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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 09:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter. Hope to see another update soon.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 07:16 EDT
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omfg that was sssssooooo sad! update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww that was so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayyy another chapter! I hope Sesshoumaru can make Kagome realize that it wasn't really a dream, that he really does have feelings for her. I love this story so much, I hope you can update it again soon!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2008 02:18 EDT
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so cute, kagome got to sleep with seshy puppy. now she has to realize that it wasnt a dream.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Sesshoumaru went through some serious butt kicking boot camp. It kind of reminds me of some of the Maury episodes...you know the ones where the teenage girls with attitudes end up going to boot camp or jail for a day. Heh, I'd probably start blubbering like they do...but I'm over with my teenage years so I think I'm in the clear. Anyways *sorry for babbling* great chapter even though Sesshoumaru's mother was a spiteful, money grubbing, drama queen leech. Keep up the excellent work ^_^
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I just finished reading the whole story so far and I love it! I've not read very many stories where Sesshoumaru is portrayed this way, as not being the total "in control of everything" figure like in most stories. I'm desperately waiting on more updates with this and SWTPF, as they are both amazingggg stories!
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 22:31 EDT
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Hah, the end of this chapter is hillarious... bootcamp, that's rich...keep up the good work. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 12:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ *sigh* Ya have to hurry and write another chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret(logged off) again On: April 27, 2008 11:58 EDT
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oh and i have to agree with Tueske this is the best sess/kags pair of 2008 XD
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret(logged off) On: April 27, 2008 11:56 EDT
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omfg please update soon!!i need to know if sess-sama will change back while kagome is asleep..... that would be funny/cute! or if sessy-sama is curled up against her when she "acidently" fell asleep on his bed....AHHHHHHHHHHH i can't wait to see what happenes next XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 06:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good nameing!!111 best line "He liked his limbs where they were, nicely attached to his torso."
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 01:10 EDT
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Wicked lady!!! OOOOO! I hated people like that, so full of themselves and bitterness. I hated he was poisoned like that, but at least he met a pretty girl, lol! Loved. It. Next chap more mushiness, hehe. Update when you can!!
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 00:40 EDT
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very interesting chapter! and i love how you give the name translations at the end :)
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 20:20 EDT
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Unfortunately, those types of situations can be all too common, and it happens with both parents. It is sad that it had to happen to Sesshoumaru. I hope it is something that he can come to understand. Thanks for the insight. I was very excited to see this chapter. ^_^ Thanks for being fast on the updates. I'm anxious to see what is happening in the present. I wonder if Inuyasha even knows what happened to Sesshoumaru and how all of this will affect their relationship. It's sad that they missed out on a happy childhood together. Poor, confused, little Inuyasha. It appears that their lives have been entwined from very young ages. Strange? Or fortuitous? Hm. ^_^ Snow
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