| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING! I was waiting for them to seal the deal and I loved it! It was such good writing I felt the tension! I need the next one!!!!
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Title: oh boy
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 08:39 CDT
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I just had to breth deep several times in order to control my OWN heartbeat! that was bloody brilliant I have to say...Geez no one writes this lemon sceenes as good as yourself(personally I think your best was in The Tail of a Phoneix, but his was...wow) cheers for my favorite writer, and thanks for your review, it is a huge thing for me=)
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved reading this!!! it was AWESOME!!! i can't wait for the next chap!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I REALY WANT TO READ MORE!!! UR THE BEST!!!
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap. it is the only expression i know that is appropriate for rating this fic. i have read all of your fics, and THOROUGHLY enjoyed them. i mean, i haven't read any published works that compare to this. thank you, you truly are a hero.
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, i really don't know what to say. you have so beautifully, so perfectly built the sexaul atmosphere and tension that the effect, the result was one major blast. it kept building up that it culminated into one of the best, if not the best lemon that i have ever read. gosh, it even took me more than 15 minutes to get my mind working again! took me more than 15 minutes of staring into the computer screen before i could properly string together words to make one coherent sentence for this review. WAY TO GO GIRL!
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Title: Oh...my...FREAKING GOD!!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 09:35 CDT
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It's a shame when you have to STOP reading a story because you get so damn hot from reading it! OMG... this chapter rocked! Ichigo ROCKED Rukia's world, you hear? Wow...if there was a real Ichigo like that out there... sigh. And of course like you said, it would take Rukia to kill the mood; good thing Ichigo had a good retort. A hell of a retort, really! Girl, that was one your BEST lemons, I salute you!
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! It was great awesome job! It was so hot I had to turned on the air conditioning (Is winter in Canada) awesome job! I can't wait for the nest chapter!
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you so much. Thanks for giving such beautiful lemon. I wish the killer don't disturb their perfect moment
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Title: Hot as Hades
Reviewed By: LadyLilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The lemon was perfect. I commend you lots and lots. The only thing that really disturbed me was that you used the word "cock" just a little too much...
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Reviewed By: zenk0ku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the way you've styled this alternate universe and so far, I think you've kept Ichigo and Rukia in delicious character. That said, I adore the way you've weaved in other characters from Bleach, Orihime and Ishida are killing me and Kenpachi is so right as a Lou. But the greatest thing has to be the way the relationship between Ichigo and Rukia is playing out!
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Reviewed By: averyrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN'S THE NEXT ONE COMING! I LOVE YOUR STYLE OF WRITING! IT CAPTURES THEYRE RELATIONSHIP AND ATTITUDES BEAUTIFULLY! :)
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I was re-reading this chapter (can't remenber what number) and it occur to me that Gin sounds black with his way of talking! I love it! I hope you updated soon I will be waiting!
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 11:42 CDT
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Hey you wouldn't know me as i dont post much, but i have been a fan of yours since the beginning, your stories are and always have been the reason i check this site daily to see if you have updated your stories or added something new, only had 1 story i really didn't get into but the others i enjoyed greatly, great work with what you have done in this story and in your others, it will be a sad day when you stop writing about Ichigo/Rukia so i hope that day is still a long way off...keep it up, you make alot of people's morning/nights more enjoyable then they were before. ~Luste
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! I can't wait for the next one!! I think the line also has to do with her not wanting to open up to anyone again but its definitly not harrassment.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:57 CDT
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Ichigo is not harrasing Rukia! If she really didn't want it then she would stand her ground and he would of stop! But she is leading him on by almost having sex with him in the car and been flustered and blushing when he touches her! Rukia obviously enjoys it her argument is that its not professional for them both to have romantic relationship when they are working together! Like Laurie said in any other alternative universe she could scream sexual harrassement and he be out of the job but she doesn't want to!
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