| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 11:05 CDT
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Great lemon indeed. And I'm still interested in the murderer and him killing people. Keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 19:48 CDT
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wow hot! great lemon over there but still in-character and a Rukia in denial is pretty amusing. how can she even have her head screwed on right after all that? haha, waiting for your update!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 00:54 CDT
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Once upon a time there was a fic that made perverted little Yuwa smile:Murder in my heart. he was delighted for it was made by one of his favorite author, and was very glad that he will read another lemon. Yuwa didn't like the killing that much, and was frightened by the gruesome murders. "I thought this was suppose to be lemon," he cried, "but it has lots of killing." Nonetheless he read a good story, hot lime and extra hot lemon, that's worth remembering.
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Title: Ok I promise!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 11:19 CDT
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I promise this is my last review and then I will wait untill you update! Ok I really love the tenderness in chapter 12 before thay had sex and we get all of Ichigo's jumble mess of emotions! I realli liked it how you start to show he actually cares for her. Awesome! My last review before your update!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 21:23 CDT
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I just noticed something after re-reading chapter 12 for the hundreds time. Does Ichigo's sister Yuzu come and clean his aparment?
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Title: I'm not a stalker I promise!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love the tenderness between them and Rukia is in denial! She is clearly in love with him but she has a lot of emotional baggage to be honest with herself! I would also love to hear more from Ichigo's point of view because now we have only gotten from Rukia! I want to know how he feels!
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, with their appetite. They can make soccer team and play world cup. Great job, I love this chapter. Thanks for writing a marvelous story
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 20:25 CDT
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Ahh... insatiable. One of my favorite words. So much IchiRuki pron so early in the morning makes me want to crawl back in bed and die now. I don't care who killed Byakuya anymore! I really don't. The... other needs of my brain have been satisfied.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chap! I LOVED IT!! it was awesome!! and as jazzjackrabbit said i also wonder how the will tell each other! now theres something to think bout! any who, UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!! UR THE BEST!!
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 13:40 CDT
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I hate it when two "blind" people confuse sex with love...Its obvious, out there...if it were just sex she wouldnt be kissing his eyelids, thats an act of love. And the way you are giving the hints, oh boy, its just fantastic! Well if only Kurosaki Ichigo would be real...I would, oh boy, I shouldnt get into this *bangs her head to the keyboad* Im just curious how they are going to tell each other...Hmmm...
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 10:30 CDT
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Whew...another delicious lemon. It's totally going to suck when they do go back to work, I couldn't agree more with Ichigo on that one.
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Title: *huge blinking eyes*
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*brain dead* Rukia was right when she said they where going to be too busy having sex to think about work! Ichigo just proved her right! I also loved how Rukia is in denail that she is feeling more for Ichigo than sexual desire! I think Ichigo is more honest with himself when it comes to his feelings! He is obviously falling in love with Rukia (if he isn't allready whipped) Awesome chapter you have left brain dead! I am going to go lie down and try to returned to brain to its proper function!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 01:51 CDT
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...(flabbergasted)...
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Title: More Intelligent review!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have finally gotten my act together and here you can have a more intelligent review from me. I absolutely loved the part with Rukia and Kenpachi! It was so funny! I love how Rukia and Renji interactions! And Ichigo was so cold! Just like I though he would be... I also enjoyed the fact that Rukia jump him. And the lemon was awesome and hot! It totally fried my brains and I wasn't the least bit disapointed when Rukia broke the mood and asked what was going to happened now! I was expecting her to demand more than just sex! Absolutely awesome I can't wait to see how their relationship will played out after this! (though I can imagine Ichigo turning in to a sex fiend) Oh and now I am forgetting about the plot! Oh well! Who cares they had sex anyway! *does happy dance*
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 03:59 CDT
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the lemon scene was really well done, the wait for them to finally do the deed was excruciating though! now can't wait for the next one, update soon!
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