| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another captivating chapter. Loved the emotions that you were able to portray from both Ichigo and Rukia's perspective. You really do have a way with words and your writing ability is so advanced that I can picture and feel them so easily. The ending just has he wanting to read more with unrivaled anticipation. Great job and another superb chapter! =)
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD! (Wait, I'm sure He doesn't have a mother, just a figure of speech right? Damn, I'm getting off topic this is about your story) That was one amazing chapter. I loved it, I really did. The IchiRuki interaction was just beyond superb and the ending. OMG What did you do? How could you do it? Why did you do it? It was so freaking amazing! The suspense not only comes from the mystery side of your story, but the IchiRuki interaction as well. This was one of the best chapters so far. Granted this is a HUGE and LONG fic, I hope more chapters like this come my way. Once again awesome job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest this was a decent chapter. Not as entertaining as your previous chapters, but it got the plot moving. Good job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is so freaking captivating and oh so awesome! I think I'm truly addicted! Another death and this time sits Nanao? I like her to! Why do you keep killing off some of my favorite characters T_T Well, I can get over that fact with your awesome writing skills. I loved the IchiRuki interaction and I got a big kick out of their stay in Rukia's apartment. Very well written!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really loved this chapter. The IchiRuki interaction was just great! I loved every single bit of it. And OMG the ending was just to sweet/lovely/cute. I can't wait to see what Ichigo does! You really put a good cliffhanger there!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I didn't really notice any OOC from Rukia and Ichigo. Granted this is an AU so the characters will be slightly different, the situation that they are currently in can justify their attitudes and behavior. So you hooked them up to be partners working on the same case huh? Oh ho ho I'm sure you will be stirring things up between the two! It sounds good and once again another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO you killed Yumichika!! Actually, I don't really like him so it doesn't really matter so w/e XD; And it was his birthday as well huh? Looks like this murderer is attacking people on their birthdays. They also happen to be connected to Rukia somehow. Very interesting what you're trying to pull. I also liked Ichigo talking to Rukia and Renji. I got a few good chuckles out of their conversation. Another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOO you liked Matusomoto!! Shes one of my favorite characters! T_T Oh well I guess it had to be done because of the suspense your building. I liked the Ichigo perspective and him trying his best to work on the case. It gives a broader picture into how he feels upon the case he's set on. Very well done! *thumb up*
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow another very captivating chapter. So Aizen and Kenpachi are lieutenants huh? LOL I can actually imagine that happening. And the two detectives are already set up against odds. I find it very enjoyable because I know you'll be able to get them to work out their differences and become closer in the future :p Another good chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this looks to be a LONG story and from the first chapter I can tell I'll really like it. Sounds interesting even though I'm not a big fan of AU, but I'll give it a shot anyways because I love long reads. Law and Order fan huh? I myself prefer CSI, but it should be a fun read either way. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 14:01 CDT
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OMG that was an amazing story...ihave been up for days reading it. you kept the charcters out of the OC and it worked with the setting...absolutely loved it. In a way i would like to hear what happens to them a year or two later. I bet with a kid it would be a lot mroe fun...i can just imagine...but i loved the story and I cant wait to read more of you work...keep it up XD
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Title: A really long extended review!
Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so here we go. The moment I saw this fic (this was before reading any of your other ones) I was liked 'Meh' I had read way too many bad fics. I decided to give it a try and the first chapter was SO AWESOME! This fic was so diferent from all your other ones, more serious and mature (you tend to write the other ones as very funny wether you intend it or not) and Ichigo and Rukia where diferent here. You geva then a diferent characterization. It was awesome I felt it show another side of you as a writer. I love the part where they share the toast and then she rippeds it and to me it felt like it was simbolic of her not wanting to start anything with him. I love all the chapters they where awesome. KUDOS to you! Great job!
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 11:14 CST
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Yay! Aizen is going to rot in jail, Rukia and Ichigo made that 'slow love' that was absolutely wonderful!!! So descriptive... I had to take a break from it a few times just to cool off. But anyway, great chapter. Wrapping a lot of stuff up in this one, and I'm sure the epilouge is just as good. (BTW... sorry I haven't reviewed; due to the holiday and all the other dumb stuff that's going on I haven't had a chance to finish reading this fic, but rest assured I will review the last chapter too... not to mention the update on Casual Friends... wow-wee!) Happy new year! @_@ gg
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Title: Oh OMG OMG Oh My God!!
Reviewed By: DannilovesInu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over...no!! I absolutely loved this one...Ichigo was soo sweet (and I fell in love even more with Tousiro Hitsugaya because of this story).....quick I need a paper bag before I start to hyperventilate or maybe my inhaler...lol. You do such great work Tituba-sama, that I've never been uninterested in reading your stories...keep up the great work!
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Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 03:11 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! ive just been gone for a few days and i already missed two chaps!!!(wipes nosebleed)anyway, very nice chap(s).^-^v
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