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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter, nice to see you back!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was sorry to read that RL is getting you down, I hope everything works out for you. I was glad to see an update on this story. And it was a good one too. I like how you used the black pearl and Inuyasha's father's grave site. It is close to canon but still fits into the story. It will be good to see Inuyasha in his trademark red outfit too. I think I was starting to miss it almost as much as he has been missing the protection. I can't wait to see what happens next and what happens when Naraku finds out Kagura joined with Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... good that they met myoga... he seems to have lots of information about inuyasha... what will happen next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great recovery for Inuyasha. I loved that hearing his song for Kagome brought him back from the brink. It was interesting seeing Miroku being a little scared of Inuyasha in his transformed state. If you bring in the moth it will be real interesting to see how he reacts to Inuyasha transforming so close. I also liked seeing Naraku so frustrated in trying to kill Inuyasha and Kagura and Sesshomaru confront each other. The reaction of Sesshomaru's was funny, here they were all ready to rumble and along comes Inuyasha and he takes away all their fun. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sesshomaru be kind!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great updates... sweet that kagome never wavered when inuyasha turned demon... glad that kagome was able to bring inuyasha back to his hanyou state... hope they find totosai and fix the sword... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice treatment of the Goshinki fight. It shows the high points but doesn't drag it out too much, it might be a little short for those that like explicit fight scenes but since I am not one it was just right. I think Kagome will approach Inuyasha without fear just as she has always done and he will not hurt her. They love each other, and here they have confessed that love, so he won't hurt her. The beast will recognize her as his mate even if he doesn't maintain control. I can't wait to see how you work it out or Sesshomaru's creating and dealing with Tokijin if you include that.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only way InuYasha could ever hurt Kagome is when he is being a baka... So I say go!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the only way InuYasha could ever hurt Kagome is when he is being a baka... So I say go!
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 21:37 CDT
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I liked it, and it was good.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel aka VoodooBanshee On: October 23, 2008 19:58 CDT
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Ha! I just finished reading this on your live journal...LOL. And I was about to leave a message there when... DING! I get and email saying you posted it to MediaMiner. -girns- Now I can reply here. Lovely chapter. You have me biting my nails wondering what InuYasha is going to do... ACK! I can't wait. The suspense is gonna kill me. KILL ME I TELL YOU. -iz ded-
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the lovely Sesshy ^__^ *giggles* hmmm Naraku... EVIL BASTARD!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome did have a good idea... if only inuyasha and sesshoumaru agree to be allies... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story! I was following it over on inu.adultfanfic then I came over here cause the review/comment is better over here. lol. But still I LOVE your story!!!! Awesome chapter btw!!! I wonder who following Fluffy...is it Kikyo or whom. And I wonder if your going to have the brothers finally have a "as long you don't be stupid, I'll be an ally" allance? But what Kagome said is true. But anyways...I can't wait for your next chapter and update soon, like soon soon...like maybe tomorrow. lol xD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at hell (aka school) On: September 15, 2008 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO not FORMULAS my brain has gone to mush because I have been studing all day long for a tes tI have to night... MUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUSH I TELL YOU!!!!!!! actually worse than mush... the lights on but no ones home... bad... BUT your story's new chapter was great... (other than Scary formulas... lol)
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