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 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2008 12:07 CDT
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cool motorcycle fight!! i was picturing the scene from 'advent children' where the brothers are fighting cloud with his broadsword on bikes... exciting! ~ delighted, ginny
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2008 02:16 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so inuyasha & kagome were followed... seems that naraku is quite persistent on getting to inuyasha & kagome... really nice of inuyasha to let kagome get away... hope inuyasha will come out ok when he catches up with kagome... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
 Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2008 13:31 CDT
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Wow, major action here! Big screen stuff too. As usual, our hanyou is brash and confident, you just have to smile. And K? Love her determination to help him, and to remain strong, rather than falling apart. Very nice to see.
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2008 13:17 CDT
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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It is good that Kagome misses Inuyasha so much and is worried about him. We all know Inuyasha will be fine but it is still good that Kagome worries. It will help Inuyasha realize that Kagome truly cares about him and will be an added barrier against Naraku when he tries to meddle in their relationship and to split them apart. Why do I think that Naraku has another way of tracking them besides scent? I am looking forward to the next installment.
 Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 05, 2008 07:11 CDT
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this is great update soon i can't wait to see what happens next
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2008 16:39 CDT
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i wanna go there!! not so much for the public baths but for the culture and atmosphere. . . a lively vacation, is there some way he's being followed? cool stuff ~ arigatougozaimasu, ginny
 Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2008 22:15 CDT
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Exciting, funny and sweet. Very nice chapter!
 Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2008 07:17 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG EVIL DRAGON EVIL!!!
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2008 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Cute. I am noticing a tendency to getting Inuyasha wet after fighting youkai. This is the second time he was dropped into a body of water and there was the battle at the hot springs in the youkai world. It is a good way for Kagome to see and admire Inuyasha's body though. I liked how the tourists thought it was a show, I am surprised there were no Godzilla comments. I wonder if the people who belonged there thought it was an act or went running for their lives. I am looking forward to what happens next as always. I am also looking forward to learning what is on those pages that Miroku is getting checked. I wonder if Kikyou doesn't find a way to learn about it and get the info too.
 Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2008 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's a show!!!!!! Stupid tourists, gonna get your head riped off!
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2008 19:20 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... lots of action still for inuyasha... no rest for the wicked as they say... so much for them trying to relax... what else is in store for them... update soon... please and thank you!
 Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2008 23:41 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... at least they found more clues at the place they went to... then kouga appeared again... at least he now knows that kagome is with inuyasha... how is it that the portals appear anyway... do they just appear randomly or what... update when you can... please and thank you...
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2008 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
"why did it have to be snakes?" ~indiana jones. . . at least you have them express their feelings. nice ride, i think riding bitch on a bike is better than riding on his back... the benefits of vibration. ~ ciao! ginny
 Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2008 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooo Koga is back!! and he took that surprisinngly (i know, not a word lol) well O.o that was wow.... lol
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 22, 2008 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kaede does sound like a mother there in her yelling about the condition of the house. And Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is working out nicely. They will be able to get together sometime. Will Kagome tell her family about her change of address or not? She probably should before either her mother tries to contact her at the house and is told about the new address by Kaede and before some reporter finds out about the damage to the house and it hits the headlines. It was good of Kagome to think of Miroku's Wind Tunnel to help clean up the mess left behind. It is a good thing to try to find the silver lining in this misfortune. I am glad that you are including Kirara too, she is one of my favorite characters. I can't wait to see what devilry you have planned next for them.
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