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Reviewed By: Timmy24 On: May 27, 2007 03:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far it's one of the best i read. The plot and character development is all there with great detail which is the key. Can't wait to read more and see Kagome and Hiel together. Write more soon please.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:32 EDT
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Well I'll be go to hell. Kagura sure knows how to add flames to the spark ne? I just love how you keep twisting everything around in here. It's so well thought out and gripping and I just totally love you lol. Once again I enjoy the Japanese culture added to the story so it doesn't feel so much like an american anime but an anime. You are just too wonderful for words and I look forward to your next chapter. You're a very inspiring writer. Reading this has made me think about pulling out some of my other stories I never finished and probably should someday. Once more I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG OMG OMG!!! that was totally unexpected!!! i loved it!! hiei's gonna get "it" hehehe!! i love anything refering to sex! what really happened with her mates and when is hiei gonna make a move?
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 17:53 EDT
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woah another surprise... kagura says that sess had a son with her. wonder if that is really true? really enjoyed this chapter w/ the whole theme park and stuff. ill be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 17:07 EDT
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Juhu finally some Info about Kagome and her mates ^^ GRRR Kagura you bitch!!!!( die, die , die )Poot Hiei. He suffers so much heheheh ^^ Great Chappie. Please update Asap ^^
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Reviewed By: ebi-chan On: May 26, 2007 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't believe that I just cames across this story! I've just spent the last 14 hours reading it (yeah I like to read slow so I don't miss any info). I have to say I don't think I've ever fallen in love with a story before and I've fallen hard for this one :) I love the way you portray each character, especially Kurama. I'm so tired of fics that have him always polite, never seemingly malicious only truly serious when Youko kinda takes over. I think that many people forget that while Kurama is very polite and diplomatic it is also a cover because straight done into his soul he is a DEMON and a THIEF and can be very BLOODTHIRSTY!! It is truly a breathe of fresh air! Anyway I would to comend you on a job very well done as well as ask for a little insight - I read your author's notes and your answers to other viewers questions/comments - I know you mentioned how the detectives did not ask her for her side of the story because they assumed her to be guilty and therefore lie about it, I also know you mentioned how they are starting to see how things are sorta swaying "her way". I recall reading about the time Sesshoumaru was killed and how she was found passed out from a head injury and couldn't seem to recall what happened due to the head truma. My question I guess is - could Hiei "help" her to remember with the Jagan? It's not that she didn't witness what went on - she was there afterall - but she can't remeber because of her injuries. i just wasn't sure if that is something he could do with "the creepy eye thing" LOL. But anyway I'm rambling and this is an awfully long review! Again Kudos to you for this wonderful story and I anticipate eagerly the next update - and hopefully the next chapters and the characters will cooperate better * shakes head woefully * I think I'd have to kill something if I spent 11 days typing to have to turn around and spend 4 deleting!! ~Thanks for a great story~
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: May 26, 2007 15:04 EDT
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Isn't their a way to prove Kagura's clam about her son's being Sesshomaru's? If so, she must know about it, or maybe not. Wonder if their is someone out there, that can once and for all prove Kagome's innocence. The other thing they can try is, to have one of them pretend to be her mate, perhaps to bring out the killer/killers. Did all three mates died, when she's pregnant? If so, wonder why? Hmmm. I hope Kagome and her kids don't agree to Kagura's deal. Is their a reason why she made that deal, other the perhaps to hurt Kagome. I'm really hoping their is a way to prove for once and for all about that kid not being Sesshomaru's. If their is a way, I hope they do it in front of everyone. The kid doesn't deserve it, but at least the world would know what kind of person Kagura is. (No offense but she's not my favorite person.) Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an awesome chapter...now shippo's spilled the beans about kikyou, kagura, and ayame...but not enough...i forget: do the guys know kikyou was a miko? anyways! i only have one word for that ending : WOW!!!
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:17 EDT
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Well damn. Bet that threw poor Hiei for one helluva loop. It's one thing to be on the receiving end of her sleeping advancing thinking she's thinking of her mates and it's entirely different to know she's thinking of him. I bet he came up with some brand new curses because of that. I am still thinking that Kikyou had more to do with everything. I'm surprised it hasn't yet been mentioned she was a miko as well. I thought Myouga surely would have let that bit slip. She never really liked Kagome much and I could easily see her rallying Ayame and Kagura to her cause. Then again, I think it would be even easier for her to have done them all in. Considering they were all poisoned, it would have disturbed their senses enough to not know who she was and given that the two look alike, under the influence of poison, she could've gotten close to Sesshoumaru and Kouga and killed them without them knowing it was Kikyou.
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Title: Black Widow Miko
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 13:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well damn. This story is getting more and more confusing. Not your story. I mean the Black Widow Case or whatever. Damn. Kagura is sure is conceited. Rubbing in Kagome's face like that. I don't like one of her son belongs to her and Sesshoumaru. Maybe she has a spell on her son to make him look like Sesshoumaru? She is a Wind Witch after all, right? Too bad Kagome is so nice and all, or I bet that she'll put Kagura in her place. Besides, everyone felt sorry for Kagura. She was, after all, controlled by Naraku and all. His puppet, like you mentioned. Who knows? Kagome might brought it up, in a mean why. But then again, it's not the ways of Kagome. Lolz. Please update a.s.a.p. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the little tidbits of fluff you threw in at the end of this one. And the walk on the beach was adorable. *sigh* I'm such a sap. And believe me; you aren't the only one that deletes that way when the words take on a life of their own and take you on a tangent. Why do you think my next chapter is taking so long? Nevermind the drawings I'm working on too, though. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:09 EDT
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Ah, i see! ^.^ What another amazing chapter!!! It had everything! I was laughing out loud so much!! My favs were Hiei wanting to 'dunk Kurama in three times and bring him up twice' and Hiei wondering how cold Tokyo Bay was! Classic!! And of course getting to see the YYH girls was great too- and I'm totally loving Kagome's jealously of Hiei and Yukina- i can't wait to see how see finds out the truth! Hehe, what a great way to end the chapter. I dying to find out about Kagura and Sesshomaru's so called son...as always, update when you can!!!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 09:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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so is lord yemon a bad guy from chapter 7 he seen to keep a secret or something but anyway plz continue
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Title: urm...update...plz??
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello! My YuYu Hakusho fic is up and i would so like you to read it!! Um and please dont take this for a flame (cuz its not!) but... HOW COULD YOU END A CHAPTER LIKE THAT?!?!?!? AGHJKHSOGIHweigJLKDGSGKJ (translation: becky+cliffies= unhappy ducky) but it was a good chapter. okay...so im guessing Kagura is good (like way way way WAY deep inside) but kikyo isnt. MAYBE KIKYO purified them?!?!?!? or maybe they were working together?? plz update so that i dont kill myself with the anticipation!!! (oh by the way, i didnt say this when i first read your fic, but i support Sesshoumaru/Kagome ALL THE WAY!!)
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mea culpa. You so deserve reviews and I'm a terribly lax reviewer. Please, please. .. . its the 21st. Its been a week. Personally, I'm surprised more reviewers haven't commented on the "tall dark" individual who witnessed kagome and hiei. I'm having trouble deciding who that is, but my inclination is towards Zang. I can't wait for them to kiss. Clearly, you are saving that up as a demonstration of affection between the two, but I did think it was odd that Kagome wants to screw w/o kissing. I guess I just can't see separating the two. Hiei is already quite possessive, and doesn't want Kurama to see her naked.
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