| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damned thing cut off my review! so yeah, was wondering if i should email just to see how things were, when i saw the update. got my in the wee hours as usual, reading frantically. and still trying to figure out the mystery! Kurama, as much as i like his pretty hair earned that trim, he'll be lucky if he isn't scorched bald now that things have been pushed to light. The trust/betrayal aspects took me off guard but i'm rather stunned looking back that others haven't much touched on it to my knowledge. Well done and trying to be patient for the next update! Silvermist
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2009 06:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd been debating sending an email to see how you were in general, I was rather delightfully shocked to see this update. On to the review! Got me in the early am again, and reading determinedly. I loved the fight scene, and Kagome's reactions after.
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Reviewed By: kitsune_youkai_jade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 20:40 EDT
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Thank you so much i have been waiting for this ^_^
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Reviewed By: HanyouKagome962 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 17:41 EDT
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when i saw you had updated i did a double take cuz it had been so long but im glad you finally updated and with another fantastic chapter so i can really complain all i can say is that i hope the next chapter doesnt take as long for u to complete. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Colin1234 On: May 31, 2009 17:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter was very well done and the details are great and that is what makes the story so good. Nice job and can't wait to read more of one of the top five stories or so that I have ever read. Just keep up the nice work and don't wait another 8 months or so to update because the supense might be to much.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: May 31, 2009 16:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Always glad to see an update from you, madmiko! Forgive the sort review, im just in from work, but had to read this chapter before i went to sleep! Loved it, and what a cliffy! Good luck with the update!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2009 15:53 EDT
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you sneak... that is so not fair!!!! i wanted more.... update soon.... i want to know some more!!!! especially Hiei's reaction to Kagome being pregnant.... waiting for more.... great chapter...waiting patiently for another
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Reviewed By: kitsune_youkai_jade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2009 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please update soon i totally love this fic and have been following it since you first wrote it ^_^
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 02:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest, this is the first real review Ive left in quite a while. Im absolutely sucked into this story. I can seriously take 6 or more hours out of a day just to read it. I am very downhearted to see the lack of updates. not to mention the large gaps of space inbetween said updates. I was very pleased with the last chapter. It is finally getting somewhere with the murder case. I believe this proves without a doubt that Kagome is not the murderer. Seeing as how Kurama (who everone is convinced is her lover) was poisoned & stabbed by someone appearing to be Kagome. But she has a solid aliby having been with Hiei the entire night. I can not wait to find out who it was. Im also pleased that Kagome & Hiei's relationship is out in the open. I am also semi-patiently awaiting the result of Genkai's aura exam on Hiei & Yukina. I love all the detail for all the japanese ceremonies. I do hope to see the next chapter soon as the last was posted a few months back. I am very curious about Ginjiro... though I have a few guesses as to how they could be related. Sesshomarus father may not have had any more children but what about his mother? The Lady of the West surely took another lover after the Great Dog General. it has been a very long time & I can see her trying for another son simply bc Sesh & Inu took a human mate (the same human, mind you). It could also give her a reason to want Kagome dead. Because she sees her as a dishonour to her family.
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 12:06 EST
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Ooh, I took a long time reading this chapter!! It didn't help matters when I went back to reread scenes I really liked before I was through. The part about Hiei and Yukina's relationship fit so well into the scenario that I was struck by your superior plotting skills. ^_^ Your attention to the minute details and your research on the traditional wedding ceremonies really make me realize how very little I know about other cultures. And Hiei and Kagome's private time was all I could read before I had to go back and read it again...it was perfect! It's about time that Kurama learns that he's lost.
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Reviewed By: machille18 On: October 21, 2008 15:56 EDT
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ive gotta say that this is prob one of the most well writen fics ive come across, it keeps me hungry for more and if it wasnt already posted on the internet im sure if u renamed the characters and tweeked it enough to where it was no longer inuyasha and yu yu hakusho you could have gotten it published. Ive really enjoyed reading this and I hope u update soon
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Title: CALLING ALL FANS OF BWM
Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 21:36 EDT
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"I am MADMIKO and I approve this message" ** JUST KIDDING :-) but she did agree to my doing this. This isn't a review of BWM, but an announcement of Madmiko and Ryukotsusei's forum for a Hiei/Kagome discussion board called 'The Deadliest Sin.' It is at www.thedeadliestsin.proboards55.com ; They started it about 3 months ago. we could use lots of members to discuss different aspects of Hiei and Kagome's relationship. I have 2 BMW threads started. One is about Kagura and what she might know and the other is a hypothesis on who really fathered Ginjiro. That one is actually getting fewer hits and I think the title leads people to think it is a definite answer. It really isn't, but it is my analysis of the situation. I want to talk to people about their hypotheses not only on Ginjiro's father, but also on who killed Kagome's husbands. Ryukotsusei can't discuss it because Madmiko has talked to her. SO PLEASE COME join and throw your two cents into it. AND, if that isn't enough, they are running a contest for members of the board with real prizes (deadline October 31) to create new Hiei/Kagome stories. First prize is a pair of Hiei and Kagome action figures. Now I shouldn't have told you about that ;-) that just means more competition for me. But seriously, check it out.
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Reviewed By: GuanTokai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like to say that I've enjoyed this story since I found it. I must say that the mystery is a really great one and if you don't mind can I make a guess of the killer. that is if you don't mind though other wise I won't do so. Well I've also read a bit of your other works and I like them so good luck with the writing and have fun.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 03:19 EDT
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this is a great story so far, i'm glad i found it. i hope i'm wrong about who the killer is, but i'll find out soon
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Title: *sigh*
Reviewed By: Vert On: September 02, 2008 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I didn't like your story so much, I'd hate you right now. Next time don't take so long. >.
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