| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: angie..who? On: July 16, 2007 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh what a cliffy you left!!! I mean come on!!! You totally had me going until that little . hahahah Good chapter, real long, but some how just too short ...err..maybe not...I can't believe Sess is really alive!!! ..or is he?..Now I have 101 questions, lol Well keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 11:00 EDT
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omg i have been reading your story for at least a week. took me forever to catch up but know i wish i didnt kuz i have to wait for you to update!! that was so good why did you have to leave it there??? i wonder if it really is sesshoumaru OMG hiei is wathing isnt he??he's gonna be able to see the interaction with them!!!how xould you leave it there of all places!!!! its like watching an anime show when it gets all good and then the ending comes on we dont even get a preview or anything of the next chapter!!! i love the way all your chapters are extremely long. there are sometimes where i think it is a blessing and then i think it to be a curse!! more to read. but then it takes to long to read when i need to finish a story xD. i love the way every once in a while she compares hiei to one of her mates xD. how long do you plan to make the story (chapters). omg its soo good i cant stop thinking about it. lol sometimes i will make up parts to the chapter if i didnt get to finish it and then read the rest when i have the chance but nothing that i came up with never was as satisfying as your story, its so original xD where did you get the inspiration for it?...I have to stope typing lol ir else im afraid i will never stop xD. well i hope that you update soon!!! and keep up the good work!
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Title: You get the 3r's Girl!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is ch. 8: This outting was wonderfully described. It made me feel like I was there. Kagome's mom beau, Great add! Poor Hiei losing his control just can't help himself. Kurama is really pushing it uh? I don't know, but the wolf prince strikes me funny indeed.Iguess I'll have to wait and read on! Ch. 9: WOW! these two (Hiei and Kags) banging every night? I wish my libido worked like that. Good gracious! You are wonderful at writing your lemons. Great details and emotion packed! I love that! I love Shippou you know, I love how he just trip up the other suitors. That's my Kit! I knew Genkai would figure out about our lovers. From what I remembered of the small amount of series I watched, she cracks me up. I'm kind of glad somebody knows though. I got a feeling someone else knows. I'll read on! Peace! Ch. 10: Oh Snap! I love this chap! Kikyo on a rampage, some one should have cracked her clay rear end long ago. I tell you! And Ha! I knew that wolf guy was manure! And what the heck! Sesshomaru! What? You go girl! Damn, I fell out of my chair on that one. Something's up Right? Of course it is! Huh? Yeah? You go on with your bad self! Beautiful! Just Beautiful. Oh-Oh, Hiei! What about him? Ooo-child. Oh wow! I have to wait and wait I shall. With 4 curdmb snatchers, I have to gnash my fangs at them when it's my time so that's why I am reviewing these 3 wonderful chapters together. Now back to my 3r's for you. Ready? You Rock, you Roll, and you RULE!!!!! Peace!
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Title: FREAKIN' AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 12:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you've absolutely topped all the other fanfictions! Every chapter you just get better and better! And I DID enjoy the confrontations on this one, though I just wanted to KILL Kurama for being so stupid. How could he tie her to a tree like that!!? And that lemon scene was absolutely wonderful especially the argument! I'm sooo glad he told her that Yukina's his sister cuz I was going completely crazy about that! I hope they actually start kissing in the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: melmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 18:24 EDT
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i'm so happy another chapter is up it keeps my workday very ... tolerable... sometimes i cant finish the chapter at work so i have to read it at home and sometimes i just read the story over again and the next thing i know its 4 am and i ramble when i'm tired but yay! keep up the excellent work hell, i wish i could write half as good as you
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 20:21 EDT
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HOLY SHIT DID I LOVE ALL THEM!!!!! ANd now Sesshy-kun is back?! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: porygon75052 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really live your work i was surprised that your the same author of hentai bets which i read on adultfanfiction which wasnt complete like it was here why dont you add the chapters to there? also i hope that you didnt forget about that chest the yu yu gang found in kagome closet i am really interested in that keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 23:42 EDT
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omg i can't wait till the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: porygon75052 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic i bet its kikyou who did it are you going to have to put a time skip in there and sometimes i notice that you refre to all three being inu but only two are and one is wolf although wolves, dogs , and foxes all belong to the canine family it dosent really make the dogs only canines anyways put in some more clues please send me areply
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:57 EDT
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Sesshomaru?!?!??!?!?!? What the hell?!?! What about Hiei?! What's going on?! Gods this is an awsome fic!! please updating again soon!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god I was shock with the lemon but that was great I can't believe you left it on a cliffy Arg!!!!!!!! Please update soon Oh and I hope you get my e-mail I love what you have done with this fic. LOL a cow huh nice very nice, I can't whait to when she sees it is not Sesh but one of Kags sons I think it is just priceless!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: VB On: July 06, 2007 06:06 EDT
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How the heck could you leave it there?!?!?! You better update soon I was about ready to throw the computer when I realized that was the end. Please please please update soon.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 01:27 EDT
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Once again an amazing chapter from an amazing writer. I love the whole 'sleepwalking' deal. That was sweet. Her grandpa is just the greatest. It's fun to see Kagome and Hiei's relationship progressing so much. They're in so much denial and confusion but at the same time it seems amazing to me that only Genkai has picked up on it. I'm getting a headache trying to figure out who killed Kagome's three mates too by the way. I agree with Kagome that the three females just aren't strong enough. Especially with Ayame acting as she is, she's not guilty. She truly believes Kagome killed Kouga... or she is a fantastic actor. But if they didn't do it, who else could have? I'm going through a list of nemisis of hers and they're... all dead, more or less. So is this another loop you're throwing us for or what? Mmm... okay so my review is getting long so I'll cut out with a O.o How could you end the chapter like that? Sesshomaru!
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG girl! I can't believe you ended it that way! No fair! I hope you aren't planning to make me wait for an update for too long after a cliffhanger such as that. Ya know, I really hope Hiei gets his kiss. It's also rather nice to see him so intent on Kagome. It's funny that he thinks 'if' he decides to keep her...part of him already knows he won't let her go. As a side note, Kagome's mother's name is Ikumi ne? There was a paragraph where you wrote it as Izumi.
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: July 05, 2007 23:23 EDT
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omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what the fuck!!!!!!!! he's alive?????? are the others???? omg........ i didn't expect that!!!! update update update update update UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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