| "Murder My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 217 ] |
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sheds an invisible tear* I can't..believe its finally over...All I have to say is just WOW that was simply one of the greatest piece of fanfiction (if not literature) I have read in the longest time. When reading fanfiction you expect mediocre writing and a somewhat interesting story after going through so much junk. You rarely expect to find something so compelling that can keep you interested. Yet, what you have created here is something more than that. I felt as if I was reading an action mystery thriller romance novel. Looking at your word count, you've written over 250,000 words! That's like me finishing an actual book! You know, I was never a fan of AU, but you have been able to write so well and diligently that I completely changed my mind. Your plot structure, characterization, emotional context, character interaction, Hot smut, and overall development of the story is just simply something I would expect from an author with published works. Granted you don't even have an editor (or beta in this case) you were able to keep grammatical errors to a minimum when you've written so much and it didn't take away from the story at all. This has to be one of the greatest (if not the greatest) IchiRuki fic I have ever read. Actually, scratch that. In all my time reading fanfiction (and I've done it for a number of years across various fandoms) this has to be one of the most enjoyable, exciting, and wonderful reads I have completed. I simply can't put into words how much I tremendously enjoyed reading it. I thank you for being able to showcase your brilliant writing talents by creating this great piece of work. It was simply one of the best times I spent reading on the internet. As for your epilogue it was a fantastic ending. I loved the interaction that Ichigo and Rukia had 3 years after marriage. And that hostage situation? Simply stunning. I think my jaw dropped when I read that Rukia was pregnant. You really pulled a fast one there! But alas, the ending was simply great. Both of them look to be very excited about their future together as they build a family and live their lives. All I can say is that you did a great job from beginning to end developing their relationship. Very well done. I don't know what else I can say. I mean you've just done a marvelous job and I guess the only thing left to say is I hope you continue writing great IchiRuki fics and I recommend looking into a career or even as a side project writing your own original works. You've got that much talent and potential. Once again, I thank you for this brilliant story and honor you with quite possibly my longest written review to date XD! This fic was truly deserving of it. Congratulations and cheers!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha you really have a talent for smut huh? Well I don't think that's really a bad thing because I enjoy reading it by a great author so keep it up! XD! The ending was nice as well. A small little marriage ceremony to seal the deal. I totally enjoyed it all the way through. Now just remains the epilogue. Sad to these this great fic almost end. T_T
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was some court meeting! I guess all those Law and Order marathons came in hand huh? XD It was very creative and realistically believable. You did a great job and I really enjoyed Rukia's testimony. She finally admitted her love for Ichigo and I that was a such a sweet and tender moment. Can't wait to see the last chapter before the epilogue. Such a wonderful story this has been!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was some chapter!! You really know how to build the romantic tension between the two. I love the emotions that you are able to display with your choice of words. You are a very talented writer!! I can't wait for Rukia's reaction about the ring and then the testimony she's supposed to give. This is has been one of the greatest reads not only for IchiRuki, but for most of the fics I've read all together.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Er first off I apologize for the double review. I think my Internet froze and I accidentally sent it twice. Anywayz, this chapter may have been a "filler" from the IchiRuki stuff, but the legal side of it was quite cool as well. I liked Hitsuguya playing the defense lawyer, it suits his character. All the law and legal proceedings were fascinating. Can't wait till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God damn that was an EPIC and INTENSE chapter!!! I really really enjoyed it! You portrayed Aizen as a cruel bastard so well! And when Ichigo napped and hit him I was like "Oh yeah about time!" XDD Really awesome chapter and the climax was good!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God damn that was an EPIC and INTENSE chapter!!! I really really enjoyed it! You portrayed Aizen as a cruel bastard so well! And when Ichigo napped and hit him I was like "Oh yeah about time!" XDD Really awesome chapter and the climax was good!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was so freaking awesome!! I loved the IchiRuki interaction. You do their characters so well and lovingly that it's just a great read! And the ending was just like "WTF Happened????" I have a feeling Aizen did something to Rukia. Can't wait to see exactly what!!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh ho ho that was a great chapter!! I really loved the emotional tension. The angsty drama was good and written well. Great job!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 02:24 CDT
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ohhh this was good. Liked the Gin and Aizen part was well as the tension with Ichigo and Rukia. Very good.
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Reviewed By: 07janina07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was re-reading murder my heart the other and I really love what you did with this fic. It was awesome.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha this chapter and your last one have definitely been some of the best I've read. From tension to passion to lovingness. I just can't help but smile as I read this freaking amazing fic. It's really a masterpiece!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o O.o o.O O.O O_O! OMFG!!! That was defintely your best written chapter EVER! OMG, come to speak of it, this must be the single greatest chapter I have read in ANY fic (and I've read a plenty XD) in a long time. The tension in the beginning was just senstiational! I loved the emotion, the feeling, and then the burning passion at the end. And yes you were right, this is probably one of the bet lemons you (or any other author I've read so far) have written. The tension only made it deeper, and by God was it HOTT!! Hell it should be a sin to read something like this (oh well sometimes being bad can be a good thing ;p). Your writing ability are really shining with this fic and it continues to get better. I'm so happy its such a s long story because I would never want it to end. ITS THAT GOOD! God, must move on to next chapter. So much WIN!!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again another interesting chapter. Loved the IchiRuki interaction and the ending just leaves me with wanting to read more. Gah, I need to sleep but your fic is too good! It keeps me up at night because its like a mental adrenaline rush XD;
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this has got to be another one of my favorite chapters! I really loved this fic now. I mean it keeps getting better and more interesting. Rukia is going to stay at Ichigo's place for her birthday? Can you say 'interesting circumstances'? XDD! Oh man can't wait to see how this turns out! =)
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