| "This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First let me say congratulations on all the reviews. I saw it topped 300 when I hit the "Write Review" option. Now for my review: YEAH an update. I was intrigued by Sesshomaru's reaction to Inuyasha and crew joining the fight. Fluffy seemed mellow for being pre-Rin (I believe she is the skulking figure there at the end). I mean he didn't try to kill Inuyasha and take Tessaiga immediately, or when Inuyasha was vulnerable while descending from the portal over the battlefield. I am not surprised at Kikyou's actions upon arrival, can I put a vote in that she meets a nasty surprise and has to be saved by Inuyasha or better yet Kagome soon. She needs to be humbled some. I can't wait to see how you handle Goshinki and Inuyasha's battle. Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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... i wonder whoes hand that is O.O
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad they found the portal... but seems that kikyo found them again and so fast too... whose hand did kagome see through the portal... was it midoriko?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting way to get Kikyou there. She is as arrogant as she was in the middle of the manga before she learned humility in the end. Inuyasha isn't going to be pleased when he realizes that she put a tracker on them. I do feel sorry for Inuyasha about all of his property getting destroyed though. I am not surprised that it was Miroku who started to make the comment about portals and oni attacks before they were attacked. Now the question is whose hand was reaching, Kagura's, Sango or Miroku's or someone else's hand? Can't wait to find out.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic... I'm just getting a bit bored with waiting for the Inuyasha 'n Kagome romance... can't wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Poor InuYasha, his eating habits are off....
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo so shes hiding on the demons world... sneaky :P
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice segue to them all being in the demon world. Poor Inuyasha is losing so much money fixing houses he is going to have to do a singing tour when he returns just to pay for the repairs. I can't wait to see how they all deal with this place. It will also be interesting to see how Sango deals with being seperated from Kohaku for so long. I am curious how you are bringing others from the series in and how they are introduced.
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Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 15:48 CDT
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I was so happy to see an update! I didn't notice one at IY-FF, so I read and reviewed here instead. This was an emotional chapter with an exciting ending - back to the Realm! Poor Inuyasha's houses... Please, don't let all the other stuff get you down - and try not to feel too bad about being disqualified: I was qualified in MediaMiner's fiction contest but didn't even get a runner-up position. However, I've nominated you over at IY-FF for a few categories. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... good that kagome found a clue... so they're going back to the demon realm... will anyone else follow them... what or who will they find this time... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 13:28 CDT
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sorry for your troubles, hope everything resolves favorably. *hugs* hope you enjoyed my attempt in photoshop. . . good chapter. one still wonders if there is a leak or a homing device on yash and kagome that naraku knows their whereabouts all of the time. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 18:02 CDT
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oops, change [dot] to . and remove the space in the word 'leather' near the end. i was playing in 'photoshop' with a picture of a male model in leathers... i changed the face hair skin and background, i thought you would like it.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 17:57 CDT
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 23:54 CDT
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Thanks for answering my Questions... And sorry for the bother... it's just that i'm currentLy reading another AU, and in that AU Kagome was surprised that she had miko powers. i just missed that... hehehe... Anyway, that doesn't mean i don't Like the story! Because your pLot is aLso awesome!
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 07:26 CDT
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What happened to Kagome's amazing powers? it didn't seem to show when she Launced an arrow in the demon reaLm...
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