| "This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: Manda On: January 18, 2008 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. The flow is great and it really sucks you in. I hope that you will keep up with it so that I can find out what happens next. Taking the past and putting it in modern times, with instead of the jewel it's a formula is brillant and very Original. Really keep it up because I think you have something great!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! Kagome's manners come in handy sometimes, don't they? Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 19:35 CST
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and somewhere out there is an inu-hanyou who is having happy dreams of assistants and hair brushing. it was nice of the audience to observe quietly without heckling and rudely making lewd comments. . . *smirk* nice scene 'getting comfortable' with each other. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 06:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... like how that inuyasha seems to let his guard down for kagome... really cute kagome grooming inuyasha's hair... and they found bokusenou - very helpful... thanks to kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can.. please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
n'awww Inuyasha and Kagoem are getting closer :P its sooo sweet :P i wonder where Shippo is... anyways were off to see Totosai ^^ aww i cant wait to see him again.. he always cracks me up ^^
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 19:56 CST
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Grouchy, impatient, IY. So in character! Sweet to see he and K drawing closer together. I like how you're taking time with it, slowly building up the feelings. Makes for good tension, lots of fluff, and plenty of frustration! Of course, we'll all be rewarded in the end, right? Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 02:22 CST
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that was exciting! congrats on the nom! best wishes roxanne! ~ ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 01:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahaha trust Miroku to stare at a bad time XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ok update... miroku and his silly antics... wonder what happens next... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 21:46 CST
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She's got some reach, that Sango,eh? Loving the adventurous nature of this!
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Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even with writers block it did't seem drawn or pulled out. You did well!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 13:11 CST
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yash/kagome interactions are so cute (warm fuzzies). now who's got kikyo? ~ peace, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 00:18 CST
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Sweet chapter, good to see K tell him he doesn't need to change. Hope this boosts her in his eyes, and he remembers in more trying times.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... will they find the ancient tree... who will they meet next... wonder what happens now... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about your writer's block, this chapter came out nicely and the story is wonderful. Love the way the AU is mixed with the real one. And again, don't worry about the "block" with two stories on the way and your pacing uploading chapters, how could you keep up with this pace is beyond my understanding! LOL Thank you so much for the updating and for sharing it with us!
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