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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 15, 2008 19:48 EDT
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So good...so good! I really enjoyed this chapter if you couldn't tell. Shippo's story was sad with the foster homes. I know kids who have gone through stuff like that and it really makes me mad..you can place your own string of profanity here. I love the fact that they went to a carnival! I had a gift bought like that for me at one once as a surprise so this chapter brought back some fond memories. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 15:49 EDT
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poor shippo, i wonder what he did as soon as he received his money? did he help out his nice foster parents, did he give kagome money, did any of his friends even know he would be a millionaire? poor sess having to go to a fair and sneak around to see kagome.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally we learn about Shippo! That's a good story for him too. Sad, but good. At least Shippo's story gets a happy ending... as much of an ending as a 14 year old high school senior can have to their story. The thought of Sesshoumaru at the fair was really funny and I'm glad that he got another nice 'stalker date' with her. This time it didn't have a bittersweet ending. That's nice. Oh, yeah I can just imagine that bug burly guy from the panther demon tribe running a booth at the fair. I don't know if that's who you had in mind, but the thought of Sesshy having to ask a panther demon for anything, especially one from that tribe is kinda funny. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. The last present chapter left a tight feeling in my throat. Kagome is going to be supper pissed at Inuyasha once she finds out what he did... well I would anyway. I'd be pissed at them all.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm addicted to your story. Wonderful and exciting. I'm interested to see how this ends up! I found it highly amusing that sesh would 'lower' himself to attend the fair. I can only imagine him creeping in the dark corners, trying to stay undetected. Funny mental picture if I do say so myself! Keep up the great work. I will be patiently waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually rate, but your coordination of this chapter was wonderful...or maybe it's because I've finally found my favorite scent. Yup, sure did. Aw, poor Shippou. I know what you mean about the system, too. Just think of all the kids who can count on being homeless once they graduate. Kinda sucks. We now know Shippou's story, which was a bit depressing then the chapter began to lighten up. The true adventure began when there were the clandestine and unexpected meetings that Sesshoumaru set up. I really liked it. Sesshoumaru's adventure at the carnival, being able to be with Kagome, was all so beautiful. It didn't matter a bit that they truly weren't visiting each other. It was enough for him. It made him happy. I'm a bit confused though. Was 'Butterfly' what she had said? And if so, what was she referring to? I'm definitely reading it again. I'm hoping that these meetings will play a role with what is to happen next between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. sigh. And Inuyasha hasn't a clue of the things that Sesshoumaru has shared with Kagome. This makes me wonder what other things he has done for her. It has been four years after all. There must be many more chance meetings and gifts. I would hope so and it would be nice for you to share a few...hint, hint, wink, wink. You painted the picture too well for me to not do a little begging. The imagery was well done. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 12:49 EDT
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i love your stories, everytime i get on here i'm always looking to see if you updated. but you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for swtpf. hope your writers block unblocks itself soon...i know how frustrating it is.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I am so mad at Inuyasha and so disappointed with Shippou! I can understand Inuyasha's anger at Sesshoumaru but if he really did care for Kagome like he SAYS then he would step aside and let her make her own decisions. I'm so not excusing Sesshoumaru either (he could have handled it better) but Inuyasha did deserve it. And Shippou I don't know what to say but I'm a little disappointed =(. Oh and I can't wait to see how and when Kagome & the guys meet Shippou =). Great chapter too! Sorry if I seem to be whining over the chappie but *cries* I'm just so upset with all the guys! Until the next update I'll be re-reading the Halloween chapter *cries while reloading chapter...now am grinning and blushing*
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 00:17 EDT
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aww, Kagome was much too hard on Sess who is such a cute doggie. I hope Sess gets to have proper revenge against Inuyasha for that little setup.
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter!!!! *sigh* ....poor Sesshoumaru. He's so misunderstood! But man....Inuyasha and Shippou call themselves Kagome's friends, but they're really standing in the way of her finding her soul mate! I wonder just when they'll realize that and come to their senses! Oh my gosh....you're going to do the Shippou chapters next! I've been wanting to read about how Kagome and Shippou met for a while now!Thank you so much for updating, escpecially just 2 days after a new chapter! Great job, I can't wait to read on!
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 13:58 EDT
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That's fricking rediculous! Someone should have told her it was Inuyasha's fault!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 11:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kinda mad at Inuyasha right now. He's being extremely harsh. And Sesshoumaru needs to do something about the way he treats people. If Kagome thought that he would always be mean to Inuyasha and the others, she would never go for him, even if she did find out that she was his soul mate. :sigh: I hope he gets his act together. Hey, when is Sesshoumaru going to be Sesshoumaru again?
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Reviewed By: VampiricTears666 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 10:09 EDT
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I never thought I'd ever be mad at Shippo, but I am now! So cruel to poor Sesshy! He and Inuyasha both! Can't wait for the next chappy though. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (at hell aka School) On: April 09, 2008 04:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 04:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know... I've never been pissed at Inuyasha before. I AM NOW!!!! WTF!!!! Ooooo that was SOOOOO evil what he did to Sessy! And Shippo not helping was even worse cuz not sayin anything IS interfering. But other than that it was awesome, nice lime/fluff action but Inuyasha ruined that too!! Can't wait for the next chapter update when you can. OH, yeah, after Shippo's past are there anymore past chapters, cuz everyone's history will be known then. Just curious!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 03:16 EDT
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that was so mean of inuyasha and kagome doesnt even know why sesshomaru acted like that. is sesshomaru's mom going to appear? if he and inuyasha are only a year apart then i'm assuming that his dad and mom divorced not that his mom died and his dad found someone else so very quickly.
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