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Reviewed By: inu_fan001 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter....AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !1
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Reviewed By: alissa On: October 28, 2007 04:14 EDT
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oh my god!!!! please update soon before i rip my hair out waiting!!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long dark hair in Kurama's bedroom... that's just evil what you did to us. Are you planning the same for next time? another side step on this cliffie? I agree with Brokensouledpoetess. Youko is going to have a kitten fit (or is that kitsune fit?) when he finds that Kagome and Hiei have been playing footsies under the table almost their entire acquaintance. Really the fit will only be due to his annoyance at missing out on Kagome and, in effect, losing to Hiei. It is all about the ego with Kurama. I hope you do a good long description of his expression and thoughts when you finally out them. At this point you seem to be outing them person by person. Zhang has known for ages, Genkai and grampa know & the sons are beginning to strongly suspect. Plus Kuwabara may start to figure it out from the whole "red string of destiny." Loved that bit by the way. If too many more people figure it out it will ruin the big "THEY'RE DOING WHAT??" explosion/shock scene I've been anticipating/hoping for. More detail later, but it is very late where I live. Nice to see Kagome make one last attempt to save Kikyou, then surrender to the inevitable and finish her off. In my opinion, it was exactly what a grown up Kagome would do, one who hadnt lost her ideals, but had faced enough adversity to know sometimes there just isnt any way to save someone who doesn't want to be helped and you can't keep beating yourself against a brick wall.
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 00:45 EDT
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What'd I think? Are you fucking shitting me? What I think is that you are pure evil. Why must you always end the chapters with horrible, evil cliffies? SO not fair. On another note I was delighted to see this updated and it was an excellent chapter. I can't wait to see what has Kagome so scared for Hiei and how the boys will take her pregnancy. I bet good ol' Youko is gonna just about swallow his own tongue when he finds out Kagome's been rejecting him to go bump fuzzies with the temperamental hiyoukai. And yes, birth was uber quick. Liam wanted out faster than the doctor could get there and he was even in the hospital already.
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Title: Black Widow Miko
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 19:56 EDT
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Kikyo's death was fine. I just hoped that her death is more ... ... bloody? With blood and lots and lots of screaming. Then again, she's dead. I don't think the wench has blood, ash and clay, yes.
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Reviewed By: darkjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 18:21 EDT
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I should've known you would not let something like that happen. I feel so much like a sucker for that one. I guess the fox gets to live. Yea for lemon! Boo for cliff hanger! Yeah, this one did qualify as a rather emo chapter. I was so relieved to see them together again, and I was so hoping Kagome would be too lost in passion to notice what our little fire baby was up to. Oh well. That'll teach her to use the timing method. :-) And, of course, it looks like I'm finally going to get somewhere with this mystery, but I still have to wait! *shake the laptop* Well written, as I have come to expect. I could practically hear your soundtrack when Hiei was comforting Kagome. Glad to see Kikyo is gone. Not one of my more coherent reviews, but I'm tired. Happy dance has been performed, and I will go back to staring at my e-mail.
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Title: KawaiiKekeChanNLI
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 18:17 EDT
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Wah! You updated! I'm soo happy! ^.^ Another fab chapter- how naughtyof you to make me think it was Kagome that had went to sleep with kurama! Cleverly done!! I loved the comment about having a 'height requrement' for Kagome's mate- Hiei would NOT be happy about that one!! And the long awaiting making up lemon- yum! That was fantastic! BUT another twist! Kagome's pregnant with twins! Kawaii! However...she blasted the father against the room!! (between our stories, we do knock poor Hiei about a lot! ^_^) Can't wait for next chappy! Update when pos!!
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Reviewed By: selenitypotter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 16:31 EDT
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Christine Nicole made her appearance 9 days early. She was a healthy 7 lbs 9 oz, and 19 1/2 inches long. And I do get lots of snuggle time as she doesn't like being put down. You would think at 7 weeks old she would sleep in her own bed! Loved the chapter, I got to read it while I fed the baby and she took a nap. Hope you update sooner than this last time, I'm dying to find out what happened next!
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Reviewed By: Latch [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 15:43 EDT
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jsdakgh. I JUST read the last chapter of this last night, mourning that one of the fabulous YYH/IY crossovers was leaving me hanging. Either great timing on my part, or yours. XD Lovelyovelylovely chapter. I've had my suspicions for a while about how Kagome's mates met their end. I'll be interested to see if I'm correct. 8D -eagerly awaits-
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 14:49 EDT
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Wow! This was so worth the wait. Oooh, that story is so eagerly awaited by so many of us!! And you put a (couple) of babies into the mix!!! *squeal* That poor little girl...or better yet; that poor little girl's suitor once it comes to that...four brothers, and Hiei as a papa.^^; Of course, you are most welcome for the drawings of her sons. It did me some good to put visuals with the chapter! I hope it fills everyone's idea of how they should look. Congrats on being nominated, and as usual, I look forward to your next chapter! *hug*
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! you are so evil! i guess its ok, patience is a virtue after all...i love that sassouta wants to make hiei kagome's mate...thats so cute (and so perfect too)! kikyou knew just how to get kagome to come to her...its sad that she would use that agsinst her...but she tended to do that alot in the manga/anime, so i could see her doing it. but that HORRIBLE ending!!! totally totally totally evil! omg i dont know how im going to wait for the update! So, im glad were getting kagomes story next chapter, but...wow. thats just crazy! so did inuyasha, sesshoumaru, and kouga have to go through that too? right after she concieved? hmm lots to think on until next chapter too.
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Title: Woah
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 12:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOHHOOO Finally ^^ The next Chapter will tell her Story Yeah can´t wait to read it ^^ heheh MUhhh you are grilling me here, now I have to wait to read it MUHH. I have an Idea now what happend to her mates : I think she killed them but didn´t want to do it. I mean in this Chapter Kagome explains to Kikyo that her Soul is many many Years old and that it was reincarnated three times. Every times from a Powerfull Miko right ? ^^ So Mikos are Fighters against Demons and evil right ? So I think that Kagomes Soul trys to destroy the "evil Demon " that mated her to protect her. I mean I think that her Soul doesn´t want more Demons to come in the World and so they kill the Mates of Kagome to stop her from getting more Offspring from her Mate. Its just an Idea but I hope I will get the answers in the next Chapter ^^ And one more thing : I love your writing ^^ The Story is Great and the Places you describe are awesome too. And the way you let us in the Dark about the Murders is awesome too, because I read many Fics about Murders and in every one of them I always have known how was the Murder in the First 5 Chapters so Gratulation for your Great Mind ^^ I hope you will be writing more Fics after this one and I will bet they are Hiei/Kagome too ( I love this Pairing so much no other will do ) So I send my Thanks to you for this awesome Fic and hope You update soon ( UFF this was a Mouthfull now ^^ The longest Rewiew I ever wrote ^^ )
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD! I mean...GOOOOODDDDD!!! How do you manage to do it every chapter? I, in a million ways, admire your talent. I'm so freakin' jealous!!! I can't wait for the next chapter...this is so insane!!!! YAY!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 06:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you're back! You're right, you ARE evil. Sneaky too. *grin* Beautifully written, I still want to "fix" kurama though. Fight scene, wonderful, fitting really. Kag certainly told her. Rofl, ye old "red string" crap, I love it... wonder what Kuwabara'd think of Hiei's intended use if he manages to grab the thing... Zhang is probably deciding where to lie low for a day or so til those two stop blowing eachother up... Hell of a cliffie, :/ and I forgot my tea rule.. Red string bondage and tea don't mix with keyboard!!!!!!!!! Looking forward to the next one..
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 03:13 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/oct2007.html Check these out to find out what you were nominated for! And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open October 17, 2007 - November 1, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after November 1st. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association Note: If you get this notification more than once, it means you have been nominated for more than 1 award.
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