| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 19:33 EDT
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Hm, I just got around to looking up "Send Me An Angel" since I'd never heard it before. Good song. ^.^
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Title: KEEP WRITING!
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! WTF IS THIS!!!?*Starts crying* Not Kurama!!!PlllleeAAASSEE tell me she'll snap out it or have Hiei come in and save the day! *cries harder* it's just cruel to leave a cliff hanger like that!*half crazy * Wait! I know! It's really Kikyou isn't it !?*takes calming breathes* ok....I'm good now. I gotta say though, you set up Kagome and Hiei's fight perfectly.....-_- the dumbasses. And you keep on setting Kurama up! (even though he plays a great role in this you're making me want to kill him!!!) It suits him somehow though. But I'm just DYING to know what really happened with Kagome's mates! Is it coming up soon?
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 06:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No my theory didn't pan out so far it could though . bad Form Kuroma bad Form hei is gonna be so pist oh I can not wait I thinki fight is comming and the truth may come out soon. *S* please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: August 22, 2007 20:51 EDT
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awww, poor Hiei. Wonder why Kuwbara is so sure Kagome is innocent and Kurama still thinks she's not? At least clear the truth about Kagura's child. Please update ASAP
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Title: KawaiiKekeChanNLI
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 12:59 EDT
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What a lovely, juicy, long chappy! So many good moments that when i read them i thought, 'i have to comment on this when i review!!'. So... Jin- kami, you got his accent perfect!! he was such a sweetie!! And Toya was great, too! Kagome's thoughts of Hiei being like when she fell in love with inu were just so cute! I could like, feel her emotions so clearly!! Hiei and Kagome's 'date' was just so sweet too- and it ended perfectly! Hiei's gift to Kagome was totally perfect, too- i know I've said this before, but i love the way you incorperate japanese culture into your fics- it just makes them more realistic! And it was so symbolic too, because it showed that by wearing it for Hiei, and then making love on top of it with him, that she was moving on with her life, and loving again! (which she deserves!) Ooh, Kurama-kun is being very naughty lol! Hiei is going to cut off more than his hands when he finds out what the tricky kitsune is up too! I can't wait to find out how that develops.... And whats in the box? Hehe, i can only ponder... Poor, poor Hiei! It was too sad when he was 'refused'....I'm glad you pointed out he knew the reason though- many other authors may have made him all angry and not-knowing why Kagome couldn't say yes, but you kept it real!! *hugs* And i loved it when he was talking about locking her up so he cold storm away and come back and find her, and how she wasn't making any sense- you could just imagine his jumbled mind at that point!! And poor Kagome...the repetition of their thoughts was a great way of displaying how similar they are! And Ayame's dead! Well, that's one less threat, but also one less suspect! Oooh, i can't wait for the next chappy! Sounds brilliant!! And arigato for dropping my story in at the end- I'm off to read the others! Oh, and gomen for not reviewing last chappy- i just got a new laptop at the time, and i was having trouble just reading the chapter!! Update when you can, and i hope its easier to write than this one was!!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS(notloggedin) On: August 21, 2007 23:58 EDT
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Oh no! Hiei and Kagome are split up and Kurama is being a sly perv. What is the world coming to? While I'm most definitely looking forward to the next chapter, I'm still wondering what the hell else you're going to through at me. Lol, you're such a wonderful author and I look forward to more. Good lcuk.
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 18:27 EDT
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I am soooo glad you updated! 3 1/2 weeks to my due date and I was going nuts for something to distract me for a bit. Hope to see another update soon and I can't wait to see what happens and what happened to Mates 1,2, and 3.
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 18:02 EDT
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I spent most of my time at work today thinking of ways that this could turn out to be not so evil as that cliffhanger makes it out to be. I came up with several ideas, but the waiting to find out if any are right is gonna be killer. Just thought you should know. =D
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 09:51 EDT
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y'know..mad miko sama....YOU ARE AMAZING!!! (and you're a mom to top it off?!?! HOT DAMN!!!) I guess i can live with Kurama being all...annoying... cuz i'm reading Not the Only One and it sort of balances me out. still. every chapter you totally out do yourself!! i shall try to get more chapters out. im sorry if the story is boring or the chapters are taking too long. *beats chest with fist* mea culpa, mea culpa. *chest is bruised beyond repair* damn. (Jk!!)
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: August 21, 2007 07:09 EDT
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Dang it! Kurama is really grating on my nerves this time. Once again you have me left in a nerve-wracking, nail-biting(not really) mess. Argh! Im so keen on reading the next chapter >
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 01:47 EDT
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omg she has to accept hiei omg
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only a third of the way through the update so I'm working hard at not seeing the reviews (spoilers), but just had to say... AMAZING. You interaction between Hiei and Kagome on the beach was great. Very much in character for Hiei, and he is so tough to pair with someone while keeping him in character. I skipped to the bottom to see your comments on the reviews. Perhaps I was a LITTLE hard on Kurama, but He was touching her intimately and trying to physically seduce her when she couldn't get away. Perhaps I will be satisfied with only a little blood, and an honest understanding of the fact that he was way over the line on that one. I know he was trying to seduce her into giving up information by sexually assaulting her, and hubris doesn't even begin to describe the arrogance required for Kurama to think that was a realistic possibility. However, I disagree about something. While you wrote the words and shaped the actions of the characters, I think you are wrong that Kurama's ultimate goal that night wasn't to seduce Kagome. He planned to use his self designated "superior sexual skills" to induce Kagome to give up valuable information, and THEN to convince her to have sex with him.
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Title: Black Widow Miko
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 23:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
True. One down ... two to go. Hehehe. I can't wait for the next chapter. :D I can't wait for the other two bitches deaths either. I hope it's painful and slow. *Hint Hint*
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 22:49 EDT
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You...! How could you do that? So, so, SO evil! I mean, I was waiting for AGES for this update and then...then it ends like that?! So unfair. How come neither Hiei nor Kagome picked up on Kurama's ki in that damned bracelet anyway? I sure hope Hiei saves the day and busts down the door to get to her before something bad happens. And Kurama...damned cocky kitsune. Misty told me before I read this chapter that you needed to be spanked and now I whole-heartedly agree. What is that miko thinking?
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Reviewed By: Shadeless Night On: August 20, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man was that chapter amazing! First of all i have to thank you for just how much work you put into that thing cause it was freaking long! lol But every second of it was awesome so kudos! I love that Hiei and Kagome finally got it together with recognizing their feelings but it's sadly ironic that right when it happens they go and have a lovers' spat ^^ *sighs* Oh well it was kinda expected from those two ;) Haha i never thought Kurama would stoop so low, but i guess when a kitsunes determined, he's determined. But i digress, I cannot wait for the next chapter cause that cliffy was quite evil *glares* but it just makes me that much more anxious for what's to come. Thankyou again for the chapter and your story is pure brilliance! :)
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