| "This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 23:14 CST
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nice update... seems that kagome is fitting in fine... lots of things happening already and kagome has been there that long yet... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: me On: November 19, 2007 15:38 CST
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i love how you wrote this. using the shikon no tama and miroku's wind tunnel and turning them into present day situations, turning them into nanotechs and formulas. its really unique, i love it!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 04:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahaha love the ending!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 13:59 CST
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sorry i haven't reviewed earlier but my antiquated obsolete pc won't stay on for anymore than ten minutes at a time. =/ . interesting that kikyo just jumped to that conclusion and why would she even care to insult a total stranger if she didn't have at least some residual feelings for yasha? . . . my pc is still on!! i shall attempt to submit this quickly so maybe i won't have to write it over again. ~ ciao, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... too bad for miroku... and inuyasha's riled up because of kikyo... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg thats funny keep going its awesome
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
slap the bitch (Kikyo) lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 14:56 CST
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i guess his assistant can't help but get swept up in the intrigue, since she accepted his being hanyou he can trust her more. it's a good thing she isn't entirely phased by most of the weird science that is beginning to surround her. . . and here i thought that "This Wasn't In The Job Description" was synonymous with 'an excuse to have wild puppy sex and raunchy lemons with his assistant' which is why i avoided reading it at first... boy was i wrong and wow am i glad i finally broke down to read it. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting update... they are slowly getting used to each other... hope miroku will be fine... what happened to his hand... wonder what kikyo is up to... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy (not logged in) On: November 15, 2007 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is coming along nicely. I wonder what Kikyo meant by "my replacement". Was she his previous assistant or was she refering to her being his new girlfriend. :) I can't wait to read more!!!! Keep up the terrific work.
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17 (not signed in) On: November 15, 2007 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! Loving it so far; please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG = ) I LOVE YOU THAT WAS AWESOME KEEP GOING
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an amazing story you have written so far. It is beautifully written. How you've incorporated all the characters into the story so perfectly has me in awe of you. I can't wait to read more it is so intreging. It is also amazing how you can write this story and your other story "No Ordinary Love" at the same time with such frequency. BRAVO!!!! Keep it coming and I will keep on reading and reviewing! You Rock! - Amy
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 13:50 CST
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part time rock star, full time enforcer for the safety of humans, protecting them from the youkai, oni and mononoke that escape from the 'makai' or someplace similar; hires naive yet hard working kagome as his personal assistant/secretary where she finds out there is more to her job than she ever imagined... stay tuned for highlights from next week's show, you won't want to miss it! . . . sorry, just couldn't resist. smooth explanation for miroku's kazaana - nano-technology creating a quantum singularity confined in the palm of his hand, cool stuff! ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 13:06 CST
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Okay was it just me or did it seem like Kikyo got "freed" a little too easy? I think that it is obvious to Naraku that someone was going to pop up and just left those things there as a reminder to butt out of his affairs. I'm glad things are going better for Kagome. However it seems that a normal day won't be happening anytime soon. Maybe she SHOULD have asked for more money...I do wonder what you are going to do with the dreams she's been having. She's only had them while in his house, will they pop up on her day off? She gets to go home that day or she just has the day free? I see Miroku has his curse. I'm intrigued to see how you will work with that. Most people leave the orginal story intact but I think you may have to tweak it to fit your story. I also see the demons aren't known in this AU. I'm assuming Kagome's background is the only reason he didn't have to explain anything.I have more I wanted to say but I just ran out of time. Hope this makes sense since I didn't get to read over it....Nice work. I'll be watching for more.
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