| "This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 06:43 CST
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tucking him in, kissing him on the cheek and she didn't even pet his ears?! didn't even try to feel them? . . . poor guy, i don't envy the hangover and with his sensitive hearing... or anyone he interacts with. ~ ciao, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that inuyasha and kagome are getting along... so sesshomaru tried to get inuyasha's sword... and when kagome offered it to inuyasha was the only time they saw it transform... and inuyasha kissed kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 01:13 CST
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i take it that the magic words to get the sword to transform is "i'll protect you kagome!" . . . hey, the hero always has to kiss the girl after he vanquishes the foe! all of the adrenaline and endorphins pumping in a life or death situation could be extremely arousing. . . yash not only has to deal with his public persona and undercover work against naraku but he's got fluffy attacking him for his sword... if kagome has to deal with all of that too she deserves combat pay! ~ ja, ginny
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU MAN YOU ROCK. Anyway I say that was the best chapter yet hope there is more = )
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*breaths quickly* OMG hes nearly kiss her!!! OMG
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 15:00 CST
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i like the take charge and force yash to show compassion. like the typical guy he never thinks of the 'nice' or the 'right' thing to do, like visit sango in hospital to show support, get a card. she's making him a better person and it seems that he'll slowly come to that conclusion... eventually even anticipating her response. . . i love the slow build up. . . although there's nothing wring with the quick whirlwind in the right context. ~ always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... well seems that kagome is slowly piecing everyone together... and how and why they are together... kagome still hasn't a clue... hope she will be helpful and useful though... is kagome a miko here?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 06:35 CST
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How you manage to cram so much info into chapters that I would usually consider short I will never know. Sorry about not reviewing the other two separately I got caught up in some stuff. But thanks for the email. It lets me know that I have done what I have set out to do. Properly critiquing your story and helping you. However the true praise goes to you. You have successfully written Kikyo in perfect form. She plays to win while walking that fine line of being helpful and non-helpful. Seriously, a big prize goes out to you because not only did you do it but you do it perfectly. (Which is so hard to accomplish only a few authors are capable of doing it.) I see Kagome is determined to keep up a professional air. Good for her, I would have given up by now. So is she going to be one of these assistants that remain immaculately dressed despite that fact that there employer makes them do things that should make them look a complete mess? (…You're not going to make her suffer because I said that are you?) If wearing Kikyo's hand-me-downs bother her she should get some of her own. I know she won't ask Inuyasha for more. Hm, I think that's all I wanted to say this time. (Wow I didn't say much. Me not being long winded is always a phenomenon.) Well, maybe just one more comment. Sango in at the hospital, Miroku's hand, nanotech…when we all clicked on this story I think we got a lot more than we planned on.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 05:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems kagome has some questions that need to answered... she's still trying to figure out everything that comes with her job... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 01:34 CST
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ooh, ooh! she's working for a 'rock star' she doesn't have to dress all professional she should wear jeans, biker boots, and leather chaps! maybe a leather bustier under that jacket... oh those were the days. i would have to lose whole `nother person if i wanted to wear anything like that again =/
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 01:23 CST
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and quick too... it's been a long long time since i've ridden on a motorcycle, it's one thing of another life that i really miss. . . he seems to go a bit out of his way to accommodate his assistant's requests, wondering if he doesn't like having her falling against him in elevators and straddling his back while on his bike... reminiscent of the favored transportation in the sengoku jidai canon. ~ as always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I absolutly love you. You are the best writer i've ever read from. = )
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 16:26 CST
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i think that you are one of the most prolific authors out there. it's amazing how you are working on a few stories at once and they are all so well written and entertaining. sorry, i'm still jumping between two unreliable pc's, sometimes they shut down in the middle of writing a review, i can't count how many times i have had to write one over again. i just want to make sure i get them posted. if you're reading this then this stupid thing didn't shut off yet. yay! i envy your imagination, creativity and sense of humor and it's a pleasure to read your work. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I LOVE YOU. Dude you rock my sox. Because Your story just keeps getting better.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not log in) On: November 20, 2007 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo strange dream XD
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