knew what it was that happened to her mates that makes even her not know if it's her fault or not. I could understand her guilt because if your mate dies then it's just natural to feel guilty... and if all three die then you would conciter yourself a curse and blame yourself for it no matter what it was that really happend. I loved the whole Kouga lime/lemon thing... that's the perfect relationship for her , honestly... you got the characters down pact with it and everything! I've kept you long enough now but I just wanted you to know how much this fic really means to me and how glad I am that you decided to update, I must also say that I feel honored that you rememberd me to put an answer to my last review in your fic, though I do have to say that although my username is inuyasha-1234, I would feel honored if you would call me by Mari-chan like my friends do (in both real life and online) if you ever need anything then don't be a stranger.... ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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plz update so the boys are accusing her for killing her mates i wonder what to her mates anyway but anyway plz continue
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 17:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...is it Jankotsu(Sp?) Great chapter, I loved it and i love the way you write these stories, always keep the viewer asking for more...Please up date this fantastic story soon..... From, loveinuyasha911(or MuppyPuppy)
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Reviewed By: smilingkitsune On: April 16, 2007 14:23 EDT
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Once again you left a fabulous chapter behind. It's almost fun to try and figure out what's going to happen next or who is going to be the next one to piss of the sons, although I had guessed it was Hiei I'm glad to see I wasn't wrong. Kurama's attitude slightly surprised me but it seems somehow more intriguing this way. I still love Kurama and Youko. They are a fabulous ...combo? What was it you decided to use? lol.
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