| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 15:47 PST
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GAHHH!! I love it. I love it. I love it. Oh dear, this was such a ...hm.. idk.. a sweet little chapter. One that can definitly make you laugh at what was happening. And Inuyasha being all seductive to Kagome right in front of Sango. Now Miroku's gonna get a present.. he owes Inu. lol Well great job. Good luck with the computer problem. Darn that santa his list are never right. =D
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Title: 1love1
Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 14:52 PST
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finaly they go on a date but i hope they get to gether soon until then update soon!!
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Title: Glad you are back!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 13:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Instead of one month it feels like 3 without your stories!! But at least you borrow one to update, you're a sweet! Yes, I know... not must get used to it. LOL Really GLAD to have you back! Great chapter!!! Love how you show our Inu all nervous around calling her although, he is still denying what he is starting to feel or feels. Kagome has all the insecurities that makes Kagome, Kagome. A thing I like about this story is that it doesn't matter how you dress them up they are still Kagome and Inuyasha, and that is great. There are a lot of things to solve, former partners, their insecurities but, we must just sit and wait. Hopefully a good thing will come out of this "date", hopefully both of them wont be so nervous to make a fool of themself. I know what I'm saying... didn't happen to you? LOL Excellent chapter! Excellent coming back! Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update, really, really missing your stories!! Hugs! Thx again! ;)
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 12:35 PST
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Stupid computer not working right so I HOPE you get my review. **Awesome** chapter, everyone has their kryptonite and for those two anti-relationship superheroes they are each others. Woohoo!!! to Sango for being the mediator, she knows just what the girl wants. Inuyasha is too funny with his nervousness, who woulda thunk it:} Can't wait to find out how their date goes, update soon.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 11:57 PST
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I love the : "She's calling back!" and the "He's looking at me, he's looking at me" feeling. So true.
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Reviewed By: mic_check1212 On: January 02, 2008 21:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm in love with this story!!! The angst between Kagome and Inuyasha is brilliant, and with an ominous wolf thundering in the background, the plot twists are that much more amazing. I'm very thankful that you are not rushing Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship, because it makes the story mroe intense and realistic. Keep up the amazing work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 19:34 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont know if I mentioned just how much I love this story. Im so addicted to it. I wouldnt do anything else but pay attention to the screen during the time I was reading it. Remembering that i have to call back some people. lol But yes, this story is most definitly a winner in my eyes. I think this is gonna be gathering a lot of awards. And YES they got much closer. Which makes my heart that much better compared to what it was earlier. Also I loved how you didnt rush their meeting. I always hated that. Made it less realistic. And it also seems that the slime is starting to come up. So what first is Kouga than is the rat Kikyou. The two Killers. Oh well this is long enough. I hope you update soon. Because this newly favorited story is some thing I just have to know how it ends.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 18:02 PST
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When you mean get our hopes up for this lovely and convient trip to maui. Yo mean they wont get any where closer. Darn shucks. Hey I thought this story was complete I guess i isnt. But thats okay. Im not going anywhere. lol =D
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 15:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Whoa. WEll i usually wait til the end to review on completed stories but I couldnt help my self this time I completely am in love with this story. You say that these characters are OOC but to me they are right on the dot. Come on if they were in the feudal time maybe they would be out of it. But its modern time so it fits. ANd Sango..whoa..come on you know she'll turn in to a sex feind a while after she was with Miroku. Come on. Miroku got that charm. lol But still I love this story. ANd you have doen such a good job with it. SO far I rad that is. But I believe in the end it will still be one of the best I have read. =D
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Reviewed By: av On: December 15, 2007 08:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was wondering when kouga was going to make an appearance. another awesome chapter that leaves me wanting for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story keep up the good work plz.
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: inuyashalover913 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Deng, Kouga's back. What a turn of events! OMG this chapter was great! I cannot wait 'til the next one. Great work:)
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Reviewed By: shutup...please On: December 02, 2007 23:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story has me on edge! i keep having to remind myself that Kouga or Kikyou are not real! please keep writing this story and others, i can't wait until the next chapter. My condolences on the broken laptop, hopefully things will turn out okay. well talk to you soon i will start leaving comments on all the updated chapters that you write from here on out.
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Reviewed By: lostgirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 22:45 PST
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finally! i have been waiting on pins and needles to see what would come next. really great. please write again soon!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 nsi On: December 02, 2007 19:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh Oh. Kouga's back. Not good. Really well written. I hope Inu and Kagome get closer.
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