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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: The Daimyo On: October 24, 2007 02:56 EDT
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| Reviewed By: Anonymous2468 On: October 23, 2007 10:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!!
| Title: Where r u?
Reviewed By: Ebi-chan On: October 10, 2007 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated in forever!! Please, please be ok!! I don't want to rush you and bug you for the next chapter (even if my withdrawls have gotten to the point where I may need to be hospitalized) I just want to make sure everything's ok. I hope you and your family are well and that only something really great is keeping you away!! Hopefully you aren't suffering from writers block - and you'll be updating soon with a kick-ass chapter that's like 100 pages long!! LOL. Anyway, hope you'll be updating soon - I miss you *cries*. Well Wishes, Ebi-chan
| Title: Waiting...
Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 13:54 EDT
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Sigh. I don't like rushing people, so please don't think that I am, but I hadn't checked back in awhile due to some real-life happenings, and I thought for sure that you'd have updated by now. I'll admit it was a let-down...but genius takes time, eh? ^.^ I hope you're enjoying writing this chapter as much as you thought you would. Hopefully you'll have a brand new fantastic, miles-long chapter for us soon! In the meantime, thanks for writing and take care!
| Title: Great Day in the Miko-ville , ch 12
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not only did I grab a snack, I had breakfast lunch and dinner enjoying this chapter. It was well worth the wait and all your talents. I think with the way you write about Hiei and Kagome pairing, it is going to create quite a stir! But this chapter is so phenomenal! I was waiting for this to happen where the two of them would miss the mark with each other. I mean he know what he want, and so does she. It's always the little things misunderstandings give birth to. I always wonder if there are others that knows of their relationship and just not saying. Ummmmm... And Ayame got dusted off! Whoa! That wolf guy give me the willy-nillies!!! I knew he was crap. Now that he gave Kags this ultimatum, well I won't worry about him he's got enough going against him. Whoa wait, Kurama's room!!!!!Oh Hail-Naw!!! Really? Well I guess I have to wait to see what's in store. I know what you mean about music being a influence when writing. You've picked some great ones. I wish I had the drawing talent to do your story justice. I would love to. You've written wonderful scenes that just scream DRAW ME, DRAW ME! But the artist Sardave has done a terrific job on your stories. Truly talented. Again I want to thank you for reading my story. I'm honored that you also gave my story a shout-out to others. You are truly wonderful. The mysteries surrounding this story is tingling my spine as it is suppose to do. With great anticipation for your next installment, Peace!
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 23:30 EDT
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ahhh so intense!!! omg so much is happeneing rite now. the real fight is about to start, kagome is avoiding hiei, kurama is seducing kagome.... omg i can't wait til the next chapter!!
| Title: WHY???? -sob-
Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess On: August 27, 2007 17:57 EDT
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I can't believe you did that. I think I might cry if you actually make her go through with it. She wouldn't-she can't- NO!!! Seriously. I loved it up till that moment... you can't do that to Hiei! Bye, Bye, Ayame. What she said has somemerit. If Yemon got curious and asked a Healer... well, would he kill himself? He seems to kill everyone else he blames for not beingable to concieve... Maybe in a more humourous fic, huh? No, really, please make Kagome stop. It would completely ruin the foundation of Hiei and Kagome's relaionship. Kagome may have orgiven Hiei, but she would always doubt herself... and Hiei isn't that forgiving; it isn't in his nature. Just, please, I'm BEGGING you, oh Mighty One, DON'T DO IT! Why is Kagome so worried about going to Reikai for her mate's deaths, even though we all know that it would make her wildly unbelievably out of character... Unless she blames herself and believes she indirectly caused their deaths? Well, a bit obvious thatshe does, but... Man, yopu sure know how to leave someone in suspence. Thanks for being awesome! BTW, I loved the drawings in your art gallery, but mostlythe one where Hiei has his arms wrapped around Kagome, and they have their eyes closed... contement? it's called something like that... I'mnot sure wether you drew itornot, but awesome, anyway. The long chapters may take forever to get through... but I luv 'em anyway! You get so much cleared up, but continue to shroud things in mystery... though my father is always shouting at me for takng up the phoneline... (dial up)Than again, Rod is always yelling,so it's just something to add to the list! ^_^ can't wait to move out... but that's irelevant. Talk to ya next chapter! Luv ya lots, ~Youkai Goddess~
| Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 12:36 EDT
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DAMNIT DAMNIT DAMNIT!!! THIS IS NOT HOW THINGS WERE SUPPOSED TO WORK AT ALL!!!!!! KEEP WRITING MORE!!!!
| Reviewed By: Sammy36 On: August 27, 2007 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and Hiel just had all the great moments and then a small bump in the road and now she's in Kuruma room. Maybe something happening is all right but not all sex with them because that's harsh considering she's being drugged anyways and it doesn't fit Kagome character at all. Love and letss read more please.
| Reviewed By: Sammy36 On: August 27, 2007 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome and Hiel just had all the great moments and then a small bump in the road and now she's in Kuruma room. Maybe something happening is all right but not all sex with them because that's harsh considering she's being drugged anyways and it doesn't fit Kagome character at all. Love and letss read more please.
| Reviewed By: kitsune_youkai_jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 11:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update now i have to know who went to kurama's room ^_^ can't wait for the next update!
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 00:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUST when I was getting ready to be understanding, and perhaps a bit forgiving to Kurama, he pulls this garbage with the bracelet. Before I get there though, I loved the line about not mistaking Hiei for a pussycat. I also loved the bit about Hiei's thoughts on the Kamis' reasons for 'dangling the treasure in front of him.' and 'drowning in an onna who represented earth.' and the bit about her not getting it even after 500 years. Other fanfic writers have pointed out that Kagome was the tie that pulled the group together and that Kikyou really didn't love Inuyasha at all, but I don't think anyone has phrased it all quite so well ----- I liked the plan for the movies, esp. the bit when Hiei took 2 strawberry and 2 honey, and their mutual frustration that they couldn't sit next to each other. Then watching the movie together was so sweet. The dates you have created for them in the midst of this group are wonderful. I have a general question about the whole 'Hiei and ice cream (sweet snow) routine.' I've seen every anime and read (I think) every manga put out in english, and Haven't been able to figure out where the fanfic writers get the entire Hiei/ice cream connection, but I've seen it time and again in fanfics. Help would be appreciated. It must be fairly obscure, but it is a great way to "humanize" Hiei. Loved the lemon on the couch... very educational actually, and clearly you wanted to show that Kagome was not 'a sexual moron.' ---------------- moving right along, I wish mediaminer let us create paragraphs in these things. Ayume is dead. I feel a little sorry for her, actually, even though she is a bitch in this one. She let herself be treated as Yemen's mistress for these years. I don't dislike her as much as I dislike Kikyou and Kagura (at least this Kagura who is doing all the bad acts.) Foolish mistake on Ayume's part, though. No man is willing to hear a suggestion that he is less than the world's greatest lover, and virile to boot. I can't even finish all the things for the review, but will say the idea of the sons as matchmakers and bringing in Jin was great. From their point of view it makes sense. He is good looking, fairly strong by youkai standards, and is always cheerful and happy go lucky. THey probably figure he is exactly what she needs. Interesting describtion of Kagura's ability to hold a grudge. What does that foreshadow? ----------------- two last quick comments. Kurama wants her, but he really isn't into her (as he clearly can separate out things and he still thinks she may have something to do with their deaths.) Frankly, I DO think she had something to do with it. the comments she has made, and the thoughts of hers we have overheard indicate she knows more than she is saying. She would never NEVER kill them, but if they were dying or dead she may have done something with their souls. I'm inclined to stand on my theory from an earlier review. This may have a "needs of the many outweigh..." solution. I've missed a lot of stuff, such as the great scene with her wearing red for the first time, the box situation (whatever is in there is important) and the whole fight (hard but very realistic) and will try to comment on those areas later. If I don't get back to you before you update... I really really hope things get worked out next chapter, and that you don't have Hiei and Kagome with days of angry or emotionally distraught misunderstandings. Please let Hiei figure out the bracement, destroy it and then smack Kurama soundly about the grounds of the house. Poor Hiei, he has had so little, and fought for what little he did get, and the whole scene where she rejected his suit was so traumatic for him. It is good he figured out her reasoning, and can be somewhat understanding, but still, you never fully recover from childhood traumas, and to be told Kagome won't mate him must be horrible for him. Well, this review appears to be out of space. Can you say 'verbose?"
| Title: Ch. 12
Reviewed By: HalfBlackWolfDemon (nli) On: August 24, 2007 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I luved that! Hiei's so awesome! *giggle* She kinda made me mad, but I cooled off when Hiei figured it out :P Lol, I bet it was hard writing for Jin, XD He talks so… *glomp's Jin* Ur so adorable! *giggle* (o.0 you drew a diagram!? Holy crap! You should totally post it! Well, if you want to anyway :P) I luv his ears! *tweaks Jin's ears* :P I luved that! YOSH! *strikes good guy pose* GO YEMON! Now you can drop dead! *evil laughter in background* :P Lol. I'm so glad *hugs luvable oaf* Kazuma-kun is teh BEST!! *huggle* Anyhoo Aw! So cute! Hiei was pretty surprised, wasn't he? Lol! I just wanted to pinch his cheekies! *giggle* "I guess you might have forgotten how to do it after 500 years without any, -- of these sodas, I mean" Omg! Eishumaru!!! That's was priceless! Kagome dearly died from her soda!!! XD Lol!!!! 0.,o Nosebleed city!!! Bet Hiei was happy about that! XD Anyhoo (again XD), DING DONG AYAME'S DEAD!!! *dances* Wow, I would love to have a gown like that! (Though, it would look ugly on me, b/c I'm so flabby! Lol!) It sounds freakin gorgeous!!1!!!!! My gosh! Hiei was so tender! *tears* I totally envy Kagome-chan! Oooo, wat's in the box? (or, did I miss something that was in an earlier chapter? :P) *smacks Kurama w/ two rolled up, Sunday newspapers* YOU STUPID IDIOT! You never give out stuff like that again! *pulls on Youko's awesome ears* EGOTISTICAL KNOW-IT-ALL! I swear! If Hiei doesn't kill you in the next chapter, then I will! And you will lose all that makes you male, and I will put estrogen pills in ur food/drink and make you freakin grow boobs and force u to get a SEX CHANGE!!!! *snarls* *calming breath* *huggles Naru-chan* Ok… Now I'm better! XD Sry :P Poor Hiei-chan! :( He was so devastated… I wanted to hug him so bad :( At least Hiei got over his anger w/ Kazuma-kun wanting to mate Yukina-chan! That's going to be so cute! *giggles* *snarles again* KURAMA!!! I WARNED YOU!!!! *chases after fox* GET YOUR FUFFY ASS BACK HERE!!!! Naruto: Ahem, sry 4 Blackies… uhm… distraction, but she wants you to know that she loved your story and hopes to read more from you, and is in the process of writing the next chapter for Iyashii, and is totally reconstructing Zetti, and she also is very embaressed, and is very glad that you are spreding her story around… We all know she is a review hog XD Blackie: I HEARD THAT BLONDIE!!!! Naruto: Anyway, please update! I luv this story too! YAY FOR EISHUMARU!!!!
| Title: FUCKING AWESOME!!
Reviewed By: Kiba_Girl1400 (not signed in) On: August 24, 2007 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe she went to kurama!!! I was like maybe Kagome and Hiei would meet up in the kitchen and have passionate sex there but nooooooo she just had to go to Kurama. Damn him and his braclet!! I have never been so pissed off at an anime character in my life (shakes fist). I mean im twice as mad at Hiei for springing up a situation like that all of a sudden but dammit Kagome had no right (huffs and puffs). Okay before i become to obsessed with my ranting and have an anti-Kurama and Kagome moment i will tell you how much i love this story and that its such a shame that mediaminer doesn't have story alert. Maybe they do and i just don't know about it. i can't wait to see what happens next. Will Hiei see Kagome leaving Kurama's room? Will Kagome snap to her senses and push Kurama away? Or will her going to Kurama cause a rift between the two 'friends'? Or maybe Hiei will say "to hell with it" and burn down the house? (i like the last one. lol) I guess i will have to find out next time. (chants update over and over). Ja ne ^_^
| Reviewed By: ebi-chan On: August 23, 2007 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...But I sleep better with you... Singlehandedly THE most corniest thing anyone could ever say - but how I love it !!! This chapter had my emotions all over the place (good thing I'm not PMS-ing). First they were, dare I say, tender - then the wolf b*st*rd kills Ayame - thank God for small miracles - Kagome's sons are trying to hook their mom up with potential mates - 2 of them think she's having an afair with Kurama, only one of them guessed right (glad to know Genkai and Gramps can keep a secret). Kurama is resorting to aphrodisiacs, Hiei gets his panties in a big 'ol knot, has a fight with Kags, runs off to the Maikai and now Kagome's running to Kurama's room in the middle of the night. Holy cow girl!! Talk about rollercoasters, twists and turns - I think the only thing left to shock us with is if Kurabawa were to announce his plans for a sex change operation!! I mean wow... I'm absolutely gobsmacked, I just, wow... I loved this chapter - just like all the other ones though I really wanted to shake my computer 'til the next chapter appeared. You had me going with all of Kag's questions to Hiei about the Jagan and how it can be used - I seriously thought she was going to tell him to look into her memories. Oh, and I really really really want to know what's in that box that Jaken and Myoga found - and why she's hellbent on ignoring it, enquiring minds want to know!! Seriously this was another awesome chapter and my fix has been thoroughly satisfied - for now at least, give me a few days and I'll be Pookie all over again. I'm beginning to think my family, friends, and co-workers may think I'm on drugs. I'm so hooked/addicted to this story that it should be illegal. I wonder if there's a support group out there like Fanfic Anonymous. Oh well even if there was I wouldn't go - I don't want to give up this addiction!!! "They tried to make me go to rehab but I said no no no". I can't wait til the next chapter comes and hopefully life and it's many bumps won't be too hard on you so we don't have to wait long, but even if we have to it's definitely worth it!!! Keep up the awesome work. ~ebi-chan
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