| "This Wasn't In The Job Description" Reviews/Comments [ 332 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 15:53 CST
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i fixed one of my computers all by myself, now i can review!! . . . kagome, the poster child for the boy scouts... always prepared! (i don't know the girl scouts' motto) . . . as always, great story! ~ peace, ginny
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Title: Chapter 23
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course I had to read it again. I just loved the part: "It was so good to snuggle against his strong, warm back" reminds me of how she always rides on his back. Ah memories... gets me all tingly inside. I wonder if Inuyasha and Sesshomaru fight like in the manga and Rin finds Sesshomaru. How I love how you coincide the original with your story. I'll await your next chapter with urgency. Keep up the terrific work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... wonder what will happen when they reach sesshoumaru's castle... it would be good if inuyasha & sesshoumaru got along a bit better... hope kagome's ankle gets better... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I can't wait to read more! Don't forget to update!!!
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet again another wonderful chapter. I just loved how Inuyasha was mesmerized by Kagome's wet shirt! And how he is such a gentleman giving her his jacket. I loved how she smiled up at him and how he smiled at her. Ah... Love is in the air... Oh, and I loved how Inuyasha told Miroku to give Sango his jacket! It Inuyasha didn't intervene, perhaps Miroku would have offered his body as protection! LOL! And still the mystery person is not revealed. I am guessing it's Kikyo because she's the only person missing that makes sense. And of course she's the thorn in Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship so it makes sense she would be there to cause havoc. Thanks for the chapter update, you really do have a wonderful story here. (Sorry for not posting this yesterday) oh, and.... YOU ROCK!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 13:04 CST
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oi, roxy! good chapter. yash, the gallant gentleman mesmerized by the wet t-shirt... chivalry isn't dead! ~ the best to you and yours! peace, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... inuyasha is getting more drawn to kagome... who is the watcher that followed inuyasha's group... what will happen to them in the demon realm... update as soon as you can... please and thank you! Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, Inuyasha is so sweet!! LOL but Im VERY curious who rhe mysterious lercker is? But um date soon. This is one of my FAV stories xD. I know Kagome really wasn't expecting this to be in the job description!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2007 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha Miroku would have been in heaven seeing Kagome and Sango in their underwear XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... action between inuyasha & kouga was good... who was the watcher... will they get back through a portal... hope kagome finds her bag, bow and arrows... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock as always
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! Another wonderful chapter so quickly!!! Roxie you are the update QUEEN! This time a mystery.. who's the person who went through the portal, I wonder... I loved how how Inuyasha caught Kagome, but they all feel in anyway. LOL. Your story gets better and better and better!!!!!! Thank you very much for writing it. I am so enjoying every single bit of it. There isn't anything that I don't like!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... with the leads they're getting the action seems to be coming in more... and kagome has fallen for inuyasha?... inuyasha seems to be possessive with kagome... what's up with kouga... wonder what happens next... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 04:34 CST
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And let's get ready to rumble! So in character, all snarly and murderous a/b other males b/f he's even made a claim! Gotta love him though, 'cause you know when he does make a move, watch out!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 01:44 CST
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@_@ Miroku on a motorcycle trying to grope Kagome!!! Talk about dangerous!!! But hillarious at the same time! I loved the update, KEEP IT UP!The reintroduction of the ever eager ookami youkai is quite funny too! I enjoyed the scenery despite the fact I've never been on a motorcycle very fast I could feel the wind blowing through my hair...*sigh* quite a lovely feeling too...
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