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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 02:39 EDT
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I really love you, Sunset! I know this is going to sound very corny, but you are quite honestly my favorite author (and, no, I'm not just saying that I; really, really mean it). I favorited every single one of your fics and I put you on my Favorite Author's list (though it should be THE Favorite Author list ;) ). I love how you put emotion into your writing and you make it seem believable. I really like your characterizations of everyone, especially Sesshoumaru since he's pretty much the hardest person to develop a personality with! I would love to become a writer someday, if not for other people then for my own enjoyment, and you very much inspire me so much that I want to write in everything your style. All of the songs you used in this fic I've actually never heard of before, and if I have then I hadn't really listened to it. I looked them all up on Youtube and put them all in my favorites ;P I'm normally not fond of songfics or just plain fics with lyrics in them, but you incorporate them into your writing very well and they fit the situation. I normally don't write reviews for fics all that often as I'm usually very reserved and I'm honestly too lazy; I just like a good read. However, I deem you review worthy, which is saying a lot because unfortunately I have high standards when reading (and just look at the length of this review, too; wow, I like you more than I originally thought :P)! I may have reviewed for you a couple times before, but I honestly don't remember because I don't do it all that often. Just wanted you to know that I absolutely adore you and your writing. I am a hardcore Sess/Kag fan and you hit all of my favorite aspects of a good Sess/Kag fanfic right on the head (including the sex appeal, which is always a bonus; you make great lemons). Wow, I really rambled on. Sorry for wasting your time. One more thing, though, is that you have to see this pic on DeviantArt of a human Sesshoumaru (you're going to love it, or at least I hope you do!). It's amazing and it's by jbramx2 and it's called "Something's Wrong...". Check it out: http://jbramx2.deviantart.com/art/Something-s-Wrong-24233048 Until next time! Ja mata ne! ;)
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_o I can't believe that Inuyasha did something so down and dirty like that!!! *hmmph* I'm so mad! I want Sesshoumaru and Kagome to be together! And I don't want him to die! Please hurry and update! Wonderful fic by the way!
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 00:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOhhhhhh, you are the devil incarnate!! Great chapter! You definitely know how to make the reader want more. Good job!
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, I LOVE this story! And yes, I'm pissed at "the guys" lol. I have older guy cousins who once threatened to beat up a cute freckled-face kid who asked me to dance at a wedding reception...we were 10!!! Ignore all the complaints and whining. Your story is wonderful. I love the way you change between past and present. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Jekka On: April 08, 2008 22:00 EDT
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Oh geez. they are complete (a)holes. You know what I mean.. I cant believe even shippo would be that low. I know that Sess can be a butt sometimes but lordy lordy, to just let him die.. Im sure though Kagome will kill them when she finds out, lol.. I cant wait to read the next chapter. I hope you get time to update soon.. Awesome job so far
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story. Inuyasha is such an ass right now, and Shippo they want her to be unhappy forever
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: April 08, 2008 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved this chapter... but man I HATE INU YASHA in this chapter.... I wanted to throw my dictionary at him...grrrr.... *scowls*. But it was a good chapter though. You had me on the edge of my seat. I couldn't believe that Inu Yasha had it in him to be this mean and enjoy it. He really wants his brother dead.. or at least is jealous enough to not care if sess dies... I don't want him to... *sniff sniff* I know you wouldn't do that... ^.^ You, at the moment, are the queen of drama.. Have you taken lessons from Striknig Falcon or Iloveprettysilverhair or rinseternalsoul by chance? lol... good job and congrats on the nominations.. you deserve it.. Chao chickie! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 20:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he could always ignore her as usual. some times when i ignore my dog he just sits some where and ignores me. when i say im sorry, he gives the that look that says 'leave me alone'. sure he's a dog. but you can really tell wat they r sayin if u try. but if amy dog's anry at me. he doesnt eat, and ignores everybody. ~sessh- he also gives u the face. `kags-yea. the puppy pout. i swear that dog isd evil! ~sessh-hm... dog is evil.tba is evil...OMG! she's contagious! ~tba-sigh*he always gives me that look. like he's trying to tell me he was hurt. and sad. *sigh* but still.he would frogive me. but... ~sessh-wait... how am i gonna eat? i am not eating from a bowl! ~tba-u have no choice. its either stay in ur room and starve to death. or eat from a bowl. ~sessh-hmmmm. *taps finger on chin* ~tba-... that was a retorical question. besides. scince miroku,shippo, and bankotsu dont want sessh to have any chances with kags they probably wont tell her the truth. besides. everyone can only handle so much intill the have to let it out.i dont get angry eisily by girls. boyz... are a diffrent story. but i guess he has never had someone do that to him. so he reacted in instinct. if an animal such as a wolf(cause even though he's a dog demon. wolves are in the dog family)if one tried to steal the other's meat, they would fight over it. and it would turn bloody. ~kags-O_O wat the hell?! im a peice of meat! ~tba-no... its just that if one stole something thats valuable from the other they would fight for it. sesshomaru attacked because of insinct. ~sessh-like its ur instinct to kill every dude who calls u a whore,bitch, and slut? ~tba-ur next sesshomaru. ~sessh-....i... i didnt mean it! ~tba- ill let it go.... this time.. update soon. caio. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: Crazy Mishka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 20:20 EDT
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Inuyasha...is an ass. I hope Kagome rips him a new one when she finds out he tricked her...especially if it seems she should be able to start understanding Sesshoumaru soon. I was all gungho about Inuyasha getting accepted and then he gives me a very good reason to be mad at him...sigh. It's too bad it was also a very realistic reaction to everything that was going on. Well, onward forth. (wondeing what Inu-papi will do if he discovers what happened)
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter! I've been following this story ever since I first found it, and frankly, it's one of the best if not the best I've ever read. I can't believe that people are complaining about the earlier chapters. I just love how those chapters tell me the background and explain how everything came to be. It's a very creative way of explaining to us, and it makes the story so interesting! And just ignore the people who hound you shamelessly for updates. I understand perfectly-fanfiction definitely isn't my top priority either. When there's spare time it's great to write, but honestly, everyone has a life away from here too. Again, great chapter, I just adore how you had Sesshoumaru be a vampire. I think that fits so perfectly for Kagome! Well then, til next time! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: tif On: April 08, 2008 19:43 EDT
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STUPID YASHA STUPID KAGSS POOR SESSH
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 19:41 EDT
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You are evil!!! But then again, I love death/angst scenes. Ooohhh. *shivers* Crossing my fingers. Inuyasha is a right out bastard. I can't believe him! I wouldn't be surprised if Sesshoumaru gave up and did what all dogs do; go find a hidden spot to die. I'm just so mad at him right now! And everything was going so good, too! Nice dream sequence. Hehehe. You make me want to cry for Sesshoumaru. Then again, the guy just can't seem to keep his temper in check. I wonder if Inuyasha's constant attitude problem has anything to do with that. I've also wondered if being in pain all the time is what has made Sesshoumaru become so bad. Maybe he wasn't so bad before? BTW, I hate romance novels, but love all that fancy talk from the men. It's only words, but they are sexy. So, if you want to go all Victorian on us again, feel free.
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Reviewed By: FirstMateWench On: April 08, 2008 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a story that i have been following like a religon....which aint a bad thing i just dont normally look at a story till its done, but i happened to be skimming the story to store for later and got hooked. being able to read about things that happened b4 is one of the best things to this story. it helps you understand things more about whats going on. i would be sad if you were to stop writting this story, but that would be your choice if people can understand that some people do have a life outside of writting even if they dont. but im looking foward to the next chapter when you get it out. Ja Ni!
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Reviewed By: Heathwe On: April 07, 2008 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that people are complaining about how you write. This has got to be my favorite story that I am reading right now. I literally squeal with joy when I get the notification that you've updated. I find that the past chapters increase the suspense of what is going to happen. Would the story be good without them...yeah....do they make the story even better....Hell yeah! So, keep writing but definately take care of your family...and don't forget to sleep sometimes!! :)
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: April 07, 2008 22:29 EDT
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oh... and one more thing.... can sesshoumaru and that evil little Vampire costume resurface sometime down the road... say in a little cosplay? since kags likes herself some fang... did I mention Sess in a LITTLE vampire costume....hehe...lol it would please all of us.. your fans who just happen to love sess and vamps...lol Tata InuPriestess
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