| "This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: kirarakat55 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing like a security alarm going off to ruin a sexy mood. Poor things will have to fight with sexual frustration hehe... but it should definitely make the battle worth it. If it is indeed a fight that lay ahead. Please update soon and save Inuyasha from blue balls lol.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty-Dieing-becuse-I'm-Coking-on-a-cake On: March 16, 2008 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were deep into their love-making when the security alarms blared. InuYasha is SO going to be pissed off. Lives!!!! (i'm at school during a break... so thats why I am not login.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 17:46 CDT
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OOOO.... naughty, naughty, turning Inuyasha blue like that. Mouhahahahaha! Hopefully the alarms went off for a real reason and not because the neighbor's cat tripped off a security light. :) I like the length of your chapters. They're not too long and they're not too short, either. Well... have a great week!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL You are bad! LOL Inuyasha is going to chase you cause you spoiled his moment with Kagome!!! LOL Great chapter, it intrigues me where are you taking them -and us- but certainly I'm enjoying this story too much. LOve the way you are re-writing the original one, great job!! Thank you for the update and for sharing it with us!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh a cliffhanger...you are very, very evil!! I can't wait for the next chapter! you are doing really really well so keep up the good work 'cause I love it! Kissis EV
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 11:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The quality of the chapter did not suffer from your writer's block. I liked how Kagome handled the groupies but there should have been a few girls there for the other guys in the band. I think that the way Inuyasha handled the thugs was perfectly in character. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its oki ^^ just take your time ^^ coz i notice were up to chapter 44 ^^ SO take your time and ooo i though Kagome was going to get jumped XD
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 07:08 CDT
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roxanne, as an old woman and a veteran of disappointment and depression you have to remember that life is a series of ups and downs and constantly changing, moving. there is light at the end of the tunnel before the next one covers you over again so find joy and beauty in the little things (it's worth it, you're worth it) and if you have to live moment to moment then do it, survive. ~ love you, ginny ~ p.s. pink spandex. >=]
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 07:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that the concerts are done and they'll be back to work on the shikon formula again... too bad the last night of fun was ruined... seems that the three men were after kagome... who sent them... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some really good action. They're on the run now! I can't wait to read more. I love it!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 14:30 CST
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the confrontation, interesting that kikyo was going to use the formula on him to make him human even if he agreed wasn't real love. . . the declaration, kagome announced her love without reservation or shame, didn't matter who heard or what they thought. . . it looks like midoriko has been leaving bread crumbs, does she need help? ~ good one, ginny
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Reviewed By: Ivygirl10 On: February 27, 2008 22:44 CST
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This the best fanfics having to do with modern times that I have ever read! Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... good that kagome and inuyasha stood up to kikyo... she's becoming a pain... what is the clue about this time... and kagome spoke out saying that she loves inuyasha as a hanyou... but seems that inuyasha didn't react to that... wonder what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Our jealous hanyou strikes again. He is jealous of anyone that Kagome is polite to or nice to except Miroku. I liked how both Inuyasha and Kagome told Kikyou off, she deserved it. I also like this brave Kagome, one who stands up to Kikyou instead of suffering in silence. I am curious as to what this new info is going to be and where it will lead our intrepid band of do-gooders.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! he said 'i love you' n'aww :P oooo shove it up your ass Kikyo lol god i hate her :P anyways i got a feeling something with the building that is bad :P
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