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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:32 EST
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Sesshoumaru passed out? Oh, that was so hilarious. I love it when authors do something to him like that. Poor guy. I really do feel sorry for him. You are torturing him with having Kagome move in. You're so horrible to him! LOL I just love how close you have all of the other characters. It is sweet. You make them all so real, too. I'm finding this story much too fun to read and can't wait to see the next chapter. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 22:42 EST
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That's gotta be embarrassing for Sesshoumaru. Passing out from something like that. LOL I'm looking forward to seeing who gets the next flashback chapter. Mayhaps Katsuro? *grins* that would just tickle me pink knowing that Kags had to worm her way into the elders of that family somehow. DD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He likes his tests doesn't he....
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeay! Another installment of Sesshoumaru torture! (Happy Dances!) This piece is growing on me... nice and light. :) Ima
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 18:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are a awesome writer i love both of your stories Sesshoumaru will have no problem with her moving as he can see her naked again =P
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Title: ChibiRin (offline)
Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 15:40 EST
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Oooo I wonder where she's going to stay? I think it's cute that she likes to where Bankotsu's clothes. I love to wear my brother's clothes all the time and I know they're just so comfy! Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: February 04, 2008 08:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awwww... Sess is always getting the short end of the deal... I love it!!!!! *cue evil grin* You make him seem cold and distant (as per usual) but with a huge hormonal imbalanace. I love it. You are great. Sess has the fluxuating hormones and attitude changes while he is still trying to be the calm and cold type. It is almost like he is going through puberty...lol HOw old is sess in this fic? with all of the chapters in the past, the ages of the main characters ellude me.. ^^' With lots-a-love...happy writing Chao Chickie... InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 00:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I'm so happy you updated! I just love this story. Why do I get the feeling that things will not be getting easier for Sesshoumaru for quite some time now?... For a second I thought that maybe Inuyasha had gotten a kiss from Kikyo and was trying to get rid of the taste and hopefully not catch something... lol maybe he takes those "dog breath" comments from Kouga to heart. I can't wait to see how things go from here, but I know we get to see more about their past first and that's fine, I can be patient. ...Well if you suddenly had the urge to post a chapter early I wouldn't be complaining or anything... =D but, um... yeah, I can be patient...
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 01:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Sesshoumaru he is so close yet so far to Kagome. add more soon D=
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 01:47 EST
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Great story! Although with no warning before the flashbacks it gets slightly confusing sometimes...
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter...i like how you take the time to explain their childhood friendship. i like to know the history that characters share. Please update soon.
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 21:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like the way you're developing the Bank/Kagome relationship. The flashbacks fit this story very well. I was only slightly disappointed that Sesshoumaru wasn't adequately tortured in this chapter, but in defense, he was quite tortured enough in the last chapter to carry us for two. LOL. I still got grins because this chapter shows just how difficult it will be to get Bank's stamp of approval, and in light of the previous chapter... whoa boy is he ever going to have to do something spectacular to win a date with Kagome. Even if Bank said yes, Sesshoumaru managed to eat his beautiful feet so that Kagome may not even say yes no matter WHAT Bank says. You know "the boys" are so going to make sure Bank knows about that little "peeping Sessh" incident in blow by blow bloody detail. LOL.... so in a way, you ARE torturing Sesshoumaru in this chapter because you just laid the groundwork for impossibility. This is not a complaint. If Sesshoumaru gets "the cure" to "the Syndrom" it will be all the more sweet for the hurdles he's jumped. Man, ain't love a bitch?
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 30, 2008 21:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Christina! I loved this chpter... The idea of Bank fawning over Kags like a big bro.. You got the big bro attitude down pat... ^>^ My own older bro is like a personal bodyguard when we go out anywhere. I swear he screens the guys that are allowed to come up to me and say hi... lol *giggles* My bro is 6 foot 5 inches. I dont even come to his shoulder...*sighs* gotta love bros. I *giggle* got quite a kick *giggle* out of the thought of Bank breaking Kouga's jaw for the FIRST time in the progressing years... I loved this chapter!!! *giggles* Anyway... keep the humour coming... oh and how wil kags meet Inu Yasha? Will me pick a fight with bank and win? or fail miserably and earn Kag's sympathy... (I would go with this one.... you would be able to humiliate Inu and get us to laugh at the same time!!! lol) Just a thought... ^^' Happy readings Chao Chickie! Inu Priestess
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Title: IT'S ALL YOUR FALT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 00:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOW I AM ADICTED TO THIS STORY AS WELL!!!!!!!!!!! But hey I'm not complaining...Keep up the good work..^_^...HAVE A NICE LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 27, 2008 11:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yea! Shower scene... *smiles* you are too nice.... You gave me the shower scene that I had hoped for. But you made it better!!! I love it! this scene was hilarious.... Thank you so much Christina...! *grins* I didn't know my idea would be helpful or not.... lol... (oh and if you were going to do this anyway before my last review...please do not dash my happiness) *grin* I am just kidding... IT was a great light and fluffy chapter. (very much simpler and more easy going that SWtPF) Ja Ne! InuPriestess (AKA Rose)
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