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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 22:10 EDT
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Hm, I thought I'd reviewed. I do know you've been busy, but that doesn't mean I shouldn't let you know how the chapter came across to me. It might help you with the next chapter. You have no idea how many times I've tried to write this review. It's difficult to do it without believing that I might hurt your feelings or sound condescending, but here goes. I think that you may have lost touch with your characterization of Kagome. Kagome is forgiving and protective, yet she ran roughshod over her friends when she became angry. Her feelings about leeching are no excuse. She gave friends' motivations and feelings no consideration at all. Then, though the guys believed that she would do anything to save Sesshoumaru, and you led us to believe them, she seems all to willing to let Sess die if he's an asshole when he changes forms. So, that was a disappointment. I would expect her to have her doubts, but it sounded as though she would be more than willing to let him die if he didn't please her, which makes her sound selfish, spoiled, and shallow. Perhaps more focus on what she might plan to do to help their relationship/situation would have dispelled that impression. As it is, she's leaving all the work to Sesshoumaru and discounting herself as part of the equation. She even doubts her feelings when she has always been shown to have faith in them, i.e., her decisions trust in her feelings that her friends were fated to be her friends. *thinks* Maybe the focus on Sesshoumaru has slighted insight into Kagome's thoughts and feelings. I'm not sure. Right now, I see her as a spoiled brat, even with the petting. So, that's the impression that the chapter gave me. I want to slap her. On to other things. Aw, we got to see Sess being loving toward her. That was sweet. Humph! Sesshoumaru's beast sure is keeping him on a tight leash. I'm sure you have your reasons though. Poor guy, having to use the yard as bathroom facilities. I feel sorry for him. You must really hate Kouga. *snicker* You never give him a break. Nevertheless, in this fic, he's a great antagonist and he deserved what he got from Sesshoumaru. Heheh. I love Jak. He's such a perverted cutie. The rare scenes with Sesshoumaru wooing Kagome as a vampire, are very hot, as was the kissing scene when his beast freed him for a few minutes. I was in love with Inuyasha's character until he pulled that stunt with Sesshoumaru. That was a Naraku style move. I don't trust him very much now, nor do I like him. Motivated by insecurity or not, he can join Naraku in hell for all I care. I love Inupapa's character. He's a riot. He must trust Kagome an awful lot because he doesn't seem to be fretting too much about Sesshoumaru. I'm a parent and would be worried sick, regardless of the fact that my child was responsible for his mess. I would be constantly calling to check up on him. Then again, I'm a worry wart when it comes to my kids. Despite my whining, I love this story and can't wait to see what your next move will be. You have a talent for keeping me on pins and needles. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Kagome1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 02:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my gosh I have followed this story for Fanlib.com to A Single Spark.com to Fanfiction.net and then here I just couldn't let go of this story its just so unique and so in and out of character. Cause Sessh won't show his feelings (in character) but there's something that can actually kill Sessh (out character) But of course the only thing that can kill him is within him (in character) but he loves a human Kagome at that, the women who is supposiblly Inu's wench. (out character). But even with the in, out, of character its is just so awesome. I like long stories but not many long stories can keep my attention. Stories longer than 15 chapters get my attention but can't keep it but I never lost interest in this story, I was on here every day watching fr new updates. Well once again your story is awesome and like ever person before me has said Continue very very very very soon please.
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Title: Love it...
Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2008 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have recently gotten back interested in Inuyasha fanfiction. I stopped because I could not find many good Sess/Kag (my favorite pairing) stories anymore. This one has definitely dragged me back! I love your originality, and the story just gets better and better! I am officially a fan of yours, so as always, update when you find the time. I'll be waiting. ^_^
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Reviewed By: f.l. secret On: July 31, 2008 01:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely fic you have here, I've been reading for years and this is an exceptional amount of originality! I'm so glad people are still writing good Sess/Kag fics! I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the culmination of this story wholeheartedly. Although I am wondering about Naraku, and whether or not he fits into this somehow. Keep writing, all my love and encouragement. ~ f.l. secret
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 13:22 EDT
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oooo nice. I'm really looking foward to the next couple chapters of this fic. Especially now that its starting to move forward at a better clip. Go Jak! That boy's got issues, but they seem to put him in the right place to help Kags in this instance. *grins*
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Title: God
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No way! T-T i love this story so much! i started reading it yesterday, and i finished just now >.< this is so amazing i want to cry. I hope i find someone like that.....anyway, you are truly amazing. *huggles* never stop being you^^
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 02:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you updated! This was such a wonderful chapter I don't even have the words to praise it appropriately... but that's probably because I'm dead tired and can't think of the words. I spent the entire day cleaning and moving furniture... not fun. Reading one of the best new chapters in my favorite fanfic by my favorite author was a great way to relax after that long day!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 00:09 EDT
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My two cents: I definitely agree with snowbirdyoukai. Kagome has no reason to be so upset with the boys. I'd love to have friends who would take their time and money to help me relocate (be it in a new apartment or their own home). While they shouldn't have hidden it from her, why they did so is obvious. The way she reacted makes her seem ungrateful.
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY some headway! Mou, I thought we'd never get to this part. This was, by far, the best chapter. Hazzah for Jakotsu-Kagome convos. And I want to thank you for not making Jakotsu some overly flamboyant character (though I wish some of his original anti-fem ways were still present. --a crazy Jak is the best kind! ^o^-- Maybe round the other girls?). *gives you a cookie* Well, in any case... Great chapter. A lot of explanations were given and a lot of questions were brought up. Hopefully, you'll address some of them as well as keep with this line of events for a few chapters. As informative as the flashbacks are, I definitely prefer the chapters that take place in the present. So... Til next time~ *wavies* JA MATA! ^o^ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad to see that you updated! Awesome as usual!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 20:24 EDT
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so cute, by the way what type of half demon are bank and jan
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:36 EDT
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poor kagome, thinking it was a dream. i wish sesshomaru would of told her that it wasn't although i guess he is still afraid that she will reject him. i hope she doesn't stay angty with the boys for to long, they were only watching out for her. update again soon. i want to know kagome's reaction to the surprise that the boys were working on for her.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The wait was well worth it. I really wish Kagome didn't think she dreaming. :fans herself: What a steamy dream it was... Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: barely breathing On: July 19, 2008 12:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next update...
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories!! The ending is sad, omg they belong together can they get 2 minutes please! Inc and Bank need girlfriends so Kags can get some space and Miroku needs. . . help, but anyway sessh and Kagome need to get together like NOW. and as cute as Kagome thinks he is as a dog he needs his body back so he can continue what they started there! I wish sessh lucks we winning her heart and I hope be can do it soon.
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