| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:33 CDT
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I don't really like Ichigo harassing Rukia instead of simply teasing her *hides from all the people who do like it* but it's still fun to read ^^ The part about Hitaugaya-kun being a D.A. (had to look up what this is ^^') is a nice idea. Well, like every other characters part in your story xD
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Title: *throws a chair out of the window*
Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 07:00 CDT
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and when I come home form a tiring day and see your post...especially such a good one...I simply rejoice! Rukia is my girl...I wil just get that line of hers and..never mind=/But she will break, oh yeah she will and I can imagine what kind of a thing is waitng for us in the store*grins evilly* Well I hate it when people tell me to update soon(like we are able to write 24/7) but I understand them when Im reading such fics like yours *sighs*so I will just hope(upon hope) that you will update soon
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the dialogs in the chapter ;D
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Reviewed By: Riel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I love this story!! You're writing style is so good, keep up the GREAT work. I can't wait for the next chapter. Its really good.
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 21:19 CDT
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My golly! If i could just rip THE line for rukia, believe me i would! And that venus and mars dialogue, damn love it girl! Poor Ichigo! having a boner, like just about always, must be quite painful. Ohhh pure torture! I don't know what i want more, for rukia to cross the freaking line or to just continue harrasing ichigo like that. love your story. so, um, where's the next chap? XD
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 19:14 CDT
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I love Rukia's logic! "There is this line" What line Rukia girl you just cross it? *sighs* She needs a reliaty check but then again I think she will last for another two to three chapters! Awesome job though! I'm sad to hear Ishin die!
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Title: that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have no words! I am speechless! That was awesome I can see Rukia is going give in soon there is only so much she can stand! I will be waiting for the next chapter with batted breath! So awesome! I love it!
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Title: ....After picking my jaw off of the floor...
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 18:33 CDT
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Good lord girl that was an INTENSE chapter! This was my favorite line: "That's just like a guy," Rukia spat, "Talking with your dick instead of your brain." "That's just like a woman," Ichigo countered, "Analyzing your emotions instead of actually feeling them." Simply loved that line. Why is Rukia tourting herself? Give into the pleasure girl... I know I would it was Ichigo... sigh... (ooookay...now I'm fantacing over a fiction animation character, I know I need help now.) Thanks for the quick update. gg
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rukia likes been gropped! She is obviously enjoying it. I REALLY love this line. She wanted to drag him upstairs by his cock, throw him down onto the floorboards, and proceed to fuck him senseless on the floor of her foyer. Oh it was priceless Rukia will be Rukia no matter what she does! LOL! I love this fic! It is so awesome!
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Reviewed By: laurie_bunter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahh, Rukia, Rukia. In any other parallel universe, if you don't want a guy's hand down your pants you can scream sexual harassment. He'd be out of a job and you could take over his desk... but since you don't, this only proves that Ichigo is winning. A happy groping Ichigo + flustered Rukia = great reading. :) Groping Ichigo, by the way, is so sexy he actually made me forget for a moment I still don't know who killed Byakuya, and I seriously question whether I still care as long as Rukia gets to jump Ichigo in th end mwahahahaha. Ahh, me of little fidelity to the plot... obviously right now love of lemons wins over my love of detective fiction. :D
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 14:10 CDT
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Now I know that you like to torture your Readers! when are you going to post the next chapter?!?! I mean you could post the whole 26 pages, I wouldnt mind reading and reading it all over again!!!
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Title: Complain!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 12:36 CDT
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This is an oficial complain: No don't you dare cut chapters in half! Do you have ANY idea just how awesome this fic is! Don't you kill us by cutting awesome chapters in half! Pretty please update soon (like now) pretty please!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 12:33 CDT
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so, the game has begun huh?! gosh! the sexual tension is quite something. Can't wait for the 'protective home custody' to start! BTW next time, don't you dare cut chapters! I sure as hell don't mind reading 26 or even a hundred pages of sexually charged atmosphere between ichigo and rukia. post the other half chap please! like NOW maybe?
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You so naughty coz u cut it half. I can read a whole 26 pages..Can't wait for the update
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 08:54 CDT
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Gahhh! I wanted more!! Girl, just reading what Ichigo is doing with Rukia with the teasing is driving me CRAZY! I would have given in a long time ago! Too funny with the part where Ichigo's Lou has to go to the dance recital, and the part when he was playing with the back of her jeans was PRICESSS! I can't wait for the next update ::cough cough LEMON cough cough:: ! Unitl next time, laters! gg
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