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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 13:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Roxie, you did it again. Bravo! Great job! But damn, Inuyasha has to be so damn gallant and pick up Kikyo to take her through the portal. *giggle* I loved how Kagome is showing so much strength. Go Kagome!!!! Terrific job. But where's the hentai? LOL (just kidding)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice intro to one of my favorite characters, Kirara. So typical of Kikyo to think that she has Inuyasha wrapped around her finger when he starts to prefer Kagome. Can Kikyo sense the portals too like Kagome can or is Kagome the only one that can? Can't wait to find out the answer to that and the other questions I have and am sure I am going to have before this ends. Keep up the good work. The only problem I had with this chapter was the first letter or symbol of each line was cut off. I could tell what was going on by context but you might want to find out why before more gets cut.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kirara joined them... really cute... and inuyasha & kagome seem to be getting closer... as for kikyo what trouble will she bring along with her this time... hope inuyasha realizes that kikyo is just using him... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Enter Kirrara
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:02 CST
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Aw! What an awesome way to introduce us to Kirrara. That was very sweet. You also managed to lay the Kikyo/Kagome struggle. (grin) I'm looking forward to your next installment.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 19:28 CST
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And the gang is almost complete! Again, nice to see IY and K growing closer and relying on each other. I like that you're not rushing this. Lot's more to look forward to that way!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo i just wanna slap Kikyo lol n'awwww Inuyasha and Kagome are getting closer ^^ CUTE :P ooo and with the last chapter, some words were cut off, jus tto tell you
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked that chappie, And I'm glad Kirara is in the group as it should be! Nice update!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 18:20 CST
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she doesn't want yash why should she care if he had a relationship with kagome. is it the 'i don't want him but he should have no one else' syndrome? . . . a new addition to the group. . . good chapter, falling asleep can't type, words are coming ot all jumbled. ~ g'nite, ginny
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolio! Kagome's polite-ness comes in handy again! Please keep updateing!
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 10:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG keep going = )
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice update... they finally met totosai... kagome once again has helped inuyasha... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 15:29 CST
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i love the totosai character, he is just so innocently belligerent and i believe he's much stronger than he lets on. you wrote him well. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Title: From Author
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 15:23 CST
Comment/Review:
The true spelling is Tessaiga - literal from the Japanese. See link below: http://www.ear-tweak.com/iy_manga/mg_attacks.htm
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 10:39 CST
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plz update soon that was a awesome chapter
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