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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 22:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually a very nice story. It is rather sweet how all these males are so fond of her and how she is so fond of them. I am looking forward to the next chapters. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 18:45 EST
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*giggles* what a way to meet Miroku. LOL. But its cute. I'm looking forward to seeing more tales of this bunch as you go along. Keep writing! DD
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Title: Outstanding
Reviewed By: LadyOfFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 17:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your storie it is verywell writin please keep it up I look forword to seeing more and I loved the newest chapter. you have a fine talent for this. Thank you for writing it Ladyoffire
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Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly Fabulous! I can't wait for the car ride with Sess and Kags! oh and please add me to the update list! greenjacketlover@live.com thanks!
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 03:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO! Loved it! Jak cracks me up!! Can't wait to see what they do to her room...the chapter before this one was great too! Keep it up, you rock! ^_^
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is something I can relate to entirely. I grew up with two brothers and a male cousin that never left my side. I was the 'little sister' to all of their friends. I can totally relate to the jealously part. It was like, any girl that they ever got close to them tried to make them hate me so I would go away. I can totally relate to Kagome. Especially the protective part. I love this story. I hope Sesshoumaru gets some good news from daddy soon. He's so miserable. Poor guy...
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tba- harsh. ~sessh-i know. thats my life- drinks cup of coffee-ah. ~tba- should u b doing that? ~sessh- dont care- sip- ~tba- but theres alot of- ~sessh- dont care. ~tba- but.. ~sessh- sip- leave me be. ~tba- uh.. im trying to say.. ~sessh- wats with her? ~tba- -_-* stop ignoring me! ~sessh- sigh-sip- chicks. ~tba- -_-* update ... soon! im going 2 heve to teach him to b civil. ~sessh- did u say something? ~tba- growl- thats it! -THUD.- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 08:58 EST
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I just really love the interaction with the guys. It's so perfect! Do you have brothers or just a lot of guy friends? Either way, good job!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: February 13, 2008 08:12 EST
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I love it... I love it... I love it... I love it... You are absolutely cruel! *snicker* Sess is almost human in his characteristics and attitude. And most definately shows human flaws of foot-in-mouth disease...lol I love it all. It is becoming addictive... just like my morning tea and paper... I am loving how well rounded and thought-out your character's backgrounds and behaviours are. I don't think that I have seen a more perfect representation of Bank, especially as a main character. I am really enjoying this story...
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yippieee!!!! More Sessoumaru torture! The roomies throwing themselves at the guys... man that was just spot on, sistah. You couldn't have gotten that more realistic if you tried (except for the 'I smell four guys on you' part, of course). Yep, Sessoumaru's being an ass.. again. :)
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 15:26 EST
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Maybe Sesshoumaru and Kagome and come (cum) together... wa wa wa..... I about did a spit-take on my monitor when I got to the end of the chapter. You know you just set up a sex talk between Inupapa and Sess, right? Oh dear god. For the first time ever, the main character in the story needs a lemon worse than the readers do... LOL! Hopefully Inuyasha will reign Jak in when Jak does his decorating, because something tells me Jak is more girl-y than Kagome. LOL... I love it! The phone call between Sess and his dad and the phone call between Jak and Miroku were the best moments ever.
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 04:07 EST
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Oh lord. what a great chapter! i love this story...
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, you are never one to disappoint! LOVE how this story is going! Poor Sesshoumaru, he is having such a rough time with 'the syndrome' and im super curious about what his father has to say about it. I hope he and Kags get a little closer when they go to dinner together. Keep up the GREAT work!! See ya. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the last bit! Sessy needs help!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, poor Sesshoumaru. :( Hopefully he wakes up before someone needs to use the phone. I wonder how Katsuro will react when he finds out who Sesshoumaru is reacting to... Inuyasha could always just go to the store and buy a new bandana to protect his pretty little ears. I wouldn't want Jakotsu fondling me either! lol I really don't think it's possible for Kagome to not find out what they are doing.... no one has even told her that she's being evicted yet! I look forward to the next chapter. I wanna know more about Bankotsu's demonic marking... and does Jakotsu have his stripes (I always thought they looked like tear tracks) too or is it just Bank? I'm sure whatever stuff is in the next chapter will be good though even if I do have to stay patient for may answers *pouts a little* Well I hope you post it soon!
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