| "This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 17:30 CDT
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great green gobs of greasy grimy youkai guts, mutilated oni meat... and yash without his spoon, but miroku brought his hand. . . . *shakes head* how in the world does one explain something like that to their insurance agent? the restoration crew? fun stuff ~ delighted as always, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kaede sure is mad... but glad that they won't have to stay there for another night... will they find anymore clues... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not log in) On: March 22, 2008 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahah XD Kaede was pissed alright XD
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_SIT [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 23:40 CDT
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Lol. Inuyasha is so tactless. :)
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Reviewed By: Kags13 On: March 20, 2008 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more it was getting really good! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 14:26 CDT
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hi, i just found this story last night and love it!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 11:06 CDT
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yasha battling in the nude... *chuckles*
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... lots of action and a pissed off inuyasha... well seems that they'll be moving to a different house now... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 21:05 CDT
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LOL, IY fighting naked, now that I'd give good money to see! Very nice fight scene, wrapped up with a very nice bit of fluff. A cute, fun, exciting chapter.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is much more outgoing than he is in canon but that is ok because that fits well in with the persona that you have created for him. I loved how he went from fighting to fast cleanup to picking up where he was with Kagome within such a short span of time. From his comment at the beginning of the fight and what he said to Kagome while in the shower are you sure that Miroku hasn't been around him too much? He is starting to sound like him some. I can't wait to see everyone's reactions to the fight and what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW you got that 1 out quickly... and i love you for it ^^ and geez i was be pissed off like Inuyasha if that happened :P
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
B'AWWWWW getting good and what happens... who ever that is... their going to geta good thumping by me >.< lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 10:19 CDT
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one is compelled to ask if there is some connection between kagome and the formula, if not why would naraku be interested in her except to get to yash? (no need to answer, i'm sure if there is a correlation or not it will be revealed in the story) . . . AH! LEMON!! took me by surprise there. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing like saying something hasn't happened to cause it to happen, and at the worst possible time too. Whoever broke in is going to face a frustrated Inuyasha, one of the worst things to face. They are going to be lucky to survive the encounter. It is good that they have a plan but changing houses might not be the best thing. It sounds like there will be more people around the new place to possibly get hurt or see something they should not. I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome find out where Midoriko went and solve the mystery so they can have their happy ending. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice they have a plan to look for some more clues on the formula... and cute that inuyasha & kagome are sweet towards each other... funny too in the end - what a way to be disturbed :-)... update when you can... please and thank you...
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